[Report This]Date: 05/11/2007 - 05:16 am Title: A deeper Insight
good story line so far i'm liking it......you may want to correct a few grammer error's and consider getting a BETA, small miss spells and it brings the story down a little bit....but on the overall i'm lovin it:)
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: A deeper Insight
you got to tell me wht happened
Author's Response: lol thanks! Yeah sure email me if you want and I can help you with anything you need!
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2006 - 10:07 pm Title: Suprise!
hey you are doing realy good way better then i am with my story maybe you can help me out lol
Author's Response: Yeah like I said just email me k_perrin16@yahoo.com I would love to help you!
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Angst
It is really good so far =)
Author's Response: thanks that means alot to me!
[Report This]Date: 11/11/2006 - 10:44 pm Title: A deeper Insight
its funny i thought that when i started this chap is was gonna be a fight between her mom and her but then you surprised me lol
good chap
Author's Response: lol thats what stories are about, suprising the readers. I wanted it to be a fight but I thought it would go better the way it went. :-D thanks for the great support!!
[Report This]Date: 11/11/2006 - 11:30 am Title: A deeper Insight
I think Buffy can't remember the next morning that she talked to Spike, especially about love.
Oh that's way! They have a history. Spike was Buffy's first. And the father of the baby she lost. Though I can't see why he acted as he did, taunting Buffy and saying terrible things.
And the accident did happen because people got to know she slept with Spike. When he didn't tell it... did he tell Drusilla and she told? Or who did spill the secret I wonder..
But now things are better for Buffy, going back to her family, having therapy....
And discover that she is pregnant! She doesn't remember sleeping with Spike it seems :) Till next part!
Author's Response: lol yeah that basically sums it up!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: A deeper Insight
love it, can't wait to see what happens next. She talked about a miscarriage, you made it look like it might have been Spikes is that right. If so then I guess he will be the father to this one too.
Author's Response: lol yeah Spike is was her first and only person she slept with! Though she doesnt know she slept with him this time! They had a one night stand when she was fifteen. Leading to a miscarriage.
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: A deeper Insight
great chapter!..cant wait till the next one!!!
Author's Response: thanks :-D
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: Suprise!
I just read the first chapters; I like the story so far. Looking forward to the Buffy&Joyce talk.
Author's Response: lol I am actually crying as I am writing that. I have it all wrote out on paper I am just typing it now! Its based loosely on a recent arguement with my mom!
[Report This]Date: 11/09/2006 - 08:32 pm Title: Suprise!
loved the chapter!
Author's Response: thanks :-D
[Report This]Date: 11/09/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: Suprise!
still a really great story
Author's Response: thanks, I really appriciate your reviews Melissa :-D
[Report This]Date: 11/09/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: Suprise!
I don't want to quit reading this story because I think it is fairly good, but through-out every chapter that I have read you seem to keep using more and more exclamation marks, then I came to this chapter, and saw that you cut back on those. Good job! The story started out a little rough, but now I think you've finally have gotten a grasp on it, and things will go more smoothly from here on out!
- Brit
Author's Response: lol thanks. I have a problem with exclamation marks. Yesterday someone wrote about it so today I minded them. So now I am hoping not to use them alot! I hope you continue to read. Thanks for your review it means alot to me :-D
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 05:50 pm Title: whats happened
love it cant wait for Buffy and Spike to find out what they have done.
Author's Response: thanks for the suggestion! yeah, though i think I am going to have that wait for a while, cause I have a few tricks up my sleeve. I had it planned out and then decided that something else was way better! I hope you will continue reading it :-D I loved your suggestion.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: whats happened
Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review it means alot! I think I am going to do a chapter a day so it should be up sometime tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 05:10 pm Title: Angst
Oh my god...seriously, you need to cut down on the exclamation marks. I don't think I'll be reading the other chapters.
Author's Response: thanks for the suggestion. I seriously need a beta
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 01:48 am Title: Party
i love this story very interesting
Author's Response: thanks your review means alot to me
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 10:26 pm Title: Party
I think you should deff put them together and waking up the next morning but Spike is the only one that remembers what happened and then Buffy goes into denial about it all until she finds out she is pregnant and starts having flashbacks! By the way Luv the story!
Author's Response: lol thanks for the review! I am still debating on my next chapter but I have it kinda started!
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 08:39 pm Title: Party
I think he should play along, then realize oit isn't true or right because she's drunk, so his hopes(that he didn't know he had) are squashed and he takes her to her own bed kisses her on the forhead and leaves silently alon. But everything else is great.
Author's Response: thanks but the bases is she gets pregnant and it will change the whole story! I know that they are deff gunna go to bed together. thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 08:13 pm Title: Party
i think it should be both her waking up with now clue what happend but as time goes on heave them have flash backs or have some thing telling them in the back of there mind that some thing happend and then when she take the pregnancy test she remembers
really like this story and the way your writing it
major fan
melissa b :)
Author's Response: thats a really good idea thanks! I really appreciate your reviews! It means alot!
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 06:36 pm Title: Party
love the story so far. Definately have her wake up to him. But it would be good if neither remembered what happen. Not sure how drunk you are having him.
Author's Response: Well I didnt really do much with him while she was drinking but he's going to be drunk too! I am going to post more to the party and the likes! Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 06:28 pm Title: Party
loved the chapter!!! can she do a little of both? i mean wake up with spike in her bed but have no clue as to how he got there..unless of course that's what you meant..whatever it doesnt matter...which ever you choose.. i cant wait till the next chapter!!!!!!
Author's Response: thanks I love your enthusiasm. It makes me feel good! Yeah I am not sure whats gunna go on yet but I might do what you suggest I was thinking along those lines
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 07:02 am Title: Angst
I like it, and would lofe to see more! Great start for your very first fic honey =)
Author's Response: thank you! I greatly appreciate your review! I posted the new chapter! Its kind of weird
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 01:36 am Title: Angst
great chapter...more please!!!
Author's Response: thanks for your review! I am hoping to have the next chapter up by tomorrow
[Report This]Date: 11/06/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: Angst
really like the idea of this fic and i hope you udate really soon
Author's Response: thank you for being my first reviewer! It makes me feel real good! :-D I shall probably update tomorrow or the next day!
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