That was so well written - you surely have the characters and dialogue down - but the literary merit to the story itself - your descriptions and story were top notch. I would love to read more. Thanks.

Well, I wasn't aware there were symbols to be looking for,but now I know this might become an even more interesting read than it is already. I like Spike not being led around by Buffy's little finger. And so far, you pull his character rather well, which I am grateful for. Off to read next chapter now.

Well, I wasn't aware there were symbols to be looking for,but now I know this might become an even more interesting read than it is already. I like Spike not being led around by Buffy's little finger. And so far, you pull his character rather well, which I am grateful for. Off to read next chapter now.

The storm was exciting and having the ghosts help out was a clever twist. This was a well written, atmospheric interlude in Spike and Buffy's relationship. Buffy's stubborn clinging to her anger and fear was tempered by the fear the storm brought to both of them. I'm looking forward to more in this series.

Again, really enjoying this one. Very believable Buffy and Spike; you have a great feel for their voices. "To her eyes, it suddenly looked as if he was about to cry. That surprised her. Somehow it hadn’t ever registered how deeply Spike was hurting because of the rift in their relationship. He was mentally curled up in the fetal position, lashing out at her to keep from being hurt himself. She’d always assumed he was simply angry with her because she’d rejected him – but no, Spike was just hurting. But damn it, so was she." Loved this passage. This story is genuinely creepy-- I mean that in a good way. I'm reading it on a cold, stormy day just before bedtime; and I find myself glancing into the corners. Brr! And I'm hoping to hear more about Galveston!

This is fascinating; I'm going to have to re-read it to make sure I get at least some of the symbols. I think I get the rain; and Spike's lighter seems pretty clear, but... And i love the idea of Buffy and Spike's road trip!

Oh honey, I need a epilogue....LOL......5 years later with a wedding....LOL! Great story and realistic of both of them when you really think about it.......great job

Really loved this. Can't wait for the next part of the series:)

Yeah... first time that Buffy discovers what it feels to be alone - even under people... especially Spike. Well, it's partly her fault. But maybe they can work it out, huh? Wonder if Buffy reactions are quick enough or if she'll have a mirror in her face - very soon :) TNX for updating here, too!

Sad to read how their fight started that brought them apart - but totally believable.

Excellent detail the the worsening storm and the location. I'm enjoying how unnerved both Spike and Buffy are. Can't wait to find out what happened to Spike in Galveston.

Wonderful atmosphere. Isaac's Storm, describing the Galveston hurricane, was a fascinating read for me last summer. Eager to see how the storm and their relationship develops. Very intrigued by the house. "Gaudy and excessive", "stifled much of the charm", "Maybe the house wasn’t so bad, after all"...hmm, interesting.