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Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2008 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 28

i think angel is about to bleed:)
loved every word, felt really sorry for riley at the end. more please

Author's Response: Oh yeah, Angel's gonna get it, bwahahahahaha! And I'm glad you felt sorry for Riley (omg, did I just write that?), it means I got it somewhat right that you felt anything at all for him. More soon! Thanks Vara!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2008 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 28

OMG, please don't keep us hanging too long, this is pure torture! I want the next chapter, like right now! *pout* Pretty please? Loved the chapter, btw. :)

Author's Response: I promise Pet, I won't do a THING until I finish this story - and I'm working feverishly on chapter 29 as I type this! LOL, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2008 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 28

Oh GOD - this chapter made me wanna ball my eyeballs out. Spike's dying words in poem form, thinking only of her, Buffy's heartfelt sadness and the horror of rubbing his skin off into dust. And poor Riley. Good on Brandon - I agree with him that Riley needed redemption and for once, I was kinda sad to see Riley die. But a good man, er, thing I suppose, made the right choice in the end. Buffy was just sooooooo tender every time she handled Spike's body, it made it feel real to me, or rather I could feel her emotions. And YAY for the scooby gang being so good to offer up their blood. Absolutely LOVED Buffy's evil smirk in reference to Angel, LMFAO.... ROFL. This was such an 'edge of your seat' kinda chapter chock full of raw emotions, I bow to you oh great one, chanting, 'I'm not worthy... I'm not worthy...' Giggles. Luv ya babes.

Author's Response: Yeah, I was sniffling through the whole thing as I wrote it - GAH! I'm a wreck! I gave Brandon the possibility of several endings and this is the one he wanted, saying, "Mom, everyone deserves a chance at redemption." God, I love him to bits! I always put myself in place of Buffy in this and how would I handle my loved one's body. Of course the denial, the grief, the utter loss someone would feel if they found their loved on in a sitaution like this. LMAO, no bowing necessary - you and Mari made it better than it would've been on its own. Thankee kindly ma'am and luv ya too! MWAH

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2008 - 09:16 am Title: Chapter 27

You are evil. And you have me standing on the edge and looking down into the abyss, ready to jump in order to read more of this. Don't make me jump :P

Author's Response: Yes, I am evil. Don't jump, 'cause Sotia would be seriously PISSED OFF at me for pushing you over the edge! If you value my life at all, you'll step away from that yawning pit of destruction! lol Thanks for the review Andrei!

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2008 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 27

Kill you? Oh, I'm not gonna kill you, hunny...

I'm gonna torture you slowly, gonna be evil and make you pay for all the hurt you've caused Spike and me...

Nah. I'll leave you be, for now. Let you finish this story thinking you got off easy for the angst you gave us, let you sleep at night, let you think I forgave and then...

WHAM!

I'll start nagging and whining and crying until you can take it no more and wanna stick your head in a jag of Nutella to not hear me anymore!!!!

I love you, regardless. Now I hope you're skipping meals and foregoing sleep to give us the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: EEPP! *hides behind Spike's body* But... but I did in the name of ...of... well, not in the name of anything really - I just liked the plot idea. *lower lip trembles* You'd let me think all that? Evil wench. Hey, it's not a threat if you use Nutella! mmmmmm, yummy! Not skipping meals, but I am foregoing sleep to provide you with the next chapter, how's that? MWAH! Yer such a goofball! Hope your time with Andrei was wonderful (of course it was!) and I'll catch up with you later babe! Luv ya!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 27

So, I'm all caught up on this story, had missed a couple of chapters. And you leave it like that?! How evil are you, woman?? *lol* Please tell me there will be another chapter soon! Oh, and loved the updates btw. :)

Author's Response: Apparently I'm all kinds of evil (see previous reviews) and I procrastinate something terrible. NO MORE! I'm finishing this story... NOW! More chapters soon, I swear! Thanks Pet!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 27

noooooooooooooooooo- more please and quickly

Author's Response: Okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk, I will! lol, I'm writing like mad! More soon! Thanks Scaryscouse!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 27

No, no, no, no, no. Where Spuffy is concerned my glass is forever half full (usually the opposite) and I am going to go to bed having just read that and hope that you are writing like mad - please. Really good (not sure if that's the right word) update and yes I would like to but who would finish the story?

