[Report This]Date: 03/08/2008 - 04:52 pm Title: We meet at last
oooh very interesting.hope u continue
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2007 - 07:57 pm Title: We meet at last
please update again soon :)
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2007 - 05:51 pm Title: We meet at last
Buffy's a wous in this on. Loved it!!! More please!!
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: We meet at last
best story i have read in a while!!!!!keep those updates coming!!!!
Author's Response: lol glad ya ike
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2007 - 04:26 pm Title: We meet at last
Mmm so they even took some of Buffy's stuff too. But Spike doesn't understand what the kidnapping means to Buffy. He only sees that Drusilla is ill.
Seems as if these two won't get along easy at first
:) Till next chapter
Author's Response: No they wont but ya noe wat they say the course to love never runs smooth
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2007 - 06:41 am Title: We meet at last
powerful chapter..poor Buffy, but if Spike breaks her how does he expect her to fix Dru?
looking forward to next chapter
Author's Response: spikes not smart at the moment ^^ he'll get better
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2007 - 04:45 am Title: We meet at last
come on buffy, kick some spike ass! i love it! update soon!
Author's Response: lol will do thanx for the review
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2007 - 12:26 am Title: We meet at last
Wow...that was messed up. I hope he falls in love with her and she makes him hurt. Update soon please!
Author's Response: yeah well maybe eventually *wink wink*
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2007 - 11:09 pm Title: We meet at last
THIS IS REALLY GOOD SO FAR HONEY, I'M LIKING THIS , HE'S SO EVIL, CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. I LIKE EVIL SPIKE WHO'S REDEEMED BY HIS LOVE OF BUFFY , JUST ONE FAVOR , I HATE ANGEL AND DRU, CAN WE KILL THEM OFF. SORRY NOT TRYING TO TELL YOU WHAT TO DO REGARDLESS I INTEND TO READ THIS THROUGH THE FINISH.
Author's Response: lol woah woah so many capital words so fast lol anyway dru i can kill off for you and i dont like them both that much either but angel i cant seem to get rid of thankfully he wont me in the picture much cause keep in mind he never met buffy and buffy never fell in love with him..
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2007 - 09:41 pm Title: We meet at last
Ouch! Pretty harsh treatment right off the bat..and not too smart on Spike's part. I would think that he'd need and want her goodwill for helping Dru out. I can't see that fear is going to be really all that effective in motivating Buffy to give Dru the best help. Threatening her friends and family is bad enough but torturing her by leaving her tied up all night? Given Buffy's personality I would think that instead of making her submission such treatment is only going to make her mad and more difficult.
Author's Response: yeah you'll find spike doesnt have the best of tempers hes so used to everyone minus his now dead mom and whistler doing as he says and whistler tried to warn her
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: When Angels Cry…
Quite promising so far. I must doubt Robin's intelligence though. It's not very clever to hit Buffy over the head, when she's supposed to be using that head later, especially for something as important as therapy.
Author's Response: Right ^^ hes not suposed to be the smartest one here hes kinda a henchmen type of person....but hes still sweet and kool
Author's Response: Right ^^ hes not suposed to be the smartest one here hes kinda a henchmen type of person....but hes still sweet and kool
Author's Response: Right ^^ hes not suposed to be the smartest one here hes kinda a henchmen type of person....but hes still sweet and kool
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 04:39 pm Title: When Angels Cry…
(If you don't find someone for a banner try some Livejournal communities. I can give you the links).
I wonder if Whistler is right, kidnapping Buffy will ruin everything for her... Ah I see. Her mother is ill, her patients depending on her and she missing her friend's wedding.
Seems as if Spike is gonna do what he planned; Buffy is taken. I wonder how long it will take Buffy's friends to notice that he vanished.
Author's Response: yeah it would suck i mean imagine to have all these things going on in your life and then to be taken away from it all...to disapoint all those people...so it hard for her and whistler gets that cause that happened to dru she was just taken but spike is blinded to that little fact...
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 04:23 pm Title: A little bit of two worlds…
Jonathan was almost right.. Spike didn't like to hear the news of Drusilla being insane. ~ I wonder what Drusilla meant with 'will fill you with ashes'.
I thought first that would take place in the past but after Buffy mentioned TV I was sure it wasn't *g*.
