how could she not know that he saved the world! i mean does se really think that he would do that just for fun and hop in the portal to be safe? update soon.

Very interesting start! I like this tremendously. Aside from a a few spelling errors (for example it's "Anya" not "Anja") it' s a great beginning. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: sorry, that's the German spelling. It sneeks in sometimes. And of course there is more

well, that was a disappointment. he should have said something more to her besides so long, slayer, it was like he didn't love her at all, and it pisses me off that she thought he could kill dawn. i can't believe she wasn't smart enough to figure out what he was doing. is there going to be more to this because i really don't see what else can be done now that spike is gone. i've seen this before, spike biting dawn and sacrificing himself. it was okay, there just could have been more to it.

Author's Response: I'm not doing a very good job then. It's not so much that he doesn't love her, it is that he knows she doesn't love him and wouldn't want to hear him say it, especially not given the situation. And as I have mentioned before people are not at their most lucid when they think a loved one is hurt. And there is more coming, Can't say what, would spoil the surprise.

Ah, I saw somebody else do this kind of thing before, but it is a seldom used choice. Interested in seeing where you go with it.

One thing - please double-space between your paragraphs. It makes the text much easier to read/understand. Right now, it looks like one big clump.

Dawnie's going to be heartbroken she lost her best friend. Silly Buffy for thinking he'd kill Dawn...he told you to tell her he was sorry, so what good would be the telling if she was dead?

Author's Response: Thanks for the layout advice. I miss stuff like that sometimes. Will get onto it. And Buffy is not exactly in her right state of mind at the time. She can be a bit blinkered.

Nice start. This is very interesting. I wonder where Spike will go? Will dumb Buffy figure out what Spike did to save Dawn. Please update soon..