You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2010 - 05:53 am Title: In the Evening

This story should be continued. It is very good.

Reviewer: Amy. B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 - 05:00 pm Title: In the Evening

I just read through all seven chapters of this and it's brilliant!!

You've got to update this it's really good!
:-)

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2007 - 07:06 pm Title: In the Evening

Please update soon! :) *begging on my knees, if I have to* ;) I miss your story, I really do. /Ariadne

Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 10:32 am Title: In the Evening

Spike as a dragon is cute. lol This story is really unique. It's really alot of fun and you write Spike So well. It's So different from Black. You are a talented writer. It really shows how this is fun not as angsty Spuffy and Black is the more Real messy Spuffy. I can't wait for more of both stories and to read the new ones you write!

Author's Response: Thank you Jaime Bee. You're quickly becoming one of my favorist reviewers. :) Yeah, this is like the opposite of Black. It should show in my characterization of Spike; this Spike is respectful, mature, and honest, unlike the one in Black, who is... well, I'll let you put in your favorite adjectives for him. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 10:55 pm Title: In the Evening

Yes, that was very evil of you. Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but it's been a crazy week. He still is trying to keep his promise I see. Again, damn Giles! Thought for a second that Joyce might have grounded Buffy to stay in her room all weekend, who better to spend it with then Spike? I see you've updated your other fic, I'll be reading it as well. Thanks for the update ALT, great read, can't wait for more. Have a fun weekend!

Author's Response: Yo soy muy muy evil. Whoa, I'm even bringing out my mad spanish skillz, don't stop me now cause I'm having a good time. :) As for Black... I dunno, it's pretty depressing and, well... black. ;) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 - 09:03 pm Title: My Obsession

Oh my god... I haven't read "As I Lay Dying" in such a long time! Now I need to go back and read it, after reading your story... of course. Love your writing style, by the way. Keep up the awesome work and I can't want for the next chapters...

Author's Response: :D Thank you so much. I especially love it when people comment on my writing style, as that's also important. Anything Faulkner is brilliant. :)

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 04:24 pm Title: In the Evening

Awww damn!!! Poor Buffy and Spike's mixed signals! But he did make a promise and he's making good on it, and driving me out of my mind!! Can't wait for another update!

Author's Response: Heh, mixed signals is definitely ahoy. He is being a man and keeping his word, though, and that has to count for something. Maybe count for more than a kiss after Buffy finds out. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:22 pm Title: In the Evening

here I'm and I'm giving you my thoughts on this story. It is so hard to give so many thoughts though.

Like I said. This is one of my favorite stories. So, you better be writing more and updating. I want my Spikey dragon. LOL

I hope Spike tells Buffy what Giles asked him to do. Or that spike just gives in to her. Otherwise, he is going to hurt Buffy. And he is going to sending her mixed signals. So, what I'm really saying is that I want my Spuffy hotness. LOL

Please do continue. Go now and and write another chapter of this wonderful story.

Author's Response: Yeppers, he needs to tell her before she thinks she doesn't want him. I dunno if I want Spike to tell her; I'd rather have Giles, he's in the bad guy so he might as well. I'm so happy this is one of your favorites. :D

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:23 pm Title: In the Evening

I'm so happy you updated! :)

Don't even think about giving up this story, don't you dare :p
I would miss it a lot...

So, her mom wears earplugs when she sleeps, good to know. Too bad Spike promised Giles... Otherwise it would have been perfect ;) not beeing caught...

Why isn't Buffy allowed to have boys over? Welll except for Xander ;) Is her mom old-fashioned? She seems to be strict.

Buffy seemed to be a good nurse, but cleaning a wound with alcohol really hurts, but he didn't seem to care much, obsessed by her sight. There definately chemistry between them, electrifying, when she touched his side with her finger. Did it hurt? Or what did you mean by this?

Even when I lie I tell the truth. (just keeps me wondering...)

I would love them watching The Lion King together...

He has to tell her about his promise to Giles, he can't reject her all the time, I'm afraid she'll give up...

Well, I guess they have to bury that goldfish...

Please, please, please update soon! /Ariadne


Author's Response: Same Mom as on of the show. This is season two, remember, when she was very strict and reprimanded Buffy for getting less than stellar grades and believing Snyder. I didn't mean it hurt, I meant that they had such chemistry that it was electrifying. I do have them watching a kids movie, somewhere down the line. :) Goldfish burial is next chapter. Thanks for reviewing! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 12:28 pm Title: In the Evening

Oh Spike has the same problem with homes he hasn't been before? Just like a vampire.
That chapter was fun :) I thought that Spike would met Joyce, didn't guess that Buffy wanted to keep him there a secret. That was even more fun because she had to hide him; Joyce almost caught her.
Their connection is still strong (pure electricity). Too bad that Spike remembered his promise and stopped snogging ;-)
Cute chapter too. So now off to burry a goldfish? ~ Till next chapter.

