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Reviewer: denhui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2014 - 03:32 am Title: My Plague

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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2014 - 06:22 pm Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

I enjoyed this. Thought Riley's actions with Spike were believable... I don't think Riley would have done it with pre-meditation, but it felt right that he came to attack, and then, in the throes, he turned it into another type of power-play.

I do think Spike would have fought more during the later scuffle with Riley, after the chip was was fried. Maybe it was the lingering demoralization, but even though he was hobbled, I don't see Riley getting the upper hand that easily. Spike, especially with the kind of rage he would have had, would have continued to lash out... I don't think he would have been so disabled/neutralized by Riley by the time Harmony showed.

A number of typos/word errors, but very nicely done. I like the different premise, and I think it works. Love the sweet, slow romance between Spike and Buffy, and I always like to see when Spike can be friends with Giles and Xander. Nicely done.

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2013 - 01:37 am Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

That was kinda sick, and really great at the very same time.

Kinda a short summary to a long story, but I think it works.

Really though, that story had a lot of entertainment, and I am glad I read it.

Ps. You made me love your Harmony.

Author's Response: It's nice to know this story is still being enjoyed after all this time :) Thanks for taking the time to review! And I adore/get Harm, lol.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2012 - 06:15 am Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

A fitting end for our soldier boy. Love Dru with her metal wings... taking what she needs from those who don't deserve it any more. Just to quiet the voices. A lovely kind of peace for her. Glad the rest of them are letting Spike in. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much--I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2012 - 05:48 am Title: Time...

So love the idea of Dru knowing Glory's secret. Could have made things soo much easier. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: kimberly l Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 - 04:24 pm Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

Awesome, the terror, the angst, the feelings after such a traumatic event, you nailed it, And I love Xander and Spike bonding.

Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Olinka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2008 - 06:55 am Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

I absolutely loved the way Drusilla was portrayed in this story. That's how it should be :) Thanks so much..

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved my Dru--she was damn hard to write, lol. Thanks so much for reviewing :D

Reviewer: Joanna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 05:54 pm Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

This is a truly magnificent story! I love how you interweaved original dialogue with dialogue from the show, it was very realistic. You made amazing use of song lyrics, especially in Buffy's dream, way to use Bohemian Rhapsody! I also think it's great that you wrote about such an important issue - rape - and you did it in a very realistic and truthful way. Way to raise awareness! Overall, I love ths fic!! Thank you for writing it!!!

Author's Response: I think you may have been the only one to notice my Queen reference, so good on you ;) And I'm glad that you enjoyed, and that it came off as believable and true to the characters. Thank you for revieiwing.

Reviewer: sc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 12:21 am Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

wow. that was an awesome story. Is there a sequel in the future?

Author's Response: Perhaps, although, it'd be Drusilla driven, and that may not work for this site...At any rate, it'll be a long time coming if I do. Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 04:21 am Title: Breakdown

OMG! I think i'm gonna cry, I hope riley gets whats coming to him.

Author's Response: I'm glad the story was able to touch you so strongly. And eventually, it gets better. Happy reading :)

Reviewer: fee_kh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 11:22 am Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

Oh WOW. What an ending. And fitting that Riley gets the insaney. *snigger*

Author's Response: Thanks :D Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 - 04:11 pm Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

Great ending. Loved Dru's part in it all. Interesting take on things - she would have been the only one to see through Glory's disguise. You really wrote her part so well - captured the characters' speech patterns throughout.

Author's Response: Thank you :D I figured there was enough angst, and Buffy so didn't need to die later in this fic. Also, writing Drusilla was one of the hardest things ever--I'm glad that I did it right, and that you found it enjoyable. Drinks all around!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2008 - 09:49 pm Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

First: I can't make the font of the chapter bigger, you haven't closed a tag somewhere. ( (without the space and *) The whole chapter is a link for Photobucket. I copy it to word then I can read it too. But now to your story :)
Sad to see it go but the end was good. And a lot happened in the last chapter.
Just loved it.

Author's Response: Wow...I haven't heard this problem anywhere else, and I didn't see anything wrong with it. Maybe you could talk to a mod? I'm not sure how to fix it--sorry. But anyway, glad you enjoyed the tale's end :D There may be a sequel of some kind one of these days...but I have RL to contend with and put "...Within Me" to bed first :P Thanks for all of your support.

Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2008 - 08:20 pm Title: Denial

"You don't even care that I'm leaving, do you? That you might never see me again? You never loved me," he accused, breathing hard.

Buffy sighed deeply, looking off to the side as she thought for a moment. Finally, she looked up at him.

"You're right. I never did."

This is awesome... I would have paid to see this conversation on the show. Eh eh eh

I'm having a blast reading this story, it's amazing! Great job so far!!!

~ Tanja ~

Author's Response: Thanks so much Tanja :D Glad you share my sentiments--lol.

Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 05:16 am Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

Great ending, I loved this story right from the beginning. Keep on writing muchacha, can't wait for more stuff from you.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews and your support. In my spare time (when I have it), I am going to attempt to finish my WIP fic "...Within Me." Not even a fraction as angsty as this, but I think I introduce some interesting things there. Thanks again :D

Reviewer: ochit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:57 am Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

I love this! It's different from the other stories i've read. For one thing Giles and Xander are more understanding about Spike and Buffy's relationship. Even Harmony and Drusilla helped! There are no villains here except Riley who rightly deserved to go insane in the end! Very good, indeed!

Author's Response: I am super glad you loved it :D And I think the circumstances presented in this fic brought out the best of both of them, and greatly advanced Xander's maturity. Happy you enjoyed the ride to its end, and thanks so much for your lovely reviews.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 01:41 am Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

Well...that has to be one of the most original endings I've ever read in a fanfic. All kinds of clever there! And did I mention that I loved it? What a twist, not to mention poetic justice, having Riley restore Drusilla's sanity and be doomed to insanity himself. Bravo!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much :D I didn't know where I was going when I first started this fic, but then it all just kind of clicked. So glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 09:14 pm Title: My Plague

Stop himself from crying out - or just plain crying.
Great line! just found this - great start - i love dark! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much--hope you enjoy the rest of the ride :D

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 08:39 pm Title: "Twisted Logic" and "Don't Cry"

THAT ending was Awesome!!! Call her Justice, indeed!
So very interesting to have Dru be the implement of it. And to be on the receiving end as well, if I interpret correctly, finding sanity (feyness notwithstanding) again, healing for what Angel(us) did to her, both from god's blood & from feeding/leeching sanity from within Riley. Bravo!
It would be oh, so interesting to see where Dru goes from there...(she should go back & give Angel(us) a good thrashing!)...what path a sane Dru would choose. And she killed Ben/Glory to save Spike/Wm. the pain he would've felt in future. Such lovely twists & turns...sure you don't write Dru more often? LOL.
Also would've been good to know if Dru realized that Darla was/would be pregnant...was this why she wanted Lindsey to care for her?
This has been quite the journey, with many pilgrims progressing. Indeed, steps forward then back then forward...almost to the tune of Hokey Pokey the Musical...but more to the tune of A Wonderful Life/Unlife...
Your Xander was far more accepting & insightful than he of the show, but much more as I would've wished the boy turned man to've been. I think you pegged it., that Xander was the loud-voiced linchpin on which Buffy's decisions would have turned. The others I think would have followed, would've fallen into step, whether from apathy or desire to get along.
It's hard to believe it's been a y ear already then. It's been a good ride, sometimes rough, but a good read by a talented author. Thanks for the opportunity to've read and enjoyed it. Oh, and that new banner is gorgeous!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: Wow....this has to be one of the bestest reviews eva!! You know, I had a helluva time writing Dru (I never used a thesauraus so much :P ) And...a Drusilla sequel/crossover thingy may be in the cards someday. But right now RL is kicking my ass, and I'm actually writing a screenplay for those four lovely vamps pre-1900. As for Xander, well, he definitely had the potential to be that type of man (which we see glimpses of halfway through s7), but the writers were just plain silly, and wouldn't let him grow up. The circumstances in my fic (and the abundance of quality time with Spike) created the difference, and bridged the maturity gap for Xander. And I blush from the entirety of your review, and bless you writing that ;) Oh, and the banner was made by the lovely Always_jbj. She's kick ass. ~Scarlet

Reviewer: Shayhop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 09:07 pm Title: Time...

So glad you updated this story!! I have been following it since you started posting and look forward to more chappies!! Great writing! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: I will be updating the ending soon, and it's probably going to be my longest chapter yet. So glad you're enjoying, and that you've been here since the beginning :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 06:02 pm Title: Time...

First: I can't make the font of the chapter bigger, you haven't closed a tag somewhere. The whole chapter is a link for Photobucket. I copy it to word then I can read it too. But now to your story :)
Mmmm Drusilla is coming. But she even took care of Darla first, very thoughtful. So she can help both. But does Spike need help?
*reads on* Buffy and Spike will need time but it seems as if they'll make it. But against Glory, yeah, there they could use some help. ~ OH! And helping she did! I wonder if she'll go as silently as she came or if she'll tell the other, don't let them guess what happened to Glory.
Only one more? Looking forward to it even it's sad that it ends then.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your awesome review :D Yup, just one more chapter. I'm still working on it though--it's going to be a really *long* one. Hope you like the ending as well ;)

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 01:53 pm Title: Time...

Great chapter, live this fic so far!

Author's Response: Thanks so much--glad you're enjoying it :D

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 06:13 am Title: Time...

A big "Yay" for Drusilla! I never thought I'd have a reason to say that.

Author's Response: lol--I'm glad I was able to get you excited about her. Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2008 - 05:51 am Title: Bittersweet Symphony

Just found this story. Loved it!! Can't wait for more. Update soon?

Author's Response: Thank Victoria :D I'll be updating as soon as my beta gets me back the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2007 - 02:20 am Title: Bittersweet Symphony

sweet

Author's Response: Thanks so much :D

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