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Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 4

great chapter

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

So Buffy is looking for the perfect man to be Katie's father? Seems to me she found him... even if she doesn't know it yet :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 08:07 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh my.. Spike was there on time, huh? So Buffy is having her baby right now. If they will be together in the future it's good that Spike was there - it will make his relationship with the baby even more special. :)

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter 3

Awww... :( Poor Spike. . . Will Angel make an appearance?

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

this story is really great and you're doing an awesome job so far, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Rightley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2005 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

I have repeatedly suggested that you get a beta for your grammar!! You are horrible at using present and past tense in the same sentence! For example "who has been quiet since he noticed her there." Do you see what is wrong with that sentence? You use has (present tense) with noticed (past tense). These are simple grammatical mistakes that a beta would catch. I know you think you are a good writer, and your storytelling is fine...but, please get a beta! It draws away from your stories when these errors jump off of the page. Seriously.

Reviewer: wiccangirl314 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 2

Good Work so far. I look forward to reading more in this fic. :-)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 2

loved it more please

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 2

*gg* So Spike knew Buffy before and there was some attraction. And then I wondered why Spike was in the store :) Looking forward to the next chapter *gg* I hope too they'll meet again soon :)

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 2

this is really great so far, i think it's completely different. great chapter!

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm not accusing you of copying the other story, and I am looking forward to seeing something new with this fic, but I do want to say that you were kind of asking for trouble when you gave a story the same title as another fic with a seemingly similar plot. Even if you didn't mean to, for your own good, you should be more careful in the future. You say you didn't read Baby Love ny Niamh, but it's obvious that you were aware of it because you said you didn't think two fics with the same title would be a big deal. Well, two fics with the same title does tend to make people nervous, and maybe next time if you think you're going to be in that situation again, read part of the other fic, just to make sure they're nothing alike. If they are--and trust me when I say from the first chapter they look very similar, and people had cause to be worried--then change the title. It's just watching out for yourself. Plagerism is a big deal and people get very worried about it. So my friendly advice to you is to cover all your bases. If you're using the same title as another fic--or even a similar title--then at least familiarize yourself with the fic that came first just so you can prevent it from even looking like it could be plagerism. It's just better for both authors, and it would prevent any sort of hassle. Because yeah, these fics do seem similar, the same title thing made it look more so, and if you'd taken the time to see that and change the title of the fic before you posted it, you wouldn't have run into this mess. Just my two cents, and a little advice from someone who's been writing fic a long time and has seen all sorts of messes. :) This fic is good so far, and I'm looking forward to how it continues.

Author's Response: Believe me, I know choosing that title was not the best thing to do. I really wish I could have thought of another one before I put it in, but I always suck with titles. I can never think of anything good enough. I will definitely be watching that from now on. I have actually took a glimpse of the other story after all of this. At least the first two chapters and I honestly don't think it's all that similar, but maybe that's just me. Well, mine will be different. I don't like to do the same thing as other people and I don't believe in plagerism. I have been writing for a few years now and never once have done that. It's just stupid and it pisses me off when people steal from someone else. That has happened to me before and I know how crappy that feels. I hope you will continue to read and that it will be different in the next chapter. The whole thing is already written, so I'm not exactly gonna go back and change anything now. Thanks for the comments.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

so you have written an all human fic where buffy is pregnant by riley, they break up, spike has an uncle in town and his mother died? that reads exactly like baby love by niamh. you also called it baby love! yes there are differences.....slight ones at best and this is only the first chapter. the fact that you called this extremely similar fic baby love gives me pause. thats not coincidence hunny. it logically can't be so. there are too many stories on this site for it to be. there are two stories on this sight called baby love and one is a vamp verse and one is niamh. can you explain to me how you came to write this story that is oh so very similar and call it the same exact name cuz i'm not seeing it. i think you need to go and read baby love

Author's Response: Okay, I'm getting a little annoyed of this. I was only stupid enough to choose the same title because I liked it and thought it worked. That was obviously not a good thing to do and I have changed it now, so I'm hoping all of this will stop. I have seen a lot of stuff similar to this and it doesn't mean anything. It has nothing to do with that other story. I have never read it and I honestly have never had any interest to. I'm not gonna start now. This is my own thing and I really got the idea from a movie. I'm sorry that there is some similarities, but there's nothing I can do about that. This has already been written for a while now and I don't care to change anything. I'm hoping by the second chapter people will see how different it is, but I really don't know anything about that other story. And frankly, I have seen a lot of stories where Buffy has a baby with Riley and where Giles is Spike's uncle. I'm definitely not the first that has done that and I won't be the last. A lot of AU stories have the same stuff in them. It doesn't mean anything. I really hoped that it would be left alone after I changed the title, I'm wishing I never chose that title to begin with. It was only because I couldn't think of anything else and I didn't know it would be a problem at the time. Okay, that was long enough. I really think I have said enough about this.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter 1

good so far

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter 1

i love the story one question, 'why riley's baby?' ewwwwww. I LOVE IT THOUGH please continue writing, i love the whole " Home sweet home." Spike is so so yummy

Reviewer: Aconite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm this is similar to another fic I have recently read. I hope that you play this out in your own way and not take that other author's work. Good luck

Author's Response: Trust me, this will be different. I don't take other people's work and I've never even seen the other story. I changed the title and hope everyone will think that it's different by the second chapter. I think stories are allowed to have some similarities. I've seen it a few times, but that doesn't mean that the author has taken anything from the other person. Not all the time anyway. I know there's a lot of people out there that copy other people's work. I honestly hate when people do that. So, it will be different. Hope you'll continue to read.

Reviewer: Levi Madden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good beginning. I'm interested to see how it will play out.

Reviewer: vero1020 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

i like this story so far it looks great! keep it up! :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

I noticed you changed the name of the story - but I really couldn't have thought of another name - but you found one :) And even if Parker did look good (when I rewatched the episode) I'd prefer Riley if I had to :) I liked Parker less then I liked Riley.. and that isn't too much. ;-)

Author's Response: Yeah, I happen to actually like Riley. I could care less about Parker and I just didn't feel like dealing with him in this story. The title just popped into my head and I think it works. Another song title of course, but that's usually what I do. Thanks for reviewing again=)

Reviewer: Copycat?? Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

You had better watch out because there's another fic called baby love that is by niamh and is AWESOME with a big following. You may want to scrap this fic or else change it up a bit (make her pregnant by someone other than Riley for example).

Author's Response: Hey, if anyone can come up with a different title for this, then feel free to let me know. I only called it this because I couldn't think of anything else. There are a lot of stories out there with the same titles. This has nothing to do with that other story. I have seen it before, but I've never read it. I don't know anything about it, so anything I do that seems similar is probably just a coincidence. I don't take other people's work, I have no need to do that. I come up with my own thing and I really based this story on a movie. Everyone uses Riley, so I don't see what the big deal is about that. I'm sick of always having it be Parker.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh.. two stories with the same title ... but it's different so far - only that Buffy is pregnant from Riley in both fics. She is older here. Looking forward to find out what will happen next I wonder if Buffy knew Spike before. :)

Author's Response: Trust me, the stories only have the same title. I tried to think of a different title for this, but I couldn't think of anything. And I like using song titles for stories, which is the only reason I chose that title. It has nothing to do with the other story. I have really never read it before. If you have any ideas for another title, feel free to let me know. I'm all out at the moment. As for Buffy knowing Spike, you'll just have to keep reading to find out=)

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