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Reviewer: darkhope88 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2010 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 31

Aw. This is such a great story. I loved how you had Buffy and Spike together in the beginning. So cute and I loved reading every minute of it.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2008 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 31

Oh I can't wait to see what happens, dinner and then he has rented a hotel, will it include Buffy staying at it.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2008 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 31

So glad you updated so fast. I've become addicted to your fic! Was surprised Buffy heard from Spike so soon! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2008 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 31

HMMM very promising , can't wait for more. Gotta say though he is kinda a cold but he's been that way throughout this story , don't care as long as it's towards Fred now . I totally understand Joyce's attitude. Update again soon.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2008 - 03:42 am Title: chapter 30

Just found your fic and love it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: thank you I'm glad your enjoying it and thanks for taking time out to tell me.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 04:46 pm Title: chapter 30

I just read this story today. I don't understand why people think Spike is a jerk at all to Buffy. I thought he was actually pretty nice about it if you ask me. Believe me it could have gotten a lot worse. I probably would have been a lot worse to someone if they lied to like this. LOL Buffy betrayed Spike big time. This wasn't a little lie it was a pretty big lie. He could have gone to prison and lose his career. So, I think Buffy got off easy. I also think that at the heat of the moment you are going to say things you might not before. LIke saying I don't want to ever talk to you again. But Buffy shouldn't have given up so easily. If she really wanted to talk to him and explain things then she should have went to his house or something. I know she tried calling but I don't think that was good enough. You need to talk to them face to face. And what Spike said to Buffy was true. Teenagers always think they are adults. Playing a grown-up game. But they are not and when an adult tells them this. They might say it hurtful but that is probably because they are hurt themselves. So, I just don't see Spike being a jerk to Buffy at all and I don't think he really did any wrong.

Author's Response: thank you. I was truly taken back when I had someone write that they weren't even going to bother finishing this story because they believed he was to harsh on her. I kinda stopped working on it for like a hmmm... year. but i'm back and I'm just glad there are people who still care about it.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 12:46 am Title: chapter 30

Oh why did he not stop her tell her how he really felt, well there is still hope.

Loved it

Author's Response: thank you so much for *all* of your reviews I know I didn't answer them like I shouldhave, I just wanted you to know that I read each and every one of them.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 12:39 am Title: chapter 29

Oh they are talking I am glad you updated.

I loved it I wonder where they will go from there.

Reviewer: jJO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 12:04 pm Title: chapter 30

ok, now i didn't get this whole chapter except for Buffy finding out Spike and Fred have broken up (thank God ,for good i hope) but nothing was said about them ,their feelings for each other or any kind of future possibilities, this chapter was rather vague and beat around the bushy ,kinda , or maybe i'm just dense , or it's to early in the morning , i don't know i guess i need more to figure it out. Update soon , i really love this fic.

Author's Response: I want it to be vague and there are bushes to be beat!! I just don't think that it's in good taste that Fred's toothbrush is still in the bathroom and he's talking futures with Buffy . JMHO

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 11:31 am Title: chapter 30

I'm so happy that you're back updating this story. Keep 'em coming.

Author's Response: I'm glad I'm back to updating too! I had lost my way for a bit. I know my destination, I just couldn't choose my path.

Reviewer: DevilishGurl02222 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 03:28 am Title: chapter 30

they didnt finish their where do we go from here speeches! dang it! aww!!!! hooked still update soon! please please!

Author's Response: i'm doing my best to do that now, just trying to get buffy heads out of the clouds as we speak

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2008 - 10:54 am Title: chapter 29

What do u mean " what the hell's he doing? I hope he's not having 2nd thoughts , to bad for Fred, he better top with the yo-yo routine and stop hurting buffy already. I hope you can update again soon.

Author's Response: don't worry that 'what the hell is so much bigger than just Fred. Honestly, don't ya think.

Reviewer: DevilishGurl02222 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2008 - 07:26 am Title: chapter 29

i love this story! i just started reading it and i'm already a fan!!! loves it! update as soon as you can! i'm sooo hooked!

Author's Response: thank you so much!! this is my first fan fic and it's a labor of love

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2008 - 02:46 am Title: chapter 29

I'm absolutely delighted to see this fic updated! I was really into it when all of a sudden it pulled a disappearing act. Nice it see it's return!

Author's Response: that you so much! that chapter has been sitting on my computer for way to long. i'm partly done with the next one and I will be wrapping up *maybe* in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: SunshineSlayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2007 - 02:10 am Title: chapter 28

omg i love it! please continue asap ... its amazing.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2007 - 12:44 am Title: chapter 28

Yes they broke, great now make him grovel for the way he treated poor Buffy. Gets better and better each chapter. Great writing.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 05:40 pm Title: chapter 1

Love your story! Please write more soon!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 10:31 am Title: chapter 28

must have cared something or he would not have been sitting at a Bar drinking, and what was Fred on a bout with all the time she spent with Wesley and now telling him she was taking off to England for atleast 3 months and didn't tell him soon because she didn't think she would get it,

It her and Spike were together should they not have talked about it before she applied with it being a possiblitly.

Sorry rant done, I loved the chapter.

Author's Response: sometimes we do things that aren't in our best interest to hold of the badness you know is coming if you do right. Fred knew his reaction thus they had small argument and it wasn't until is was fact that she brought it up

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 10:22 am Title: chapter 27

your question about fred/spike is actually spred I found out on a nother site that host spike/fred stories.

Reviewer: Eagle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 05:41 am Title: chapter 28

Very smooth transition from Fred back to the beginnings of Spuffy. And I like the way that you have Spike examining the reasons that he cut Buffy off three years ago. He definitely had a right to be angry but cutting her out of his life like that was a bit extreme. So it is nice to hear an explanation of why that happened.

Author's Response: thank you! I wanted people to see that yeah he might have been a jerk but here are the reasons and yeah they may be crap but they are what they are.

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 05:39 am Title: chapter 28

yay! lovely chapter! Hope to see more soon! ;)

Reviewer: diceanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 10:31 pm Title: chapter 27

oh! Maybe Fred will leave him for Wesley and Buff will find someone else!! Then, who will he have?! No one! *mumbles* the jerk...

Author's Response: he'll always have us.....

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 10:27 pm Title: chapter 26

Oh wow... When did Spike turn into such an ass? And, HE wants to talk? He had his chance three years ago, repeatedly. He said that he loved Buffy, and I get that he was hurt, but... Maybe he didn't really care about her that much.

And jeez. I can't believe how mature Buffy is acting. Almost seems she should get over Spike and find someone worothy of HER.

I'm kinda scared to see what the next chapter is... hope I don't have to stop reading. :(

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 09:38 pm Title: chapter 27

WOW!
This story is awesome. I love the plot and your writing! I can't wait for more so please update soon!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2007 - 07:30 pm Title: chapter 27

Enjoying this, thanks for updating.

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