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Reviewer: Spuffytopia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2015 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like that you blended Buffy and Angel characters. Riley and Lorne that was something new and unexpected. Faith and Gunn were a great pairing, I could definitely see those two together. Thanks for another great story

Reviewer: jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: Epilogue

awww! its so perfect. a great ending to a great story. i love how lindsey's the bad boyfriend and riley and angel are both nice guys. its a refreshing change after all the bashing they get.

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 05:00 pm Title: Epilogue

I liked the story - I would have liked to have seen more in it about Spike's life. We never did find out what he did for a living or much else about him.

Reviewer: Keala Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2006 - 11:35 pm Title: Epilogue

aww another great story! I loved it. It had me crying *sniffles*

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2006 - 10:16 am Title: Epilogue

I like the end of this one :)
And I don't really mind you not quitting writing! I look forward to the updates :)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2006 - 12:20 am Title: Epilogue

thank you for this incredible story

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2006 - 06:33 pm Title: Epilogue

I like to think I helped with your decision lol. Not that I did, I just like to think I did :)

Great ending hon. It was so sweet and just in time, like you said, for the holidays.

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2006 - 06:30 pm Title: Epilogue

excellent ending, i was happy to see more of this story. great work!

Reviewer: Jenx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi, I see that you have great ideas, but your flow is pretty monotonous... It's like, "I went to the dining table, and ate my dinner."

Adding some adverbs and descriptions to your sentences would have made it better. "I watched as Spike dragged himself over to the dining table, slumped in the chair, and picked at bites." "I bounded over to the dining table and tucked into my dinner with fervour while Buffy stared at me with a twinkle in her eyes."

Well... You get the point. I've always enjoyed your fics; They have interesting ideas but they were more or less always rather simple. Maybe you should add in more adverbs and details to spice up your fics. :)

Author's Response: Sadly, I don't think the writing will change anytime soon. I know that I suck with details. I just can't describe things very well, but rarely does anyone tell me that anymore. I think that I have improved a lot since I first started out and really, I'm just glad that I finally finished this fiction. I had writer's block for the longest time, so that's all that really matters to me right now. Anyway, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2006 - 05:30 pm Title: Epilogue

So sweet. And no I don't mind you not quitting anytime soon. I love your stories. So keep up the good work.

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter 20

had me worried for a second there. this was a great chapter.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter 20

how about a wedding and honeymoon and some kids?

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 20

Whoa...I was worried there for a second! Maybe you can do a wedding for them or something like 3 years in the future with kids living happily together! Whatever you decide, I'm sure it'll be great! Update soon please!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 20

loved the chapter!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 20

*nods* I like how the chapter turned out; I feared we would see more of Dru (when Spike said Get Out but looked at Buffy when he did it). I'm glad she is gone again and that Spike did believe Buffy.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm glad they cleared that up, you worried me for a while that he was asking Buffy to leave, I'm awfully glad he was asking Dru instead. ;) Lovely chapter!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 20

Good for Spike.. bye Dru..

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2006 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter 19

Oh great! Double the trouble! Update soon please!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 19

Glad Buffy didn't fall for Lindsey's attempt to get her back. But who watched her? Spike? Drusilla (No, she wouldn't know of Lindsey). I wonder what Drusilla wants and hope Spike sends her away. *crosses fingers it won't get bad*

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 19

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 19

Why do I get the feeling we're threading into angsty territory here? More please? I can't wait to find out what's going to happen.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 18

Uh-oh, Not good, not good at all *bites nails* Off to read more.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 17

Awww, that was too sweet! All of it. :D

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 16

*lol* He truly deserved that. :D Especially after Faith's confesion. I don't think Lindsey is going to let it slide though. *bites nails*

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh, wow, color me stunned here, that I didn't expect. Good job, honey. Off to read more, since I can't wait. ;)

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