Author's Response: Heh heh, yeppers. Goldfish funeral is next chapter. I didn't want to get into the Spike and Joyce meeting, as I still dunno what I want them to think of each other. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 08:30 am Title: In the Evening

Na..didn't expect the kiss. Afterall, Spike promised.
But rubbing alcohol on a cut.. hurts big time.

Waiting to see if there is something "magical" with our couple that Giles won't be able to control.

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Hehehe, "magical." Good idea. :) I'm glad you aren't upset that they didn't kiss; it just wouldn't have been right to Spike. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 07:49 am Title: In the Evening

That was very sweet! But why did you have to end it there? *lol* This is one of my favorite WIP stories and I'm always so happy when I see it's been updated. Keep up the great work, and please update again soon! :)

Author's Response: I make you happy when I update and you make me happy when you reviewing... ahhhh, it's a beautiful thing. :) I ended it there because... well, because I thought it was a decent place to end it and incite discussion. Thank you very much for your kind words; "favorite" makes me squeal. :D

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 10:57 pm Title: Staked

You know Giles is a poophead making him make that promise , he hs to let him out of it , or at least Buffy should know about how he's trying to run her life and let him have it. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm heading in that direction, trust me. :) Glad to see where on the same track as far as the promise is concerned. Thanks for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 08:49 pm Title: Staked

Spike is really troubled... with all the thoughts running through his head. Maybe he can make Giles understand; I hope it for him (and Buffy).
Dragon-Spike saved the day eh Buffy. Impressive fight, the way he kills the vampires. I wonder why he seemed hurt when Buffy touched his face. Too bad Buffy staked him; I guess he'll meet Buffy's mom? Looking forward to the nursing :) ~ Loved the update.

Author's Response: Yeah, he is kinda troubled. Hopefully he'll be less troubled as the story progresses. He definitely needs to make Giles understand. :) Spike was hurt when Buffy touched his face because he knew he couldn't have her. It was like a slap in the face, a kinda intimate moment where nothing can happen. And we'll see how Buffy's mom goes... I dun think she'll be too... pleased. ;) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 06:32 pm Title: Staked

Oh, a new chapter! :) So happy now :) All because of you ;)

The whole part with the dragon was sweet, liked it a lot. Where does the light come from? From the gem he carries or from his pain? Or his body? And he transformed back after she had touched him... He seemed to connect with her, the dragon seemed to recognize Buffy, but why was he frustrated?

I'm sure Buffy will be a good nurse and take care of him, after all, she was the one who staked him... She has to take her responsibility.

Keep up the good work! I hope you update soon! :) / Ariadne

Author's Response: :D :D :D You're too kind, Ariadne. Now it's all gonna go to my head and I'm gonna have the motivation to write... oh wait, that's entirely awesome. :) The light comes from his body. I'm quasi-hinting that he's divine, but you didn't hear it from me. ;) His frustration was hinting that he retained some of his emotions as a human when he was a dragon; Spike *was* frustrated with Buffy, at least the Buffy situation, and probably still kinda is. And yes, it is Buffy's civic duty to nurse Spike back to full health. ;) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: Staked

Ok, I had to catch up on the last 3 chapters. I think that Spike should just tell Buffy that Giles asked him to stay away from her, that way she can go and rip Giles a new one and not taking it out on Spike by making him jelous with Xander of all people! Glad that you updated, cant wait for another one!

Author's Response: Yeppers, that's partially where I'm heading. It works perfectly with Spike's character, because he's sincere. Glad we're on the same page as far as progression. :) Thanks for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 04:29 pm Title: Staked

Loved the chapter! :) Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks Pet!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 10:27 am Title: Staked

Loved the summary, it seriously made me crack up. Also can't wait to see how this whole taking him home thing works out. Great chapter

Author's Response: Squawks! Yay! Taking him home, definitely a risky and provocative venture. But Joyce doesn't have to know, right? :) Thanks for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 07:25 am Title: Staked

I was waiting to see what would change him... protecting Buffy.. and now for the nursing and apologizing from both..

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Dragon trigger the first. :) Nursing and apologizing, si si. Thanks for the feedback. ;)

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 04:45 am Title: Staked

Penny for your thoughts, huh? Good to know that you like my reviews. LOL I know you weren't talking about me. But I had to throw that in there.

I love this story. It is becoming one of my favorites. Spike being a dragon really is a great idea. Nothing like I ever read before.

How cute is Spike as a dragon. So, Spike transforms into the dragon if Spike gets hurt. Very nice. Dust those evil vamps.

