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Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'A Patient Man'

Well for me it's fine that this story is "all about Buffy"..I happen to love her character. I am a sucker for a story with a worthy heroine...And Buffy usually fits the bill.

I LOVE how determined Spike is to push through Buffy's defenses and have a relationship with her! In a lot of stories we see both Spike and Buffy hem and haw..and miscommunication..Not here..Spike has very clearly stated how he feels and what he wants..and they know where they stand..Nowhere for Buffy to hide.

About Frankin..Hmmm..The way the Harris' boys feel about Buffy is really strange. They seem to hate her and they both seem to be in love with her. Makes for some interesting dyanamics.. Glad to see an update!

Author's Response: Thank you for continuing with this story. I have always felt that the show 'was' all about Buffy. When Spike's interest in killing her turned to loving her, then it became the Spike and Buffy show for me anyway. Yes, Spike is intent on winning the love of Buffy, but he will have to work hard. He still does not know about her little smoking habit or why she has numbed herself for so many years. I'll give you a hint: Xander Harris has something more then the obvious to do with Buffy's pain. Thanks again. spuf

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 6: 'A Patient Man'

good updates

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continued interest in this story. spuf

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'Reunions.....Of A Sort'

Lots and lots of depth to this chapter. When you think you know everything...theres another revelation. I get how evil the Harris boys have to be to have had a hand in their parents death...Looks as if Buffy's whole life was intwined with Xander whether she liked it or not. Great update..wish I had seen it sooner! : D

Author's Response: Thank you. Buffy's life is even more entwined with Xander then you might guess!!! spuf

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2006 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Reunions.....Of A Sort'

That's interesting: If Larry and Connie Harris were sober when they left ~ how comes they were drunken when they had the accident? Someone has done something ... I wonder if it were the sons. And if Xander can keep his promise for Anya (regarding Faith). ~ Looking forward to the next part :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2006 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter 5: 'Reunions.....Of A Sort'

Wow! I never would've guessed Buffy was related to Xander. After hearing Buffy's revelations of what happened at the restuarant the night the Ma and Pa Harris died i'm surprised Dawn and Conner got out of Sunnydale alive. The Xander/Anya interaction was very interesting. Loved the ending of the chapter. Good update!

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2006 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'Reunions.....Of A Sort'

missed getting updates on this fic. love it. keep up the great work

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 08:10 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Complicated Mess'

Feeling sorry for feeling sorry to save a life.. yeah, sometimes if we knew beforehand what would happen later we would change things if we could. ~ Faith wants Buffy? It doesn't sound good if you think what Faith is... ~ I wonder if Xander killed his parents. Till next part!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 07:14 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Complicated Mess'

Fantastic chapter! I love the dark story you're weaving here. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Complicated Mess'

more please

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 03:54 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Complicated Mess'

What a sordid picture that is emerging here..Wow! One question...In what capacity is Faith "wanting" Buffy? For sex..or to hurt? Spike sure is getting an ear full! Great update!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter 4: 'Complicated Mess'

Thanks for another update. Why does Faith want Buffy: (Maybe I'm being Naive.) Anyway, love the story. Love detective,mystery,mafia stories.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'Complicated Mess'

Enjoying the updates.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2006 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Lesson The First; Soul Guardian'

Awe, ain't tipsy Buffy fun? I hope she won't have a headache the next day :) ~ Wedding in Sunnydale? Then Xander will stay for a bit ~ And Spike acted like a gentleman :) Xander is really bad in this story.. and he continues (plans) to hurt Buffy through her friends. ~ Good chapter :)

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2006 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Lesson The First; Soul Guardian'

Keeps getting better and better. Spike is such a sweetie in this chapter. Interesting tidbit about the "tit for tat".

Xander is going to marry Anya soon. He just doesn't want to bring anymore screwed up kids into the world? Wonder how the no kids will fly with Anya.

