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Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2009 - 04:38 pm Title: Epilogue

So different, but intense and very Spuffy. You delved deep with this one, and struck gold.

Well done.

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2009 - 03:03 am Title: Epilogue

I don't know if I have left feedback for this one before now but wanted to let you know I love your writing. I aim to read this one again as a lot has slipped my mind. That's what happens to me if I don't read something relatively all at once.

Reviewer: fyreburned (Kara) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2009 - 02:02 am Title: Epilogue

Although a difficult topic, you did a wonderful job with this enthralling story. It captivated me from the beginning. I'm sure it was hard on you to write it, but thank you.
My bestie and former roomie was a victim of incestuous child abuse. Her own dad would go into the 'loo w/her to molest her. He had a deal with her that she traded off herself to him to keep her younger sisters safe from his interest. Luckily, she is the best-adjusted person I've ever met to have lived thru such a thing. Amazingly, she still has contact with her dad, but her daughters do *not* visit there without her present.
You're right--- Child/Social Svcs *should* be vigilant for truly abusive situations. Very often, those they trust, those that we as a society think we should be able to trust, are the abusers: Dads,step-parents, boyfriends, uncles, older brothers, grandfathers, nurses, teachers, coaches... it could be anybody, yet at least in reports and the media there does often seem to be a pattern to the abuser. And not to condone the hyper-vigilance, jumping at shadows, that some Child-Svc agencies seem to end up doing. It just seems like they should be able to get their heads out of their collective asses and do something effectively, doesn't it?
I enjoyed your tale, and the ending was lovely. Again, thanks.
~~Kara

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Date: 12/09/2009 - 01:53 am Title: Epilogue

Wonderful ending.

Reviewer: fyreburned (Kara) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2009 - 10:06 am Title: Twelve

Somehow I'd missed a couple of chapters of this. I'm so glad I saw the update on this from you! Very moving and heartfelt. I'm so glad you wrote this. I've followed it from the very beginning.
As always, I'll be on the lookout for more from you!
~~Kara

Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted this to touch everyone, and I'm glad it's done so.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2009 - 05:53 am Title: Twelve

You have taken a subject matter that is not usually filled with grace and hope, and given it both. It's very beautifully written. Although, I know every story must come to an end, I'm sad to see it go because it's one of the best Spuffy's I've ever had the pleasure of reading.

Author's Response: Thank you. Thank you. I tried to infuse this with all those emotions, and I'm so very glad I managed the feat. Thank you.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2009 - 10:15 pm Title: Twelve

No child should have to suffer this. Very true.
It's good that they got at last Angelus, putting them behind bars now.
Even if I knew that Buffy and Spike were able to get away it's good to see them safe in England now.
Sad to see the story come to an end in a way.

Author's Response: I know what you mean. It is almost sad to see this one go. But end it must, and now's the time. Thanks, Cordy, for always reading everything I write. Your support means so much. *hugs*

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2009 - 10:53 pm Title: Eleven

This story is very well written, you took many difficult subjects and made them into a good story. dark, but good. This story dealt with the subject matter in a sensitave way. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted to give the subject matter the respect it deserves.

Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 04:07 am Title: Eleven

Awww Connor is too cute. I love this stroy and I can sense a conclusion soon! Can't wait!!

Author's Response: I'm actually working on it, so hopefully it won't be too long. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 - 03:36 am Title: Seven

Another great chapter. You really show the affect and the amount of people rape affects. On to the next chapter :D

Author's Response: Like a pebble in a pond, the effects are far reaching. Thank you for sticking with this.

Reviewer: Cate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 07:02 pm Title: First

Wow. What a chapter. Your writing is just impeccable. The mood you set right from the first sentence is so brilliantly chilling. Just Perfect. Of course no one (well at least I know I don’t!) likes reading such horrific stories, but you’ve compelled me!

Author's Response: I wanted to grab my readers by the throat and it seems I've managed that. Thank you for braving the subject matter. I very much appreciate it.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2009 - 07:50 pm Title: Eleven

Loved the chapter. Painful but good if you know what I mean. Hope your muse will keep cooperating.