Author's Response: Keep it half full Sam, please! I am writing like mad, honestly! I'm going to finish this story before I do anything else, I swear! *giggles* Yeah, who would finish the story? tee hee! Thanks Sam!

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 27

Eeeek!!! It feels like we waited forever for this new chapter and now look what you've done. What kind of critter is your muse?

Author's Response: LMAO! I love you MarzBar! *toes the dirt and looks ashamed* Yeah, ok, I'm sorry... and my muse is a nasty, evil bugger that loves to play with my mind, let alone my stories. I PROMISE, I am writing the next chapter as we're typing, I swear! My vile muse isn't THAT cruel. Thanks MB!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 27

Hee hee hee - you're sooooooo evil and I love it. This was an awesome, action packed chapter - GULPS hard for Spike. Run like the wind Buffy, go save yer man, er vamp. Awesome job as always my twisted sista - luvs ya.

Author's Response: No, you're soooooooooo evil, helping me sort through it! Yup, the action, the drama, the comedy - sounds like a movie trailer, huh? LOL! Buffy can run, she can jump, maybe even fly - but Spike is... gulp... not gonna say it. Thanks my twisted sista! Love ya too!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 27

Good to see an update :) And that Giles has the right opinion on this Angel here (pillock). ;)
Even more when he just took the ring. :(
But Buffy showed him the right way. *gg* I don't think he'll go against her wishes again (at last not if he is stupid). But maybe he is in that fic here ;))
Oh my, poor Spike. :((
At last Walsh stopped Riley (even i only for now).
But what they do with Spike is bad :(
In a way I hope that Buffy can save Spike before he gets a new chip.
Evil, evil cliffhanger girl!

Author's Response: LOL, I loved Giles grousing about Angel - it seemed only right! Oh Angel has a special suprise in store for him - he'll WISH he'd been dusted by the end. I can promise Spike will not get a new chip, so no worries there! Yup, evil cliffie gal here :D Thanks Cordy!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 27

OH NO!!!!! That has to be one of the evilest cliffhangers ever! *sobs* The whole character death warning in the summary has me really worried for poor Spike. :( *crosses fingers and hopes for the best* Can't wait to read more! Great chapter!

Author's Response: The evilest? Probably not, I could have been even more vile to Spike.(is that psychological thing with me? who knows.) You're such a clever gal, Mary - you should be worried ;). More soon, I promise - it's on the home stretch! Thanks for the review babe!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 27

wonderful wonderful update...looking forward to riley and walsh paying for their hubris, they deserve everthing headed thier way.

Author's Response: Oh do they ever... but there's still a twist waiting to happen! Dum dum dummmm! Thanks Vara, you're a gem.

Reviewer: Zaira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 27

Thanks for the GREAT update. It's always great to see there'S a new chapter. So what happens when you bleed a vampire? Please don't let him die! 'sleep until the darkness receded and she was all that he knew.' That was really beautiful. Hopefully more, like soonish?

Author's Response: You'll find out what happens when you bleed a vampire - it's not a pretty sight! Well, actually he's already dead, er undead... dead? Hmmm. Thanks, glad you liked that little line - it seemed fitting for him. More, and yes soonish! Thanks Zaira!

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 27

you are evil!

Author's Response: To the core! But not really - just wait ;) Thanks Jeanie!