Looking forward to next update! Oh, will you be updating Redemption? LOve that story also.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2006 - 07:03 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Lesson The First; Soul Guardian'

I loved Spike in this chapter... he was such a sweetie. I liked Buffy's talk with Spike about her history with Xander. Interesting development between Anya and Xander. I'm really looking forward to finding out where things go from here. Great update!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2006 - 05:30 am Title: Chapter 3: 'Lesson The First; Soul Guardian'

good chappie

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Monsters And Angels'

Wonderful chemistry here, setting the stage up nicely and getting the characters in line here... love it!

Author's Response: Thanks, here's the next chapter. Hope it explains some things. spuf

Reviewer: Rachae; Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 09:19 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Monsters And Angels'

I'm so happy your back, I hope RL is going good for you.
Its so weird to see Anya and Xander evil...but you make them do it so well! I'm totally enthralled in this.
Awesome awesome writing!

Author's Response: RL is better, thank you. I always rather enjoyed evil Xander (vampire Xander in The Wish) and always felt that Anya was just this side of evil anyway. (Sorry, never cared for the character much). Buffy is screwed up, kind of and Spike will definitely be there for his golden goddess! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Monsters And Angels'

So glad to see update. Love the Buffy and Spike in this story. I think they'll make a great team. Already attraction there. Hope this will be a long story with all kinds of twsts and turns. Love yur writing

Author's Response: Thank you. There is no 'I' in team and frankly I always felt that Spike and Buffy made up both sides of the same coin! Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2006 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Monsters And Angels'

i love that spike is already smitten with buffy and maybe the other way around. i can't wait to read more about what happens! i really want to know what happened to xander to make him the bad guy, i'm suprised it isn't angelus. PLEASE UPDATE SOON?

Author's Response: I will try and explain Xander's psychosis as the story goes on. His obsession with Buffy is a big, big problem in this fic. As Rupert Giles told his nephew: Xander's obsession with Buffy Summers is psychotic and very dangerous. Spike is the real white knight in this fic, at least where Buffy is concerned. He will definitely be there for her, don't worry and visa versa. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Monsters And Angels'

That was a great first meeting between Spike and Buffy. Looks like the beginning of a great partnership. The run-in with Xander was really intense, I like the way Spike handled himself. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: I always saw Spike and Buffy in this way: Nick and Nora Charles. Or, better yet, Cary Grant and Rosalind Russell from 'His Girl Friday'. There's a wonderful chemistry between Spike and Buffy that I feel Joss and ME never truly explored like they should have. How could a nimrod like Xander ever really 'get to' Buffy when Spike is there to watch her back? And visa versa. Buffy will have a calming affect on Spike, but he'll have a logical affect on her. I hope it will all make sense! Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Monsters And Angels'

good update

Author's Response: Thank you. Your constant support is very uplifting! spuf

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Monsters And Angels'

Enjoying the story.

Author's Response: Thank you. I promise to explain more in upcoming chapters. spuf

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Monsters And Angels'

Good update. Loved the intensity of the interaction between Xander, Buffy and Spike.

Author's Response: Warning: Xander is basically psychotic in this fiction and Anya isn't much better off. Buffy has alot of problems herself, but I'm hoping that Spike's stabalizing (!) influence will help her. Yes, Spike is the sane one in this fiction (thought it'd be a nice change tee hee!) Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Monsters And Angels'

Buffy is quite the popular girl..I wonder what Anya thinks about Xanders' feelings for Buffy?

I really like this Buffy and Spike. I'm thinking that they are going to make a pretty kick as s team..The sparks are defiantely flying between them : D Great update!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Anya may suspect Xander's feelings for Buffy, but she chooses to blind herself to them. For a while anyway... Buffy and Spike have always intrigued me, even past the Spuffy loving part of the duo. Yes, I always felt they'd make a great team; a married team or a PI team. Like Nick and Nora Charles, now they just need the dog! I explored this side of Spuffy in 'A Murder In Sunnydale' and hope to fine tune it in this fic! Thanks again, spuf

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