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Reviewer: jy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2005 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 10: 'Dream A Little Dream'

Enjoying your story very much. I'm a Damon Runyan fan myself.

Author's Response: Thank you. Runyan was a great writer who probably didn't get his due (what's new, huh?) I love the time period of his work and all the colorful characters he wrote about. spuf

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Dream A Little Dream'

NOOO!!!! i dont want them to break up or not be together, i really hate angst but it does make the story better. i reallly hope that they stay together and that angel and her dont gert back together even for a second its discusting(sp?) i LOVE this story and am so HAPPY that u updated. i really hope taht they become a familly, dawn and them and that buffy doesnt leave him agian. they belong together and should stay that way. please update as soon as u can, i cant wiat to read more and find out wat hapens between them and ange and see if they stay together( they better). thanx

Author's Response: As far as Spike and Buffy go...they're pretty much in this together for the remainder of this fic. Yes, they will have their problems, especially when Buffy finds out about the horse scheme. Dawn is the glue, don't worry, but I'll warn you, it's not the Spuffy part that will be the angst in the next few chapters. Thanks. spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Dream A Little Dream'

Sweet, sweet chap! Buffy's 'I love you' has taken me a bit by surprise 'cause I keep that "yet" from your last response in mind; so, I don't expect them walking on cloud no. 9 in the near future.. Update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to have Buffy reciprocate Spike's affection, immediately. No, cloud 9 is a ways off for them, but it's attainable, I promise. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Dream A Little Dream'

So glad to see the Spuffy! :) Started my day out right, thank you! :)

Author's Response: Good! It started mine out well too! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 10: 'Dream A Little Dream'

Thanks for the spuffy loving - loved it! Some good before the angst starts again, huh? Good to know that Spuffy will prevail….. ;-)

Author's Response: Your welcome. Buffy is under the dellusion that William has changed, overnight. She still isn't on to the horse scheme yet and it will play into Spuffy angst later. Don't worry, Spuffy will win out...it always does, right? Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Pauly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2005 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 9: 'Have I Told You; I Missed You?'

Oh finally, they got together. Knowing Buffy it probably won't be the easy way to happyness. I really hope they'll stay with each other. great chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, but don't look for a skittish Buffy too soon. Spike might stumble a bit, but Buffy will catch him before he falls completely! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2005 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 9: 'Have I Told You; I Missed You?'

Finally! lol Took them long enough. Very well done. More please!

Author's Response: Thank you. More Spuffy, I promise. spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2005 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter 9: 'Have I Told You; I Missed You?'

I wonder what happened to Drusilla - did Spike simply lost her? Or happened something to her (means - she got killed or so)... Oh no I see you wrote it. Poor Dru. I'm glad Buffy sees now the truth behind Angel - in this case what he did to Dawn's life. Hopefully it is enough for Buffy to think twice to stay his girlfriend. Buffy singing for Dawn? This was sweet :) And thanks for the little Spuffy!

Author's Response: Thank you. Angel was the one that set up the tragedy with Ted, but, ultimately Ted chose to do it. Threatened, yes, but chose it. Ted threw Dawn's considerations aside when he got mixed up with Angel. We all do this, we make our own decisions and ultimately pay the consequences for them. Drusilla was doomed from the start, sadly, and William did what felt he had to. He made the decision to do avenge Drusilla, then made the decision to get mixed up in illegal doings. Right or wrong, when 'we' choose what we do? We'll pay the price for it. Sigh, it's tough to be a human, huh? Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2005 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter 9: 'Have I Told You; I Missed You?'

Great chap! Hopefully, Buffy won't run the morning after....

Author's Response: Thanks. Don't worry, she won't...yet spuf

Reviewer: Lucas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2005 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter 9: 'Have I Told You; I Missed You?'

I don't get Buffy's logic here. She leaves Spike to what teach him a lesson about how to be a better person yet she gets with someone worse. What makes it worse is that Spike takes her back just like that. There has to be some kind of backlash for Buffy for leaving Spike. Spike isn't a bad person he's a puchover. I don't know if that was how it went in the movie but this seems a bit hard to believe.

Author's Response: I understand...Buffy's logic is confusing at times, but them I felt it always was. Probably a side affect of being a slayer. In the movie, Spike's character was basically a cheapskate and Buffy's character couldn't deal with it. Her character 'was' a gold digger through and through. His character was not really a bad guy, either, but, a pushover for Buffy's character and he still loved her. The character Angel is based on was a rich and powerful ganster type. I didn't want to make Spike a cheapskate or Buffy a real gold digger so I settle for a compromise. I know it's somewhat unbelievable but the movie was made in the 30's and was more fluff then hard edged mobster stuff. Damon Runyon wrote the original story (Guys and Dolls too) and this fic is based on that genre. Yes, Angel is worse then Spike, but Buffy doesn't love Angel, nor does she care about his heart or soul. She does however, love Spike and wants hiim to realize what a better person he is then what he does. Spike is not a saint in this story, his past is cloudy at best. I just don't write it all down because I want everyone rooting for him where Buffy is concerned. Dawn is the catalyst, she's the bond that Spike and Buffy can have to come back together. I promise, things will get angstsy again, but this is Spuffy. Thanks for reading and your insight into the story. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2005 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 9: 'Have I Told You; I Missed You?'

absolutely loved it

Author's Response: Thanks! spuf

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2005 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter 9: 'Have I Told You; I Missed You?'

