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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chp 7 Power Play

So Shanny knew that David wasn't the father but she doesn't know what / who he is. And after such a long time it must be difficult to find out. ~ Hard indeed for Buffy and Spike be cut out of their daughters life; including the babies (even more, that's right, if Willow was still there). Connor? Just guessing, ignore me. And the children never saw Angel as it seems. ~ Till next part!

Author's Response: So pleased that you are enjoying the story. Yes, it’ll be difficult to find out, but not, I fear, impossible!

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 06:31 pm Title: Chp 7 Power Play

i just read all the chapters till now and i love this story!!!... i hope billy doesnt take buffy's thoughts the wrong way and as result does something stupid...cant wait till next chapter, this story is awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Yes, I think Billy could really make things worse if he interferes at this stage!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2006 - 03:14 pm Title: Chp 6 Instincts

Boy, keeping me on my metaphorical toes with this story. I'm a little creeped out by Billy! And I didn't see that last twist coming. Interesting!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: Chp 5 Explanations

Shanny's just wanting to be normal is a nice paralell to Buffy's desires for much of the series. Really interesting story!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2006 - 02:58 pm Title: Chp 4 Inheritance

This is such an interesting idea. I thin you're absolutely right; Spike and Buffy probably *would* have raised a very screwed up kid given the circumstances. Very insightful chapter. I wanted to grab poor little (imaginary!) Shanny and give her a hug! You really did suck me into the story here!

Author's Response: Glad you’re enjoying it. Yes, I’ve always been a little suspicious of ‘baby’ stories where everyone’s happy. Buffy as a mother would not be brilliant, no matter how hard she tried.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2006 - 08:46 am Title: Chp 6 Instincts

Yeah.. so sad if you think about it. Shanny was unhappy as her parents were too. And over the years it got worse. And to be not alloud to visit the twins. Oh! I want to know who the twins' real father is. More secrets? It is getting more and more interesting, your story. :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2006 - 07:40 pm Title: Chp 6 Instincts

Whoa! I loved the bombshell you dropped at the end of the chapter, and I really enjoyed learning more about Billy's abilities. Fantastic update!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2006 - 07:14 pm Title: Chp 6 Instincts

Huh???

Enjoying the updates ...

Reviewer: O.B Joyful Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 12:35 pm Title: Chp 5 Explanations

really intrigued by this story, good one! thanks for writing.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 11:05 am Title: Chp 5 Explanations

The flashbacks of Shanny's life with her parents are so heartbreaking. I don't doubt Buffy and Spike loved their daughter, it's so sad she believed she was unwanted and unloved. Joyce's thoughts about punishing Spike for thinking of grounding her were kinda scary. Spike and Buffy are really gonna have their hands full if the twins ever get mad. Can't wait to learn more about the mysterious Billy. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I’ve always thought any child of Buffy and Spike’s would have a very complicated life, especially if she was a ‘normal’ girl.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 09:34 am Title: Chp 5 Explanations

Poor Shanny indeed. It wasn't easy for her to grow up with her parents being so special, going from one place to the next. Joyce and Billie are careless, but they are just kids. The thought never crosses Joyce that she wouldn't be able to come back. Shanny was unhappy, but I think she had no clue that her parents were unhappy too to let her go because they thought it would have been the best for her.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 11:44 am Title: Chp 4 Inheritance

So Billy has his tricks too.. Oh! weird lady with the painted face sure: The first slayer. Oh yeah, I'm looking forward to read more! Though I have to catch up with your other story, I'm several chapters behind.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 07:59 am Title: Chp 4 Inheritance

Great flashback, very insightful. Buffy and Spike's talk with the twins should be really interesting. I can't wait to learn more about the mysterious painted lady. Great update!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 07:20 am Title: Chp 4 Inheritance

good updates

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2006 - 06:26 pm Title: Chp 3 The Biggest Bad

I just had a chance to read the first three chapters and this is a wonderful story. I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2006 - 10:14 am Title: Chp 3 The Biggest Bad

*gg* Seems as if Joyce is a copy of Spike :) She must look cute ;-) It's sad that Shanshu thinks she isn't loved by her parents. Her past (the circumstances) were not the best. Billy told Joyce that she is a witch? Seems there is more to it (Billy) than meets the eye. Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2006 - 12:37 am Title: Chp 3 The Biggest Bad

I enjoyed all the info on Joyce's powers and about Willow's place in Shanny's life. Hmmm.... interesting that Billy gives Spike the shivers. I can't wait to learn more about him. Wonderful update!

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2006 - 06:31 pm Title: Chp 3 The Biggest Bad

I love it so far, although Shanny sounds like a bitch.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2006 - 04:18 pm Title: Chp 3 The Biggest Bad

aawww........... the story is juz so cute...... love the twins.... waiting for more!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 03:20 am Title: Chp 2 Growing Pains

So glad to see another of your stories. This one had grabbed my attention.
can't wait for all the background to come out and the family troubles that have sent the twins to the grands.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2006 - 12:58 am Title: Chp 2 Growing Pains

Wonderful chapter! I liked the flashback to Shanny's birth, especially Spike's interaction with Andrew. No wonder Shanny sent the twins to her parents... Joyce is certainly a handful. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: Chp 2 Growing Pains

Outright love Joyce!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Chp 2 Growing Pains

I'm glad you wrote another chapter :) Joyce had seen him, smiled and put him on the top of her slave list for life Hehe typical Spike :) (And had to grin about the style Andrew fought.) That was not an easy life Buffy and Spike lived then. And the children are realy special indeed. And wanting to hear some truth from her Grandparents. Maybe just maybe it'll lead Shanny back to her parents. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for kind review. Sorry to late in replying. Hope you enjoy rest of story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: Chp 1

Sounds like a very interesting plot so far. I would love to read more :)

Author's Response: Thanks for review. Will write more soon.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Chp 1

Wonderful start! Love the premise of Buffy and Spike having grandchildren. The twins are an interesting pair. I hope to read more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. Will be updating very soon.

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