Author's Response: For the longest time it hasn't. It seems to be stirring -- albeit lazily.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2009 - 06:08 am Title: Eleven

Love the characterizations in this story. Really enjoying it. Unique story line.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 12:46 am Title: Eleven

Wonderful! I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2009 - 10:41 pm Title: Eleven

Awesome but sad chapter. You're an amazing writer.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2009 - 10:41 pm Title: Eleven

I know the song but reading the lyrics the music isn't distracting from the meaning (hope that makes sense).
*sigh* Sounds as if Darla didn't make it, Angelus killed her. (When I imagine Darla I see her how she looked in 'Dexter'.) A strong fighter but even if the fight was won, she lost.
They (Buffy and Connor) were lucky that they got out (escaped) both.
~ Good to see an update :) Enjoyed it even if the chapter was tough.

Author's Response: It does make sense. No, Darla didn't make it. Both Buffy and Connor were lucky to make it out with their lives.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2009 - 03:38 pm Title: Eleven

You are very good at tugging at the heartstrings - Spike's first encounter with Buffy at her grave in Origins as just one case (out of many) in point - but this ...... this does exactly that, but there is no sentimentality or history that impacts on the coming together of these two young people. They are compliciit in that they both suffer from the scorching identity of 'victim' at the hands of the same bastard, but really the struggle, at its most poignant, is happening years in future, when they are safe and together, but still struggling. Will some crisis have to be reached, confronted and dealt with, or are you going to still their troubled waters some other way?

Lovely is the wrong word to use for this story, but your competent, deliberately short-sentenced narrative makes their random thoughts and gently diverse points-of-view (and you manage to give us both) into a strangely uplifting and compelling read. Well done, Niamh.

Author's Response: I don't think there's anything I can say to this but -- thank you. And for the most part, the storm has past. They must deal with the aftermath. I think they've been through enough. . .

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2008 - 06:18 pm Title: Ten

I understand this was hard to write. Very intense chapter, but yet beautifully written. As always, looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: Well, the long wait is over. It's not the easiest thing I've ever done, but hands down, I think it's the best piece of writing I've ever attempted. Thanks so much for your support throughout this.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2008 - 01:25 am Title: Ten

Although the subject matter is very intense, I'm enjoying this story immensely. It's very well-written and very...real, while still staying true to the basic characterizations of Spike & Buffy. The slow updating is understandable with subject matter such as this. I can imagine that it's not easy on the soul. Kudos to you for not only writing it, but being ABLE to write it.

Author's Response: No, it hasn't been the easiest story I've ever tackled, but honestly? I think it's well worth the angst I have to go through to tell this story. And I've tried really hard to stay true to the characters, while taking them to some pretty dark places. Thank you so much for noticing, and for reading.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2008 - 10:53 pm Title: Ten

Darn... HE was back? Bad timing for Buffy to go back.
Argh... cliffhanger!
Evil! *shudder*
But clever (good chapter).
Looking forward to more; I want to find out what happened to Buffy. Hope she is okay because Darla helped this time. Yet it's a very bad situation for them in the house.

Author's Response: It's a very bad situation, but we all know Buffy's safe in the end, and so is Connor. . . but we'll see what happens otherwise. Thanks for sticking with this, sweetie.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2008 - 10:39 pm Title: Ten

Oh God how horrible! Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2008 - 03:25 pm Title: Ten

This chapter gave me chills, so I can only imagine how hard it must have been for you to write it. I love this story and will wait for the next chapter for however long it takes!

*hugs*

Author's Response: It wasn't an easy one, that's for sure. I'm trying to keep up with it, but as it's winding down, I'm almost reluctant to let it go.

Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2008 - 12:32 pm Title: Ten

I don't know how i've managed to miss this amazing but very difficult story for all this time.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you found it. I hope it's not too harsh a read.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 09:41 pm Title: Nine

So it was about William's mother that had died. Hard for him to get used to having her lost too.
~ Really enjoyed the update; sad to hear it comes to an end.

Author's Response: I don't know when I'm going to finish this, it may actually be a while. . . Thanks Cordy, for all your support. . . through everything.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 07:42 am Title: Nine

I just found this story and decided to give it a go. It's wonderful, darling, and dark it is, but with hope imbued in every chapter. I'll be watching for the next chapter when the muse lets it go :)

Author's Response: I wish I knew when that was going to be; because I've got all this . . . stuff bottled up and I need to get it out. I'm glad you decided to try and get through this. Thanks, I really do appreciate it.

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