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Reviewer: Lauren Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2014 - 04:42 am Title: five

LOVED IT! God the description was super eerie and wicked lovely. Please update. 

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Date: 01/29/2011 - 10:01 pm Title: five

I just discovered this story for the first time (probably because I generally avoid long-term WIPs since I know I'll be disappointed that they'll probably never be finished). It seems like you may not have returned to this site since 2007, but if you do still receive messages through here I (and I'm positive many others as well) would really love to see more of this story. I agree with Im_bloody_English that it, if completed, it could be one of the top stories here. Loved your other WIPs, as well. Wish you were still writing Spuffy! :( (If you are posting elsewhere I haven't found it.) Thanks

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2007 - 09:07 pm Title: five

Hi there sweety... I've had a busy summer (hey, met JM for the first time at a con – woo hoo!) but am finally home after a long vacation (while in NY I had to deal with dialup internet, UGHH!) Anyways, in getting caught up with everything around me in the spuffy world and writing, I went over my list and found not only have you not updated lately but I forgot to leave you the review I promised. I am so sorry sweety, but here it is.

It was of course, a brilliant chapter and accurate depiction of the treatment towards woman for the times. Angleus... shudders - what a creep, but I love it. It adds to the rich fabric of your story.

On a different note, I hope this review/message find you well and just busy with RL stuff. I really want to see you continue with FOG - it's bloody brilliant so far and I’m not just saying that - I can see it taking it's place among the ranks here in the top ten. I know I'm a huge fan.

Many hugs and kisses to you and your muse darling. Hope to hear from you soon. Take care.

Reviewer: lovebites Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 06:16 pm Title: five

Please write more! this is a favorite of mine already!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2007 - 09:58 pm Title: five

I hope you're updating soon. I really miss this story, it's very good xoxo

Reviewer: aki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 - 12:05 pm Title: five

hey. aesum plot u hv goin here. plz update soon....cn barely wait fr some spuffy action. tc:)

Reviewer: I'll never tell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2007 - 07:05 pm Title: five

I really love this fic, please update again soon :)

Reviewer: Jolynn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 - 10:52 pm Title: five

Very dark picture painted for us, delving deeper into Buffy's life. It just kills me how she takes everything, but she has no choice. The mind can cry out and the heart can break, but the tongue and the body must obey when you are considered a nothing. She risked a great deal by telling him she abhored his kisses. She has not even one friend in her miserable life, no one to turn to, no one to even listen, only despair. Very bleak indeed.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 12:39 pm Title: five

You have drawn a very bleak picture of Buffy's life - in fact the lives of certainly village women in general and as such, successfully set the scene for this abhorrent and routine existence to be changed, altered, upset - whatever - by Lord William Denver, a peer of the realm but a renegade at heart, no less.

Out of the frying pan .......

Enjoying your story.

Reviewer: Haley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 04:12 am Title: five

Oh, I meant to say "by William"...not my...hehe. Must have been a freudian slip...

Reviewer: Haley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 04:10 am Title: five

Loved it. I'm surprised my William's "hint" of pity/compassion for Buffy, however small it may be. I wonder what will change his mind about her and make him steal her away before the wedding? Maybe Liam will do something stupid and William does it to get revenge...or he could actually attracted to her despite the dirt and all. Anyway, great chapter and looking forward for more. :-D

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 01:58 am Title: five

Women were such chatal back then and usually not as important as livestock! We've come a long way baby!. I loved the chapter. It really clarified the relationship between Hank, Liam and Buffy. And I know William isn't done with our soon to be wedded couple. His wheels are turning and he'll ponder and such, but in the end, he'll get Buffy, if no other reason than to show Liam (and Hank) that he can.

Eventhough it's the way of the times, I still get riled up by Liams mistreatment of Buffy and I hope at some point he (and hank) will get their comupence!

I can't wait until William sees Buffy all cleaned up though, because I'm sure that will put a whole different twist on things.

