awesome fic, you gonna update soon

The demon showed Buffy what happened to Spike; it made her really jealous / possessive. I wonder if that was the intent behind it (doing so)? And again, the demon was back to William (yellow eyes). It sounds as if Buffy wants to claim Spike. Looking forward to what will happen. Well I hope too that neither Buffy nor Spike will die fighting the First :)

Okay that was slightly confusing, but I loved, it please don't stop righting it.

Wow! What a powerful chapter! Think I have an idea what's going on, but think I'll wait for the next chapter to see if I'm right. Great story.

Author's Response: Lol, well we'll just have to see :). Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad that you are enjoying it!

Oh Buffy likes what she sees :) And it brought memories back for the demon. The demon always wanted William? So the demon is like a second (or third person, depending on how you count: William, Demon, Spike).
And the demon was back into Spike for a short time.
Things are getting interesting.
PS: Did closing the tag not work (before "Spike watched")? Can be I'm wrong.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and thanks for catching that Cordykitten, I accidently forgot to close it after Buffy's last thought :)

oh that was good and interesting about his past and stuff.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Loved it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: lol I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Can I just say no self respecting British male would ever shop at the GAP, I have not found a single article of clothing to my liking at that store ever.

Other than that, it's good to see Dawn and Spike getting along a bit better.

It will be interesting to see what happens after the fight with the first is over, wonder if Spike gets his power back and if so if he turns Vamp or part vamp as he would get back his power but not be turned.

Also if Buffy keeps the powers does it mean she'll not age and be imortal like a Vamp?

Interting idea for a fic
Update soon
Harry

Author's Response: Sorry, couldn't help myself, Spike in teh GAP was just too much to pass up :) All will be revealed in time, I promise. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review.

loved the transformation, not only of Spike but of Dawn's attitude. looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked her reaction. I personally have always been a fan of the Spike/Dawn friendship.

I kinda want to smack Dawn.That and tell her about when Xander was possessed by the hyena spirit because it's incredibly hypocritical of him to go on about Spike attacking Buffy when he did the same. Spike tried to make restitution, Xander never did .

Author's Response: Yeah, Dawn is definatley a little confused. Maybe we will just have to clear that one up ;) Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! :)

Great chapter!! You've described Spike's fears and first foray outside so well, and especially love that Dawn was the one to see all this. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I was wondering if Dawn was the right choice or not, but the Dawn/Spike interactions have always been some of my favorites so I figured I'd give it a shot. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Poor Buffy! She sure got the short end of the stick in all of this! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) And she does seem to be rather out of sorts dosent she?

Can Xander get run over by a semi truck?? thanks.

Author's Response: lol well I did give it some thought...