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Reviewer: kris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter one

love your story. what are the names of the songs? who are they by?

Author's Response: thank you ^^ urm i wrote this over two years ago:S i really don't remember what the songs were called or who they were by... i remember celine dion being used and bryan adams maybe but other than that i'm clueless...

Reviewer: Joyful Dayz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 05:52 pm Title: Chapter one

Good story! I like how they sing their feelings to each other, gets around Buffy's inability to admit to them.

Author's Response: lol yep:D

Reviewer: BuffyFreak Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter one

I love this story! It was so cool. I hate Reily so having him have to watch Buffy & Spike sing was awesome!!!

Author's Response: lol glad you liked it, i havnt followed Buffy from the beginning so i wasnt there through the Riley phase, i only came in during the Spike phase:D but i gather Riley bashing is a sport amongst Spuffy fans!

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter one

I liked the fic,and since I'm a big fan of Céline Dion I loved that they sang some of her songs :)

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter one

I liked the fic,and since I'm a big fan of Céline Dion I loved that they sang some of her songs :)

Author's Response: yay thanks i thought i'd get loads of messages like OMG you made Spike sing Celine Dion:D, glad you liked it

Reviewer: moonchic1023 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter one

I really like the premise of your story, and I feel you have a definate talent (especially in terms of your characters' voices). However, I do recommend that you get a beta reader. Consistent and correct punctuation, capitalization, and spacing between paragraphs allows readers to focus more on the story than to be distracted by errors. Using correct homonyms (your vs. you're) is also a good thing to keep an eye out for. A beta reader or even stringent self proofreading will help.

Again, this is only meant to be constructive. I do feel like you have promise as a writer, you just need to put the final polish on your work.

Author's Response: i know, i have a beta reader now, i just had to post this so they didnt delete my account. thanks though

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter one

I like the story! And no angry outburst from Riley? I like it when he just gets the message!

Author's Response: ok i dont know if i'm supposed to respond to reviews or not but i feel rude not saying anything. So thank you for reading it and reviewing, and yeah i'm not big on Riley bashing to put it bluntly he served his purpose and he made Buffy happy for a while so no randomono Riley bashing in my fics just yet ! he he my first review yay!

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