More please.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2007 - 12:12 am Title: five

Ohhhhhh I hate Liam.... die die die

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: five

I rarely post a second comment but first, let me apologize for the misspelling of Williams surname. For some reason I just can't attach Denver to the character. I keep thinking Devonshire, Devon for short. Anyway I'm sorry, next as I sat back and thought more about this chapter, it occured to me how cruelly women were treated then and throughout history but what really got to me was the fact that women are still treated like this in some cultures. Nothing more then possessions. It's a heartbreaking reminder of how far we have yet to go.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 09:09 pm Title: five

I am really enjoying your work - keep up the great job!

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: five

Whew! I thought Liam was going to rape her right there in the field with the warning you gave. So Liam thinks it would be so easy to kidnap Lord Devon. Guess Willy's demise hasn't dissuaded him. Great chapter, thanks.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 07:39 pm Title: five

Grrr Angel is a (insert something bad here). Buffy goes from a father that beats her to a husband that loves to beat her too

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 05:10 pm Title: five

I reiterate...Angel is a piece of sh**!

And I love the play on words!

Can't wait until William finds out just how Liam punished his 'beloved' betrothed.

spuf

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 05:05 pm Title: five

Both Quotes come from Reptile Boy...

Angel..
When I kiss you, you won’t wake up from a deep sleep and live happily ever after.”

Buffy..
“When you kiss me” she whispered, “I want to die.”




Reviewer: Scarlet Ibis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 02:18 pm Title: five

"When you kiss me, I want to die."

Did she say that on the show? Anyway, patiently waiting for William to return :D

Reviewer: Mollie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 01:09 pm Title: five

Great update! As much as I hate Liam, I am very sure he will get his.I cant wait for more!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 01:07 pm Title: five

Some more background.. sad for Buffy. To be a commodity .. for trade and not love. To be beaten and dirty.

And nice twist on words and meanings from BtVS “When you kiss me” she whispered, “I want to die.” And mean it ... this time.

Enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2007 - 12:50 pm Title: five

well constructed chapter...looking forward to more

Reviewer: lostourist Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2007 - 04:41 pm Title: four

really wonderful!!cant wait for the next update!!!(which i hope will be really really long)!!!!

Author's Response: It's kind of long and I had to work out a few kinks. Im glad that you are enjoying it. Hopefully the non con doesn't phase everyone too much. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 - 02:05 am Title: four

I don't really find the past chaps confusing, more I find the need to pay greater attention than the common tale as you are writing this in what I deem a "regency" type turn of phrase. You are writing in a time period where people were more eloquent in their speech if educated and/or somewhat different in their structure of the English language. I find it wonderful to read and have faith that all will merge together satisfactorily as the tale moves on.

I LOVE how you have (either knowingly or unknowingly) written lines or present scenarios that could be construed as showing Lord Denver in an almost vampiric light.... his lack of reflection in the marble....as red as the blood of a virgin....).

I am looking forward to Lord Denver exercising his "rights" over the future Mrs. Liam eventhough you have warned it will be noncon! I appreciate that you are not willing to sacrafice the plot over the possibility of some people reading and then flaming eventhough they have been warned repeatedly!

Keep up the excellent work with this tale and write it YOUR WAY! It's your tale, you are just letting us borrow the entertainment value of it! Thank you for that.

Excellent read and I look forward to more!

Author's Response: I read this review over and it made me blush. Thank you for your very kind words. With the whole vampire allusion thing... I can't help it. That aspect of the character in canon was so emphasized that I can't ignore it. In this FF it works well in terms of metaphors but that's boring and stuff so I won't go there. Im really glad that someone picked up on it though. The whole taking of Buffy shall hopefully not be too traumatic for everyone. Im going to get a couple of perspectives on it so I don't end up on fire. Thank you for supporting the non con aspect. I've read reviews with other FFs where the material was so obviously non con and still people thought it was acceptable to flame... Thank you so much for reviewing. Hope you like the new chappie.

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