All in all? Love the start of this one :)
Author's Response: Hey yeah jonathon was right poor kid imagine having to tell a easily tempered guy who can be known as spike or william the bloody (and not for his poetry) that his wife has gone off the deep end...I'd send him a letter let him kill the mailman....lol and anyway by the ashes thing its kind of just part of the wacky drusilla ness like in the actual show when they are vamps she always said sunshine burns you taste like ashes...well its kind of a refrence to that shes telling him that sunshine which is buffy will kill them all which doesnt mean literally kill but shes gonna change everything that shes gonna fill him with ashes cause she'll get rid of the darkness...not fully but you get what i mean...i just thought it would be an interesting part for the readers...and thanx for the review
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 02:09 pm Title: When Angels Cry…
Move, more, more please!!! Loved it!!
Author's Response: lol sure thing i'll try to fit in sum more one of these days stay tuned ^^
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 01:59 pm Title: A little bit of two worlds…
Loved it!!!!
Author's Response: thanx i love my reviewers you rock
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 11:07 am Title: When Angels Cry…
kool...robin workin 4 spike.lol.
is faith gona mke n appearance- wt bout dawn??
Author's Response: yeah i thought it would be different to make robin work with spike hope ya dont mind? faith is probably gonna make one later on and dawn will be mentioned but until like more towards the end she wont make one of her wooo look at me im dawn appearances ^^ hope ya liketh
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 08:38 am Title: When Angels Cry…
oooh good second chapter, can't wait to see more.
Saw you asked for a beta, I'd be happy to give it a shot (I've never beta'd for anyone before but if you're just looking for someone to correct grammar etc... then I'm sure it would be fine)
If you're interested my email is squawks101@hotmail.com - let me know!
Author's Response: hey thanx you rock I'll get back to ya on dat when i get my next chapter done
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 07:40 am Title: When Angels Cry…
update update update! did i mention update? i can't wait to read the spuffy first meeting! update asap? please? with a naked spike on top?
Author's Response: lol i promise it wont be a dying torturous wait though im still trying to figure out whether i want bad boy grr spike or suave smirking spike ^^ probbly a mix of the two well stay tuned this chapter was suposed to be posted on monday so who knows i might suprise ya with an early post again^^
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 02:14 am Title: When Angels Cry…
wow...Spike sure is selfish. Update soon please!
Author's Response: yup yup well its not really him being selfish its like...Hes this rich bigshot and he has been for ages and he thinks he can get away with anything so he took land away from angelus when he already had enough for himself and then that all explodes in his face and hes angry bout that but hes also in "love" with dru and theres that saying that you'd do anything for the one you love and he just wants her to get better so hes kinda blinded to all the hurt hes causing ya know?
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2007 - 12:25 am Title: When Angels Cry…
Ooh! Second chapter already. I likey. Pity he couldn't have used chloroform she's gonna have one hellva headache! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: lol yupperz thats gotta hurt but geez didnt anyone ever tell her not to talk to strangers especially freaky ones that find her in dark alleys...live and learn ^^
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2007 - 11:59 pm Title: When Angels Cry…
good story so far
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2007 - 02:57 pm Title: A little bit of two worlds…
Great start and such an original plot too! I hope you get a good beta to help you cos I think this could be very good. Please update soon.
Author's Response: yeah i am in need of a beta i suck at grammer and punctuation and thanx for the great review
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2007 - 10:54 am Title: A little bit of two worlds…
uh oh double trouble!!- is faith or dawn gona b in this fic...they're ace chrachters!!
Author's Response: Faith is probably gonna be there not a main character but she will be there dawn however most likely wont be at least not throughout most of the story. See dawn would be with joyce who doesnt really show up much in the story. I'm just kinda hoping everyone likes this new character of mine in the making she kinda has that faith-ish attitude but shes also nicer wiser. I hope you'll like her stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2007 - 09:00 am Title: A little bit of two worlds…
interesting start. loved the description of Spike and Dru. looking forward to more
good luck with your fisrt fiction i know how hard it can be.
Author's Response: thank you everyones been great with the reviews though so it makes it easier new chapter by monday latest promise
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2007 - 03:07 am Title: A little bit of two worlds…
love it, can't wait for more, want the details, give me more! i'm greedy? lol update soon!
Author's Response: lol well im hoping to make the next chapter bout Spike frantically searching for someone who could help dru...or more like sending sumone to look for him...ya know men to lazy to do their own work sumtimes so yeah buffy gets all captured next chapter wont that be fun ^^ next chapter should be up soon i hope..
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