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Reviewer: valerie21601 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2014 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 8

Awwww!  I wish you would finish your story.  It looks like at least, one more chapter could finish completely.   Please!

Reviewer: iloveSpuffy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2012 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 8

please continue ? :D

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great fic!!! Stumbled across it, don't know how I missed this one. Got to say, I HAD to bop on over to the ficathon page and read ch 9 since I didn't see it here yet. I never did find a large manip, but am really glad I got to finish up the story (tho' kinda sorry to see this one end) AND very glad I came across this one to read! Often, I avoid "Gift-ish" fics, but this one was very enjoyable.
Wow. Didn't expect anyone to ever reincarnate Glory (nothing againg Claire, but I think we were all glad to see Glory GO)...and the mini-toga with bangle bracelets was just priceless! I thought originally perhaps Glory wanted Buffy to arrive as a "backup ticket home" what with "Summers" blood and all, but that kinda fizzled. This did kinda catch the Scoobies at a particularly vulnerable point in their lives...perhaps Willow most of all. Tho', still don't think they'd have abandoned her...and Giles! Shame on his British Empire ass for not accompanying her! At least he was an experienced traveler....tho' it did allow for much more Clem interaction, and the segue into Clem tracking down Spike in Morocco (I guess I've enjoyed seeing Clem in tales even more lately since I found out what the actor really looks like (yummy too) and have read him written into a few human AU stories).
And this all allowed Spike to finally save the girl. And the totally save the girl, or at least keep her from having no reason to go on per se, with the mating. Interesting to write of it being a possible danger...Spike would, or should know, having been very well educated and probably the foremost expert with his 100 yrs of intense study on slayers...I wouldn't think there should be a prob, with slayers and vamps having a their demonic roots per se in common.
Figures the old medicine man/priest would simple be a descendant of the Shadow Men, and that the Watchers, even tho' it was Giles (surely without malintent) that led her to him. And also figures it was a medicine woman (which less heard of in white man's "myths of the dark continent" actually DO exist, as least in much non-Muslim(-ized) W. African culture), perhaps related to our later to be seen Guardians?, that would also know how to make things right between both the Universe and our blonde couple.
Much was made about the balances, but yet too many things didn't click together right...to me, it never did seem to click that joining essences together to kill Adam upset the balance leading to Buffy's death, followed by her resurrection bringing about the FE. What about Angel's bout with the FE? Was that conveniently forgotten by Joss et al? The FE already HAD ventured back out into the world and staked a big ole foothold.
Also glad for how you wrote Spike. Tho' a leetle crazy, and definitely having a few depressive issues due to being faced with his/demon's previous acts, it was good to see him definitely more functional, especially in a crisis situation. Glad to see it portrayed as William's conscience. Glad to see that without the influence directly of the Hellmouth-under-the-HS that he didn't lose all his marbles.
All in all, VERY enjoyable. Thanks!
~K.~

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 8

I freaking love Anya's line... 'no, not anymore', LMFAO. ANd yeah for confessions, woo hoo. Now get to the god damn kissage woman, hahahahhaa.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2007 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 8

I hope you had a good day yesterday :)
Loved that Buffy told what she had on her mind before they started to fight Buffy; and that she asked Spike what he wanted. (Loved the conversation).
Heh heh! What a twist with Anya. Clever :) And now back to Sunnydale...
Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2007 - 10:17 am Title: Chapter 8

Can't wait to hear what Spike wants.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2007 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 8

Good story! Want to read more!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2007 - 12:00 am Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter, Anya killing Glory was hilarious

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 7

Phewwww, wipes sweat from brow, that was one helluva dream - but stupid Spike had to wake her up, lol. I think I need to change my knickers, giggles. Awesome job hon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2007 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 7

Buffy assumed the worst again when it came to Spike, what he did mean. I hope she understands now what he wanted to say.
Mmm I wonder if Buffy's dream was a dream or if she remembered the conversation from the time she had fever (was ill). The first part; but the second dream was hot.

Author's Response: Bad Buffy, eh? Yes, she has a hard time in trusting and believing the good in people when so many have shown her the bad. Remember when Buffy was ill, she thought she was hallucinating so her dream was her persepctive of their discussion with a few hallucinations thrown in.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2007 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh what flashbacks she was having.

Author's Response: She's having some hallucinations, isn't she. The sad part is that she doesn't know it really was reality. Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2007 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter 7

ALTHOUGH I'VE READALL OF YOUR COMPLETED STORIES ,AND THOUGHT THEM ALL WONDERFUL, I WASN'T PREPARED TO LIKE THIS ONE AS MUCH AS I DID. THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS ESPECIALLY, BECAUSE THEY WERE SO EMOTIONALLY REVEALING . HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON,

Author's Response: LOL, I guess I'll take that as a compliment. Yes, my writing has turned more emotional than physical. It also helps that I actually finished this before posting so it is well rounded. Glad that you enjoyed it

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 6

So Spike is still taunted from the voice he hears... good Buffy woke up and the voice stopped. And even better that Buffy did indeed what she promised Dawn, talked to Spike. Oh she's only dreaming. ~ I like the explanation why Buffy broke up with Spike, her own fears leading her to leave first. ~ Looking forward to the next part and I hope they'll get Dawn back safely.

Author's Response: It was my take on Crazy Soulful Spike, he was haunted by the demon more than any victim.

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 6

The exotic surroundings really give something extra to this story. I also love the inner dialogues. I really see Buffy's journey as the main theme in this story, hope to read more of it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy that my research into the environment was worth it.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 6

You're too sweet and I'm more than happy to always help. I love Spike and the inner demon going at it in this chapy - brought out some harsh truths. Very emotional time for Spike as he tries to process Buffy's dream rambles and then his heartfelt promise. This is the tear jerker chapter, *sniffs*. Bravo sweety.

Author's Response: LOL, thanks for your help... of course you KNOW how it ends... I bet everyone is jealous

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh I love it, More please.

Author's Response: I am very happy that you are enjoying the storyline. I'll post more soon

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter 6

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: Glad that you are enjoying it

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh oh, now Buffy has a fever too and is hallucinating. But maybe that is a good thing too: Then now Spike should believe her because she won't lie.

Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 02:55 am Title: Chapter 5

Great story

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter 5

MMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, tastes like more, tee hee.

Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! More to come soon

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 10:40 am Title: Chapter 5

love it more please.

Author's Response: More to come soon!

Reviewer: TwilightChild Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 09:07 am Title: Chapter 2

This is pretty well written. I'm liking this.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2006 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad that Spike was there in time to rescue Buffy. And the other Shaman did betray Buffy? That's bad.
And Spike tries to push Buffy away.
Or the Shaman thought of Buffy's journey. Well I think we'll find out in the later chapters.

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the fic... more to come

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

She does like to complicate the big picture...

Author's Response: LOL, yes she does.

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