AWWW how sweet, i loved it. im so happy that they got together and really hope that they stay that way. i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated.aww its going to be so sad wen they tell dawn about her dad and that hes not coming back but i hope that they stay together and become a familly. also i thought it was terible wat happened to dru , im glad that william got him back for it but i no that he still feels like it wasnt enough. i think its so wonderful how there back together and cant wait to read there relationship progress more. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next between buffy and spike and wat happens with dawn. thanx

Author's Response: Thanks. I know this is a sugary kind of story, but it's how the movie was, really. I am so glad you're enjoying the story. spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 8: 'The Charger'

I'm glad that some spuffyness is ahead. I have enough of Angel and Buffy, really ;-) Poor Dawn - it really looks like not only that her father is dead, it seems as if Angel has something to do with it. I hope Buffy will now think twice for being with Angel. :)

Author's Response: Yes, Spuffy is on the way. Angel may not have pulled the trigger, but he's holding the smoking gun. Something Buffy will be pointing out to him in the next chapter! (By phone that is, Angel will not be making a physical appearance until close to the end of the fic!) Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter 8: 'The Charger'

YAY somespuffy lovin in the next chapter i cant wait. i really hope that they get together and that she gets rid of angel and dawn him and her become a family. im sad to hear that merrick is dead i wonder if angel had anything to do with it, probably. i love this story and am so happy tha6 u update. i really hope that after spike and buffy get closer she doesnt pull away or blame him for anything, i just want them to be together. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chapter and see wat happens next thanx

Author's Response: Yes, there will be Spuffy loving. These two knuckleheads belong together and they know it! Angel is not a threat to Spuffy (just a threat to Spike and Buffy in another way). Buffy is truly unable to blame Spike for any of this (silly girl loves the man after all!) Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Pauly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter 8: 'The Charger'

great chapter, would love to read more very soon. I hope you're not just teasing us with the Spuffy lovin' that's promised.

Author's Response: Thanks. No, not teasing. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter 8: 'The Charger'

excellent update and cant wait for the next to see how well they bond

Author's Response: Thank you. Oh, there will be Spuffy bonding, promise! spuf

Reviewer: huokaus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2005 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 7: 'Always'

just lovin' it!

Author's Response: Thanks. I promise Spuffy soon. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2005 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 7: 'Always'

good update

Author's Response: Thank you, spuf

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2005 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 7: 'Always'

aww that was so sweet i juts loved this chapter. i am really happy that u updated and love this story. i thought it was so cute how dawn brouhgt up spike and how they should be together. i really hope that they get together soon or at least get closer. im so happy that angel asnt around and i think buffy should break up with him, i dont no wat she sees in him hes beneath her. also i really hope that spike does somehow get out of working with angel, he is better than this and deserves more. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and am dying to see wta happens next thanx

Author's Response: Thank you for 'getting' Buffy and her dilema. She loves Spike but his job is breaking her heart. I think all of us females have been there at least once. We love our SO but can't stand something they do? Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 7: 'Always'

Dawn sees a lot, huh? :) I hope she tries to play matchmaker.

Author's Response: Yes, Dawn is insightful. Dawn might play matchmaker, kind of. She will be instrumental in bringing Buffy and Spike back together! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'Girls Just Wanna Shop; Til They Drop!'

It was fun at the start, but became sad.. A lot of tears in it at the end. Looking forward to more spuffyness.

Author's Response: Sorry I didn't respond to your reviews earlier. I've been so messed up lately. Thank you and I hope you like the 'Spuffier' moments coming! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'The Lady In Red'

Shopping? Sounds like fun :) It last it will be Buffy and Spike doing things for Dawn together. No Angel, no Holden.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'An Offer He Can't Refuse'

It’s bittersweet to read, the trip down to memory lane – leading towards Angel. I’m glad though that Dawn won’t be left alone.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Steppin' Out; Or Steppin' In It!'

Oh.. seems more what Buffy wanted from Holden. He has money. Dawn with her truth telling is very refreshing.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2005 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'The Horse; The Scheme; The Marker'

Buffy said she left Spike because he was to weak? Hmmm. – Dawn is sweet! Mr. Holden? I wonder what he wants from Buffy.

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