Pretty good... but you might want to watch your spelling. Willow's line caught me off guard and I had to laugh: "...the Coven gave me a teleportation spell to get us there, it’s in a dessert." For the rest of the story I kept picturing Buffy and gang fighting in a bowl of pudding! Still, good job!

Author's Response: oops! that was very stupid of me,but at least i gave you a laugh. glad you like it. thanks for your review.