I'm glad you updated this story, I really like it. Hoping for more to read soon.

tee hee. how lovely!

Cute. and yay! Spuffy!

Oh I loved the chapter :) I hope your muse will let you write more. This chapter made me smile, not only Dawn because she was right :)

oh please update i love this story xxx

yay kissage! Great ending, can't wait for the next chapter.

I tried to email you back, but for some reason hotmail gave me a delivery failure notification. Anyway, here is my response. :)

I didn't mean to make you feel bad earlier. I'm sorry! I wasn't trying to behave like a prima donna bitch, lol. Actually, I was joking in my review (about the "ouch" I mean), but my smiley graphic didn't show up for some reason, so I guess it came off differently than I intended. A lot of people were turned off and abandoned the story during Part II and then picked back up during Part III, so I understand where you're coming from when you say you took a break from it. But I'm definitely glad you're still reading it. Originally, it was supposed to be a strictly "William" story - complete in one part and ending without his being turned. Obviously, the Muse had other ideas.

Please, please don't be embarrassed to have me read your story. I think it is good. Like I said, I very rarely read high school fics, so it's unusual for me to find one that holds my attention. Yours has. Plus, I'm just a sucker for William. :-)


Author's Response: I used the site to email you, so it probably didn't like that for a reply-to.

I felt so bad. Didn't think you were a prima donna bitch at all. I always intended to read the whole story. I'm going to start from the beginning because my brain is a sieve. I can enjoy it all over again, lol. I wasn't planning to skip the newly turned Spike chapters. I want to read them, I just uh...wanted there to be Spuffy light at the end of the tunnel? I think it's a credit to how well you wrote William that people were so sad to see him turned. I'm glad the story continued past your original ending. :)

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. The only reason I started a high school fic was because of the challenge at Spuffy Fantasy (which I just realized I've failed to update in forever - oops - Livejournal is not my friend). High school is *cough* years back for me.

Thanks for reading :)

You *were* glued to my story? Ouch. I guess that means you aren't anymore. But I digress.

Generally, I avoid high school stories like the plague, but any time William's name crops up I find myself compelled to read. There are so few stories about him. The anger management issue is a unique touch; most writers portray him as a complete victim. It's nice to see that he isn't one here. Interesting start.

Author's Response: I love FtTP! Actually, I should check it now and leave reviews on my second time through. I read it when I was still lurking *hangs head*. I sent you an email which I hope you got.

I'm almost embarrassed to have you look at my story, given the quality of your writing, but thanks for giving it a try.

Oh don't worry, Ethan isn't always the bad guy in a story. Just when you see a person that is 'normally' bad you can't be sure when reading a fanfic. ;-)
But it seems he isn't really a good guy here. Faking his own death... Ah that's why he wasn't worried about Jenny, she knows.
I really hope the new doctor can help. ~ And it seems Buffy took Dawn's words to heart :-D

Author's Response: No, he's not a particularly good guy here. But he's using his ill-gotten gains to help his sister, so not all bad. He didn't go so far as to fake his death, just disappeared, but yes, Jenny knows. Buffy did! Thanks for reviewing :)

Oooooooh, loved the way you ended the chapter, seems... promising, to say the least! Loved both chapters, the way William and Buffy are acting with each other is lovely and I'm enjoying myself enormously. I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, it is - finally! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks very much for reviewing :)

It seems like Ethan; I think you did good with him. Aw, Buffy went to sit with William. Aw, she agrees that she wants him to teach her everything. Hee.

Author's Response: Yes, William's due a little fluffy Spuffy, I think. Thanks for reviewing!

Ethan's arrival was a surprise, and I enjoyed how cagey he was about his disappearance. You did a good job making him come across just as oily as on the show. Here's hoping this new doctor really is a miracle worker.

Anne being transferred to Los Angeles is going to open up a lot of William's time, so Buffy's timing on finally making a pass couldn't be more opportune. She was actually surprisingly smooth.

Thanks for updating the entertaining story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I feel kind of stupid writing him without looking at the episodes again but I'll admit it I was a little lazy (bad, I know).

I never understood why Joyce didn't see a specialist in a bigger city (well, other than the fact that that would disrupt the show...ok I guess I understand). Buffy's panicking on the inside, I'm sure :) Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you're still enjoying it.