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 27

Bad, bad Carrie, making us suffer like this. *sniffles* That last line was so ominous. *bites nails* Although I guess I should be thankful I will be getting the new chapter a bit sooner than the rest of readers. This was such a rollercoaster of a chapter, going from one emotion, from one scene to the other. I absolutely loved the Xander-Buffy interaction throughout the chapter and I wanted to slap Angel silly throughout most of the chapter, too. He's so dense! *shakes head* And of course, whatever happens, I do hope Buffy gets over her qualms of hurting humans to show Maggie Walsh, Riley and Forrest what a monumentally idiotic idea was to mess up with the Slayer and her love. More please? *bats eyelashes*

Author's Response: *peeks head over the counter* Is it safe? lol... Suffer? I'm bawling my eyes out as I'm writing the next chapter! GAH!!! I don't know if thankful is the word I'd choose. Oh well. THANK YOU ever so much for all your clean up, you always come up with the best wording of stuff... like you iron out my kinky mind - that sounded wrong, didn't it? If you liked the Xander/Buffy interaction in this chapter, you're gonna love it in the next! Ooo don't slap Angel - Buffy's got something special planned for him - bwhahahahahaha! I'll get more to ya soon! Love ya! MWAH!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2008 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 26

I love this story more and more, and the way you write never fails to leave me in awe.

Perhaps a bit more Angel bashing could have been squeezed in, but his Angelus-like actions are fun to watch. And the Adam-like Riley - bonus!

I'm sorry that Sanze'ana met such an untimely end, even if she did manage to take down a Gentleman. At least she escaped Riley's advances!

Author's Response: Again, you're with the sweetness - what gives? lol...no, thanks for the help hun, it was appreciated! Yeah, I could've squeezed in a bit more Angel bashing, but I think I'll let Buffy do that later ;). And yes, I think Riley saved her from a fate worse than death...thanks for the review Andrei!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2008 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 26

I've just caught up on a whole heap of chapters (don't know why I hadn't been reading as you posted) and wow. There's too much to comment on but OMG this is fab. I had to actually stop reading when I thought it was Angel going to give Spike up but it was Cordy - I know she's a bitch but bloody hell! Please let Buffy wake up and get to Spike before they are able to do too much to him - I am on my knees while writing that bit. Oh the Spuffy bathroom chapter - hot and steamy - and so was the room!! Loved it to bits.

Author's Response: SQUEE! I love it when people catch up! Yeah, Cordy saved Angel's ass by giving up Spike - the BITCH! Ahem...sorry. I can't promise he won't be changed by the time someone finds poor Spike, but it'll all be good...in the end... hopefully? Glad you liked the bathroom scene ;) mmmmm shower sex....mmmm

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2008 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 26

The Sanze’ana scenes were very well written, you really made me care about her... I found her death so sad. :( And OH NO!!!! The Spike scene is breaking my heart! *bites nails* Can't wait to read more! Good update.

Author's Response: Well, it was somewhat of a mercy for Riley to kill her - saved her from a fate worse than death wouldn't you say? Don't wanna break your heart, but it's gonna get bad! (ducks head and runs for cover) Thanks for the review hun!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2008 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter 26

This chapter was just soooooooooooooo frickin awesome, all the action all the angst, and hey, a little buffy, Cordy, Angel humoor thrown in. Riley, sooooooo hate him, glad he got covered in goo twice, LMFAO. And nooooooo, they got poor Spike, please Mistress Carrie, don't let them hurt him, make the drug wear off Buffy fast b/c of her slayer abilities and have her kick some serious RIley ass. My fav line: “You know what Riley? Kill him, kill him a lot!”, LMFAO - bloody brilliant. Luv ya my twisted sista.

