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Date: 06/09/2012 - 07:58 pm Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

A very good story!

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2009 - 07:14 pm Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

loved this story, Arabella is a great character & good story, loved the twist of Dawn being Hope, v clever

Reviewer: nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2008 - 08:05 am Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

I liked it.

Reviewer: sister cuervo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 10:51 pm Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

A fine ending to a superb story. Well done all round with lots of great dialogue and excellent original characters. I'll miss Div'id & Arabella, but imagining him with Anya, rolling in millions is a fun way to finish it up.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 01:09 am Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

Oh I loved the end, so Dawn is his sister.


Author's Response: thank you so much for all your comments

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Date: 07/16/2007 - 12:55 am Title: Chp 13 Puzzles

Oh that was good, she finally realized she was not going to get Spike.

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Date: 07/16/2007 - 12:46 am Title: Chp 12 Choices

ok now that is confusing, is that his fear or has it really happened.

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Date: 07/16/2007 - 12:38 am Title: Chp 11 Two by Two

oh that is not good, I like how Buffy and Spike are talking and interacting again now that he has figured out his cousin.

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Date: 07/16/2007 - 12:25 am Title: Chp 10 Two for Gold

oh she is just evil but at least Buffy and Spike talked so is it them mending fences to get back together.

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Date: 07/16/2007 - 12:14 am Title: Chp 9 Betrayal

oh good Spike is starting to see that his cousin is a B*****

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Date: 07/16/2007 - 12:00 am Title: Chp 8 A White Rabbit?

oh that you the husband is there, maybe Spike will start to trust Buffy again. I wonder if she worked this up in a big hoax to try and get Spike.

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Date: 07/15/2007 - 11:49 pm Title: Chp 7 Empty

OH I am not liking Spike, Buffy is right he is suppost to love her well why is he not acting like he is. He seem to hate her, I would be hurt to.

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Date: 07/15/2007 - 11:40 pm Title: Chp 6 The Truth is Close

OH I hate that women, really really hate her, but I hope that Spike helps Buffy with the demons and she helps him with this sister and they get back together.

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Date: 07/15/2007 - 11:30 pm Title: Chp 5 “Do we have a Plan?”

He wants to touch her and she wants him to why is everything so screwed up.

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Date: 07/15/2007 - 11:21 pm Title: Chp 4 Telling the Secret

so we know the secret and why he has been acting strange, but I did feel sorry for her when he did that after kissing her.
At least he is talking to her.

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Date: 07/15/2007 - 11:12 pm Title: Chp 3 All Cats are Grey...

I am not happy what is Spike acting like turning Dawn away he should be turning his cousin the B***** away. He need to get back with Buffy and he better not be sleeping with his cousin, I hate her and not sure what I think about this story.

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Date: 07/15/2007 - 11:03 pm Title: Chp 2 Who do you Kill?

ok I am confused, but please let Buffy help him.

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Date: 07/15/2007 - 10:52 pm Title: Chp One: She’s Back!

What happened they were so together I was sure she was going to tell him she loved him.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2007 - 09:41 am Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

:) awesome stpry definatly adding that to me fav's:)

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Date: 07/11/2007 - 08:51 am Title: Chp One: She’s Back!

lol i know this story is finished but i just have to say lol how the hell did u come up with a demon that looks like a cow lol very kool/original lol *high 5*

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 - 06:06 pm Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

Well done! :D

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 - 12:05 am Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

Really great story, I wondered why Anya and Xander were changing loves, your AU world concept was neat.

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it.,

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 05:42 am Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

good update

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 11:18 pm Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

I read both stories today, I really enjoyed them both. Will there be a third in the series? How does S/B , W/X, and A/D relationship turn out. What about Dawns reaction to the news? Lastly I am sure the Arrangers wont want to keep Arabella! Just a few ideas, I would be interested in a third story.

Author's Response: Hi Kelly, thanks for reviewing. Lots of people have asked for a third story. Well, it might take a couple of months or so, but I can’t imagine Arabella wont try and have her revenge.....

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 12:05 pm Title: Chp 14 Hope (Final chp)

Great story and great ending. I loved how you paired Anya and Div vid.

Author's Response: thank you so much both for reading and reviewing the story. Much appreciated.

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