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Reviewer: Misty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 01:37 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Can I just say I was giddy to see a new update on this cause I did the whole girlie *Squee* thing. Loved this new update it was just perfect. Please add more when you can I am a POTDS fan.

Reviewer: Bloodplay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 01:05 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Hey, when i first started this story it made me feel really squicky, but i decided to give it a chance because it was different. i'm so glad that i did. you somehow manage to capture an incredible poignancy within the characters of Spike and Buffy and i really admire that. i can't wait to see where you bring them. :)
And just so you have my vote... Happy ending? please?

Reviewer: Frasisca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 12:01 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Oh god that was so cruelly evil. I've got to hand it to you though, best.cliffhanger.ever.
Now on with the next chapter? Hopefully fluff?

Reviewer: Spikesway Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 09:18 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Spike loves her!!!! So many things to like in this chapter like the bookstore to the beach and Spike taking her places outside of the gang and showing her himself. So the question is now what will Buffy do? They keep having small moments where she forgets why she hates him and hes trying to make up his mistakes but will she or wont she?
Must not keep me waitung in suspense to long thos os pne fic toy cant stop once your start. You just want to cry for them both to make it thu this.

Reviewer: flipsideghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 04:18 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Great banter and byplay of their sarcasm with underlining tones of caring. I liked this part best.
When she felt her hand being taken, she opened her eyes. Rolling them, she asked, “What do you think you’re doing?”


“Don’t think I don’t notice you creeping farther and farther away from me,” he gestured to the space between them.


“What? I haven’t even moved!”


“That’s what you say.”


She gave him an annoyed look. “That’s a lame excuse to hold my hand.”


It's like he doesn't want to not be able to read her and I liked this scene sction the best. Fantastic story telling and wonderful job. It's so hard not to beg for more with the real life cliff hanger you left on lol.
Excellent stoty

Reviewer: RecordBreakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 04:07 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Such pain and heartbreak and a chance of love all the mixing for a Spuffy romance. So she doesn't want to want* him. And she doesn't want him to change either. Darn it now I'm standing on The Spuffy Realm cliff here yelling at them both --->"Kids! Make love not gang war!" but I know they won't listen to me. I'm just dying to know how she will react to what he said PLEASE ADD MORE SOON! DON"T LEAVE US A HANGING LOL

Reviewer: purityhearts Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 04:00 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Couldn't believe it a new post on my most fav of fics
I'm reading this and it pulls you into every emotion from the start to finish
I even love reading the reviews on this cause it makes me look at it from others opinions and catch things I might of missed. I think Angelus was the call in the book store I'm so hlad this fic is back and want so badly to see more. Great job.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 03:53 am Title: As the Sun Sets

It would seem that the truth is finally out there. Couldn't she tell she was on a date of sorts and out to meet the closest thing Spike has to a family. And Giles telling her that she's reawakened the humanity in him. And he told her he loves her and she confessed that she wants him. A truly desparate pair. Just love watching them self destruct together. I can only imagine what her response to his confession is. I can hardly wait. Really am loving this story. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: taunted_past Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 03:51 am Title: As the Sun Sets

“I can change, I have changed. I can be a better man.”
She shook her head, lip trembling. “I don’t want you to be.”
I get the feeling that if she sees him as a better man and not as her victimizer she would have to dea lwith her real feelings for him.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 03:44 am Title: As the Sun Sets

Excellent! I love this story!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 03:41 am Title: Suspicion

YAY U UPDATED!!!!!! i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. i really wish buffy would see that spikes changing and that he cares for her. also im glad to see that spike isnt allowing himself to have sex with her and i wish she would see his reasoning behind it. i hope that angelus doesnt get ahold of buffy and that she starts to accept him more. also i hope that spike and buffy work everything out. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 03:25 am Title: Suspicion

That was amazing. The ways he's changing and the way's he's changed her and how those two things don't really mesh together very well. That push-pull dynamic is fascinating. Really loved that chapter.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

I love this story & I was disappointed when I thought you had abandoned it. Sooo glad you have started it up again. Please dont leave it as long for the next chapter. Hugs

Reviewer: lavenderjones Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 09:08 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Beautiful writing and worth the wait. 10 out of 10

Reviewer: darkkisses Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

I need a tissue
I need a box of them
I need another chapter

Reviewer: mandc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 09:04 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

I not a great review writer but I loved this and hope Buffy will realize why it is she wants sex with Spike and why she only wants him.

Reviewer: Jenshope Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:41 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

She could feel herself nearing the edge at the sound of worship in his voice. “Tell me you want me.”
“I want you,” he assured immediately as he rocked with her.
“Only me.”
“Only you,” he nodded, voice shaky as their eyes locked.

Great new chappie
This was the best part for me and says it all.Once Buffy figures herself out. Dying for more here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:41 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Good that cold water never will run out or Spike would have had a problem *g* So he tried not to sleep with Buffy but pleasing her? He really wants to show that he has changed. But maybe she noticed when she was kissing him?
And Spike took her with her to meet Giles. Mmm and is seems Spike has talked about her before. And if Buffy didn't notice that Spike has changed, Giles reminded her. And Spike surprised Buffy and took her to the ocean. But he never told her who called him.
Ah.. how bittersweet... Buffy is sad now because she wanted him and she doesn't want to. And then.. she doesn't really believe that Spike. She wants to go but Spike can't let her because he loves her.
I wonder what it will take to get better.

Reviewer: EpicsRance Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:32 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

(She shook her head, eyes glossy with tears as she moved farther out of his reach. “Don’t you understand? I begged you. How depraved do I have to be?”)
(“You’re not depraved.”)

I think coming to terms with either of them wanting the other and admitting it is such a hard thing to write and you did it so well my hat is off to you. Cause to admit that you would think your crazy but if you go back to the beginning she did have a interest in him before she met the monster in the man so to speak. What is unique in this story is the monster teaches her how to survive and she teaches the monster how to be human and in the meanwhile they do develop something in between.
How could he not love her she is everything he used to be and she reminds him of that. And in a messed up way he teaches her of the strength she never knew she had to survive and be no ones victim.
Everyone should read this.

Reviewer: Vo6 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:22 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Playing on the Darkside is back with a passion!
I started reading the opening of this and thought is this sex scene a dream? But then I see where your trying to show Spike not going after his own pleasures and just trying to give her what she needs.
It is now like we see more of Spikes human side and insecurities with his feelings towards her or just the fact he will allow himself to have feelings for her. I think Buffy has a lot to process but they are making some headway here and you just want to cheer them on to keep trying. I like how you wrote the part with Buffy's reaction to herself for allowing herself to realize she wants him. Now if they could work past hurting one another and get back to their original attraction to one another they might make it ok. In many ways both of them are standing on a cliff here and making a jump.

Reviewer: Pucca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:16 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Wow just wow so much goodness going on and I did not expect Giles he was a nice surprise and it is cool Spike is showing Buffy his other sides now if he can be that better man will be cool to see what goes on next.
Also...
I'm wondering if Harmony is in league with Angel thinking if she killed that girl Angel would protect her from the lackies.

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:02 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

My heart leaped into my chest just reading this it's so well done I could have cried. Please continue with this it is wonderful.

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:11 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Love love love loved it!!!!! thank you sooooo much; it was well worth the wait. can't wait for more.
_lindsay

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

wow that was def worth the wait...you got tears from me : (

Reviewer: Xuixxuix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 04:48 pm Title: As the Sun Sets

Ok talk about a Buffy cliff hanger! I'm dying to know what happens next.

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