Author's Response: YAY! Glad you liked it hun! Hate Riley all you want, cause you know, it'll help the story line! tee hee. Mistress Carrie must put aside your wishes for the time being concerning Spike, but I do promise some Angel ass kickage. How's that? That Kill him... Kill him a lot line is actually from the Buffy movie, said by a vampire. I love it! Thanks for ALL your help hun, couldn't have done it without you! Wuggles

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2008 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 26

LMAO on that end note! And the chapter was brilliant, my friend. Loved the backstory and how it led to Spike's capture. I'm really intrigued over Riley and the way Maggie treats him/deals with his temper tantrums. Poor Sanze'ana, but I guess Riley killing her like that saved her from what could have potentiall been a fate worse than death. Loved reading things from her POV, it was very interesting.

“And you ARE getting paid. Didn’t Doyle promise you some kind of Coochy Handbag, or something?”


Even though she had no voice, Buffy bent over with laughter. Cordy gave her an evil glare before turning to Angel and grit her teeth. “It’s Coach! Not Coochy, you fashionably challenged imbecile!”


That was priceless and had me in stitches. I wonder what Angel might have to do to earn her forgiveness after messing up so badly. He's so beyond dense where Buffy is concerned. Thank God Buffy has moved on onto better things. :D I'm looking forward to more, sweetie! This was fabulous!

Author's Response: Tee hee, liked that, did ya? I love when Beth does that to some of her chapters, so I thought I'd give it a try - no infringement upon Beth by any means, of course. And I agree, Riley killing her saved her from a fate worse than death. That Coochy bag... LMAO - I got that from my brother who calls one of my cats Cooch. (the cats name is Cush - but what does he know?). Don't know if Angel CAN earn her forgiveness...we'll see... dum dum dummmmm! Thanks for all your help dearest!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2008 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 26

Nice twist to show the Initiative from Sanze'ana's POV.
Heh heh, bad for Riley (and the other demon). Too bad that his head didn't explode ;)
Poor Cordy, the yellow goo is certainly not her favorite wear.
Oh damn.. that's really bad. Thanks to Angel and Cordelia they have Spike now.
I really hope you'll update soon!
(Funny A/N you ended with even if the chapter didn't end funny.)

Author's Response: LMAO, yeah, too bad it wasn't Riley 's head that exploded. Yeah, Angel and Cordy, only thinking of themselves...stupid LA people. I'll update soon! Yeah, I loved writing the AN, it was fun! Thanks Cordy for the review!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2008 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 26

SHITCRAPFUCK, WOMAN!

Damn Riley for not killing the Poof A LOT (I know, I said I like him with Cordy, but what do I know? Seriously!)

I WANT SPIKE SAFE AND WITH THE GEM AND HIM AND BUFFY SUNBATHING!!! Please??? I'd do anything!!! You're slowly killing me here!

*composes self* Thanks for all the credit given me in the AN, babe, but I don't think I deserve it. All I did was give you a tiny bit of an idea and you developed it into THIS! I mean... WOW!!!

And you better write your ass off this weekend, missy!

Love you, and wuv ya, and *wuggles ya*

Author's Response: There you go again with the language... tsk tsk - will we have to wash your mouth out with soap??? LOL! Yeah... KILL HIM A LOT! Cordy just didn't want Angel to get the pointy end of a stick, so she offered up Spike. You'll do anything, huh? *thinks on that one* And I did write, though my ass is still attached - I'm rather fond of it too. I'll update as soon as I can babe and thanks for all the help! WUGGLES!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2008 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

The fun, the episode-stealer, the random facts, the bad vampire jokes and teh twists and turns - now I remember why I got hooked on this story first time I read it and registered just so you know how much it means to me!

Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't help the bad vamp jokes, too irresitible! And more facts to come - even while Spike is being... well.. now that would be giving it away, wouldn't it? lol... Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2008 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 25

*shudder* your answers (last chapter) are very worrisome. If only the site wouldn't be so slow today *sigh* Seems as if gets slowly worse. Okay, ready to read.
Loved Xander call him a Scooby.
Oh I see (having read till the end) ~ evil place to stop. More soon?


Author's Response: More soon, hun... I promise. And you should be worried...Spike's not going to a good place. sigh. I'll update soon! Thanks Cordy!

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