I enjoyed your story. Anything reuniting Buffy and Spike after the series end is always at the top of my list. For a little constructive criticism, I think your work would be enhansed by a bit more attention to things like proper word usage ("to" isn't the same thing as "too" and spellchecker won't help a bit. The same thing goes cor properly cpelled, but incorrect words ("coach," though properly spelled, refers to someone who trains people, not the thing you sit on to watch tv. That's "couch"). I found over twenty misspelled or incorrectly used words in this story. You might consider using a beta or having a friend check over your story before submitting it. None of this criticism is meant to detract from your talent or imagination. Both are fine. My suggestions would make your stories more coherant and accurate. Keep up the good work.

Awesome!

This story would be great after a beta job. You should ask someone to check it through for you, it would really make this a lot easier to read.