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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter 21

You have great plot ideas, and are pretty good at dialogue, but you are "telling" instead of "showing" a lot of the "action."

Reviewer: silverforest11 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 25

awesome story!!!!!

Reviewer: Jessy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2007 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 2

Sorry, I just confused the fics... Please ignore my last review.

Author's Response: Thank is okay.

Reviewer: Jessy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2007 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

Why would he still be tied up? She let him touch her son, and then tie him up? :S

Author's Response: Don't worry we all make mistakes, gets confusing when you read alot of fics.

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2007 - 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 25

I read it, and even thought its a good idea I didt like the sty in which you wrote it. I´¨m not yoused to reading stroy in presnt tense. its a orginal style but it doesnt fit my prefered writing styles.

Author's Response: Sorry the style wasn't for you, I have been trying to write my other stories in past tense, but this one was already written and typed.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2007 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 25

Excellent fic! Hope you write the sequel!

Author's Response: Not sure if there is it won't be for a while.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2007 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 25

So Buffy can walk again! :) That's good! :) Liked the ending. / Ariadne

Author's Response: THank you.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2007 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter 24

Oh, what a great chapter! Loved :)

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 23

Oh, the new house! I wonder how they will decorate it? :)

Author's Response: I wonder.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2007 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 22

Great update! :)

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 21

Aww, Willow and Tara :) So sweet. So Buffy and Spike are looking for a house. Nice :)

Author's Response: well this is season 4 so yeah Willow and Tara are getting the start, sort of dropped hints chapter 4 or 5. Thanks.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 21

Love it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 21

Really great chapter! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 20

Really loving this! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 19

Oh, I must have missed this chapter...
Good update :)

Author's Response: no worries had some problems last week and start of this so some were posted late in day or not posted. Thanks

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 20

So Buffy's going home :)

Author's Response: Yep she is going home.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2007 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 19

Loved the spuffy chapter! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2007 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 19

She's getting better! Love it!!

Author's Response: Yep only a few more left.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2007 - 06:07 am Title: Chapter 18

I hope she'll recover. Spike takes good care of her :)

Author's Response: he does, I really wanted to capture his sensitive side we saw with Dru. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2007 - 01:22 am Title: Chapter 18

Such a great story depth and spuffy.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2007 - 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 18

Poor Buffy. Hope things get a lil better soon!!!

Author's Response: I am sure they will.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2007 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2007 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter 17

Love it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: yep more will come.

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2007 - 02:11 am Title: Chapter 17

Glad to see the recovery

Author's Response: Thanks it will be a slow process.

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