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Reviewer: Gretchen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2006 - 10:07 pm Title: chapter two

Great story. Can't wait for another chapter.

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2004 - 10:51 pm Title: chapter two

Great story Jaime! Buffy's behaviour is a very realistic reaction to what I assume happened to her. Especially the overprotective outbursts with regards to her friends. It's funny that - the almost....disregard.....for your own well-being, but overwhelmingly intense reactions to the perceived injustices towards others you care about. Excellent work!

Author's Response: hehe, why thank you...*blushes* I wanted the things in this story be very realistic, very dark, hard....just real. It's gonna get ugly...it really is. There's gonna be some things in here that are gonna make some of you cringe...Thank you sooo very much kms, for taking the time to review. Seriously, it means alot : )

Reviewer: kms Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2004 - 09:28 pm Title: chapter one

Really great intro....looking forward to chapter 2!

Reviewer: sluggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2004 - 05:33 pm Title: chapter one

I like the set up as well and the way you ended the first chapter. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: moxie:-)) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2004 - 09:31 am Title: chapter one

Intriguing start with good character set ups - and I liked the end of the chapter that just makes you want to read more!

Author's Response: Oooh dear...your reading this? hehe excitment. Thank you very much for your review, keeps me goin!! : ) Hey...when are you gonna write us up another wonderful story?

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