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Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 03:16 am Title: Part IV

great chapter

Author's Response: Why thank you :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 02:44 am Title: Part IV

Looks like the slayers hormones are kicking in! Can't wait til the next update!

Author's Response: Oh yes. Mommy is not a happy camper!

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 02:33 am Title: Part IV

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: hahahahaha. Short lived separation, I promise!

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 02:07 am Title: Part IV

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent chapter.

Author's Response: :D Merci!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 01:54 am Title: Part IV

lovely chaper! i enjoyed it very much!

Author's Response: Why thank you!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 01:10 am Title: Part IV

Oh no that is not good, but the plus is I can review this time, last time I was laughing to much, not exactly sure what I got out.

Author's Response: haha! Yeah, I was cracking myself up with that last chapter. Some of the stuff was just...out of control. I went back and was like, what the hell did I just write? Glad you're liking this.

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 11:46 pm Title: Part IV

i was hoping the baby would get put into buffy before he was taken, but no such luck. i didn't think he would just disappear like that, i hope nothing happens to the baby. i have to admit that this is pretty weird, a part of me really hopes that buffy will eventually be carrying the baby because i can't imagine spike giving birth. i don't even know how he would be able to do that.

Author's Response: Spike's not going to give birth. That would just be...icky and complicated. Way too complicated. There'd have to be a cesarean and Spike's abs would really be shot all to hell...

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 11:13 pm Title: Part IV

Just magically plucked him elsewhere....oh, dear....

Author's Response: yes they did. And it's an 'oh, dear' for someone...just not who you might expect.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 11:12 pm Title: Part IV

Gawd, this story is freakin' awesome! It just cracks me up! I mean... Spike is PREGNANT! I doesn't get better than that! LOL! Really looking forward to more!

PS: The very first "Spike" in this chapter is misspelled. ;)

Author's Response: haha, I'm glad you've liked it. I thought it was a hilarious concept, and this fic is supposed to be just a tad on the ridiculous side if you hadn't noticed. lol PS. I fixed that, thanks!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 10:30 pm Title: Part IV

Spike pregnant...I just can't get over it. They kidnapped him too!!! Wow...there's gonna be hell to pay. Buffy's furious and Spike is pregnant as well. Update soon please!

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought of the idea and went...nah, it'll never work. Wait. On second thought...why not?

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 - 08:55 pm Title: Part V

This is so great! I haven't laughed this much in quite a while! Loved it! Can't wait til the next update!

Author's Response: :) I'm glad you're enjoying this so much!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 09:19 am Title: Part V

Oh that was fun! Buffy's 'You stole my baby' till Spike fainting. :-D
So Spike has to keep the baby for at last six month. Buffy will have the hardest trimester. ~ Oh! When with the pills their bodies will be in sync then Buffy will get to know the pregnancy like it would be her own.
Heh heh, Xander was the first to figure it out that Spike is the one that is pregnant.
Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: ha, I'm glad you liked that; I laughed when I wrote it. Made me happy. And you have to appreciate the irony of Xander being the most perceptive...for once!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 02:08 am Title: Part V

great chapter

Author's Response: Danka!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 01:10 am Title: Part V

Spike and Buffy's reactions were priceless... lol! Loved the update! :D

Author's Response: Yeah, she's special. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 11:02 pm Title: Part V

Oh I finally made it throught it, the first half I laughed through, I has tears in my eyes when I went to get my husband.
More please.

Author's Response: ha, glad I could bring a tear to your eye ;)

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 09:44 pm Title: Part V

I just started reading this fic and I love it! Spike's pregnant, that's hilarious! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: yay! I'm glad! I don't think I've seen any other fics where Spike was pregnant, and I thought...that could be really funny. I'm glad you've been enjoying it.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 09:33 pm Title: Part V

How on earth did it get transferred to Spike? Oh, goodness.......and Buffy reacted as expected, with the You stole my baby! bit.....poor Spike.......men have thicker tougher skin, so hopefully he won't have a problem with the stretch marks, unless his belly pops very suddenly overnight. Where is the baby sitting, by the way, and getting nourishment? Ooo! He's going to need a lot of human food........

At least the transfer will be done magically, as I don't think Spike wants a scar across his belly for a Cesarean. Buffy getting a third trimester baby....wow, that'd be really weird, just suddenly having all that! And she's gonna be the crazy pregnant lady, LOL.

Glad Xander's enjoying this so much. He can be next!!

Author's Response: The two spells at the beginning interacted in an unforeseen way. lol And it's sitting where it would be if Spike were a woman; spells are fun things like that. And a pregnant Xander would be quite funny...I may have to look into that!

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 09:32 pm Title: Part V

OMFG! This is awesome! I was laughing my booty off!

Author's Response: ha, I'm glad! It made me laugh writing it...

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 09:28 pm Title: Part V

If only we could make this a permanent for all Man-Kind. Funny... Funny.

Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Ha, I know. Wouldn't that be amazing? Even if you could just trade off every once in a while...

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 11:55 am Title: Part IV

Spike pregnant? OMG that is gonna be too funny.Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: haha, yeah. I'm having to reign myself in from going too crazy. But it's FUN. Wait until he gets a baby bump ;)

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 08:32 am Title: Part IV

Just started reading, look forward to more.

Author's Response: Glad you like it!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 02:52 am Title: Part IV

I SO KNEW IT!!!! I didn't want to say anything in case I was wrong, cause that'd be a way weird wrong, but I knew it!! This is like the movie Junior, well, sorta... I love it!

Author's Response: :D Haha, yeah. I don't really like human Spike, unless in a totally AU human. And Spike pregnant? Can you think of a funnier situation to put him in?

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 12:50 am Title: Part IV

Aww, sorry about RL, hon, I hope all goes well with you. *hugs* I'll def. be around reading this story cause it's just gotten...ok, I'm speechless, but in a good way.

OMG!!!!!!!!! Spike's preggers?!!!!!!!! Ok, I'm def. in and waiting for more. Take care!!

Author's Response: It's getting much better! And I really hope you enjoy what I've got planned!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 10:26 pm Title: Part IV

Ah yes, the doctor's appointment. Buffy is very nervous indeed. Sheila is a good nurse. Buffy didn't even notice that she took some blood :)
And a big shock for Buffy: Spike is! Therefore the craving for real food and the body functions. So he can assure a living environment where the baby can grow. Wow, that pregnancy will sure be different :)
Till next chapter! Looking forward to it.

Author's Response: It's going to be rather amusing ;)

Reviewer: sammi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 10:17 pm Title: Part IV

no, why did you have to do that? i was starting to get worried that he might be pregnant, but i told myself that was ridiculous and wouldn't happen. i really wish i was right. i wanted buffy to be pregnant and spike hopefully turning human, this just ruins everything for me. it was an okay story before that, but i don't know if i will be continuing now. maybe i'll give one more chapter a chance, but spike being pregnant is just too weird for me.

Author's Response: Nah, Spike as a human in a non AU fic? Doesn't work, he's too awesome as a vampire. And if it's not your cup of tea, then it's not your cup of tea.

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