I wonder why Spike (the dragon) backed away from her as soon as Buffy touched his face. Can Spike sense it is Buffy and knows somehow it is his girl.

I know I know. I'm thinking too much. But I can't help it. Love the story and please please update soon.

Author's Response: Haha, that's funny. I wasn't thinking about that when I wrote it. ;) And thank you *so* much for your kind words. I was losing motivation, but knowing that it is becoming someone's favorite... that refills the motivation bar aplenty. :) We'll figure out more about Spike's dragon triggers as the story progresses, but you're definitely on the right track. I don't want to give away all my plot points before we get there, yeah? :) Thanks so much for reviewing. ;D

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 12:36 am Title: Staked

Thanks for the email. It was a great chapter. He does have to talk to Giles. I loved that he transformed again. Cute little firebreathing dragon.

Have your tied your muse to the sofa? We can't let him get away again. Wonder what Joyce will say about a boy staying at their house?

I love this story, til the next time, Testa.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Verda.

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 12:35 am Title: Staked

Thanks for the email. It was a great chapter. He does have to talk to Giles. I loved that he transformed again. Cute little firebreathing dragon.

Have your tied your muse to the sofa? We can't let him get away again. Wonder what Joyce will say about a boy staying at their house?

I love this story, til the next time, Testa.

Author's Response: He does, and he will, just want to get the most out of this current situation. ;) And Spike is kinda cute as a dragon, isn't he? The muse is tied to the bedpost, like that Eve 6 song. I replied to your email, fyi. Thanks for reviewing, but you knew that. ;)

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 - 12:15 am Title: I Can't Dance

Another fanastic chapter. You're doing a great job with his torture. The poor guy, he doesn't deserve this. Damn Giles! If it wasn't for the connection he feels for her, one might think it's psychological, desire what you can't have. It's enough to drive him bonkers!

Put my email address here again but will send you one to you at yours. Can't wait for your next update. Glad your first semester is going to be lighter, so much better then the a heavier load.

Author's Response: I could have sworn I already responded to this... yeah, blast Giles! He's just wrong to keep the two of them apart.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2007 - 05:12 pm Title: I Can't Dance

Interesting bit that Spike can feel that Buffy is near. I bet he didn't tell Giles that.
Loved the description how Spike saw Buffy, being so smitten with her. ~ Interesting too that Buffy can feel the connection too if Spike is guessing right.
Oh.. powerful chapter. I really loved it and hope for more :)

Author's Response: :D Thank you for reviewing. Your observations are dead on, especially with Spike being so smitten with her already. Love that word, "smitten," because it describes his feelings so perfectly. Thanks again. :)

Reviewer: Jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 09:20 pm Title: I Can't Dance

U doo? *dies* thatz so kewl!! =P

*shudders* On with the actual review, lol! God, you actually made me choke when you said my lack of reviews made you stop Black, sheesh!! Shame on you. But I can understand getting away from it for awhile, it’s an intense story for sure. Just, don’t abandon it, cause, I might cry or something equally dramatic, and then my eyeliner will run and that’s never pretty. So for the sake of my eyeliner, you can’t let that story go. Favoritist? Sweet, I’ll take that. But you’re like the coolestest author. I mean, you can pull of making Spike a freakin’ dragon! How cool is that? And the weird thing, the dragon you described is nearly identical to a dragon I painted a year or so ago. And have no fear! I’ll get my friend to read this, I’ll just keep nagging her about it. It shouldn’t be too hard, I mean, she did like Black…

As for this chapter, man oh man! Delving into the mind of Spike, not an easy feat. I saw the title of the story and started a litany of oh no’s immediately. I just want to smack Giles. And then there’s the connection and the dominos and the Xander and Willow and Oz thing with jealous and drama and teenage angst and Chris Isaak (it was Chris Isaak right?) in the background…. I just can’t see how it could get better than this. Give your muse (and yourself if you’re hungry) some cookies.

Kudos. =)

Good gawd, this is a long review.... phew!

Author's Response: Hehehe, you're my favoritist because you ramble on just as much as me. :D The thing with Black is I know _exactly_ where I'm heading, I've known it for months, I just don't have the motivation or the strength to put in on the page. And it's so intense sometimes, and I have to write such a terribly realistic Spike all the time, it just gets *shudders* tough. But this Spike is like the opposite; a good, wise, complete human being who knows (for lack of a better term) what a girl wants. We are certainly in a bit of an intense moment, here, though, with Spike probably at his weakest. I thought of the title from the Genesis song, just an FYI. It was Dingo At My Babies covering it in the story, but the original was by Chris Isaak of course, who I believe sang the star-spangled banner for this year's baseball all-star game, go figure. As always, thanks for your review, the lifeblood of my muse. :)

You must login (register) to review.