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Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:41 pm Title: Part IX

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wounderful story , I hope you write a epoilogue.

Author's Response: :) Thank you. We'll see about it. I have an Idea. I'll have to see if it goes anywhere.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 09:30 am Title: Part IX

So, is she human?

Author's Response: As human as the child of a Slayer and Vampire can be...

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 09:19 am Title: Part IX

*sigh* This is really then end? I'll miss it... but now to the chapter:
Oh! Because Spike had the pleasant side of the pregnancy too and Buffy was bolted right into labor, into hurt? Brassed of Slayer is indeed dangerous *g*.
Awe, glad it ended well :-D But Buffy isn't too eager (at this point) to go through a pregnancy all by herself *grins*. (I know you didn't ask me but an epilogue would be nice *g*.)

Author's Response: ha, well, right after a woman's given birth is not the best time to go...Hey! Wanna do it again?! lol We'll see about that epilogue.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 04:26 pm Title: Part VIII

Oh that was thrilling when they did the spell but all went well :)) But why did Buffy call Spike bastard? Maybe I'd missed a thing. Looking forward to more. But then another story is coming to an end. Ah well.. I'll miss them. Good luck for your move and keep that thought (life is great) for a long while in your mind :)

Author's Response: Ha, for some very obvious reasons that everyone will understand in the next chapter.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 02:09 pm Title: Part VIII

So hey... I think I may have caught an itty bitty mistake...

"She felt Dawn slip her arms around her waist, and drew her youngest into a hug."

Isn't Dawn not the youngest anymore? Isn't baby Jason the youngest now? Sorry if I'm being annoying or anything... I just caught it and thought I'd mention it...

And dang! You go from really funny to tender and sweet flawlessly! Wonderful chapter! :)

Author's Response: It was supposed to have a daughter tacked on there; I fixed it, thanks. And I'm glad I've got a good balance there, though for me, those two things aren't too far apart ;)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 08:15 am Title: Part VIII

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to find out what sex the baby is. :D

Author's Response: Oh, the Big Mystery ;) lol

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 07:16 am Title: Part VIII

Why the hell is Buffy yelling at Spike?!

And why didn't they do a Cesarean, if the baby is ready to be born. It would make more sense than transferring it to Buffy now. It's just going to come right back out again!!

Author's Response: Ha, when you find, you'll go "Ooooohhhh. Of course!" lol As to your questions...who would do the Cesarean? Giles? Or *shudder* Xander? That would be a Very Bad Idea. And if they waited for the doctor, the baby could go into distress and die. There's not way for Spike to logistically have the baby himself without some serious complications and ick factors, so the only recourse is to transferr it to Buffy.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 02:53 am Title: Part VIII

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: :) Awesome!

Reviewer: . Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 01:11 am Title: Part VIII

what the hell did he do?

Author's Response: Sex is all fun and games until someone gets pregnant....

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 01:09 am Title: Part VIII

Twinlets is 4EVER! hehe

Author's Response: lol. Indeed!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 12:48 am Title: Part VIII

Love it when Men are pregnant.. through birth though.. somehow??

Sounds like life is grand... nice to hear.

Author's Response: As much as I'd like to torture men with actually having to deal with pregnancy...I'm letting Spike off the hook for this one. And right now, my life is pretty charmed. Here's hoping that it stays that way!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 11:48 pm Title: Part VIII

I wonder why Buffy is made at him, more please.


Author's Response: You'd be surprised how obvious the answer is.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 11:41 pm Title: Part VIII

Great chapter! Loved the ending! Can't wait to read the next update!

Author's Response: haha, I'm glad. I went...prefect. Done there, next chapter! ;)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 07:32 am Title: Part VII

Yup, they just advanced months of development......hope the kid doesn't come out purple.

Author's Response: You never know...Buffy and Spike could end up with a couple of purple people eaters. lol

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 06:39 am Title: Part VII

*bites nails* What an exciting ending to the chapter! Can't wait to read more! Good update!

Author's Response: :) I hope you like this next one as well. :D I've tried to end them on good, fun, high, cliff hanging notes so far.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 06:13 am Title: Part VII

oh o lol better get that baby into buffy's tummy asap lol


cant wait for you to update

Author's Response: Yeah, that could be their best idea...

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 04:52 am Title: Part VII

eeeep! *runs around looking for midwives*

Author's Response: hahaha. Find any?

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 09:07 pm Title: Part VII

LOL love your description of those demons. Looking forward to reading more. How exactly Spike has the baby should be interesting. Please update soon.

Author's Response: :) I'm glad everyone seems to like them as much as me. They're one of my favorite parts of my story.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 07:19 pm Title: Part VII

Can't wait to see how Spike is going to deliver this baby! More please!

Author's Response: ha, I'm pretty sure that, like, the one thing I wouldn't trust Spike to do ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 05:10 pm Title: Part VII

Oh there is someone speeding things up? That sounds not so good... ~ Tiny ropes? I picture Spike now tied up like Gulliver. Lol indeed. So it was easy for Spike getting free again. But the labor started? Kind of bad now; they have to switch the baby immediately. I hope the baby is okay after the kick of growing fast.

Author's Response: Yep, that was what I was going for. And I have a Plan. Promise ;)

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 04:38 pm Title: Part VII

Oh I want to see how you are going to get it out of him.

Author's Response: You'll just have to read and find o-out ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 02:51 pm Title: Part VII

Oh my! LOL! Those little purple demons... SO cute!! If not really creepy. Really good chapter. Looking forward to more. ;)

Author's Response: haha, I know. I saw a picture of them in my head and went *MUST* be done. Glad you liked them.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2007 - 06:12 pm Title: Part IV

Oh, I love this! Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: ha, thanks! Glad you're enjoying this!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 08:37 pm Title: Part IV

Lol I just try to picture that: Joyce getting Spike turning green *gg*.
Funny chapter again! And a very, very brassed off Slayer. She'll try everything to save her mate and her baby.
Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: haha, I love Joyce. Truly. And yeah, Buffy might be going a little berserk in the next chapter...

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 05:21 am Title: Part IV

The High One better look out... here comes one very brassed off slayer. Can't wait for Buffy to get her vamp back. Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, I think you'll like the next part...our favorite couple gets a little of their own back (including the vamp in question) ;)

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