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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2013 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 15

Very sweet ending !

Reviewer: Manson101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2012 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for an amazing story, pet! :)

Reviewer: spuffy28 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2011 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter 15

Hay, imagen if like Buffy, Willow died like for two seconds. then Buffy got called too. So that both Willow and Buffy where both slayer. That would be a great thing to do, for a sequel. What do you think?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 5

i find it hilarioius that Buffy, the chosen one, is the ONLY one in sunnydale who DIDN'T know what was going on as far as what goes bump in the night

Author's Response: Um, yeah, Buffy's not the Slayer in this one. If that's what you're looking for, you're reading the wrong story.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2007 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter 15

Read it in one hit and really enjoyed it. Thanks.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2007 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 15

Wonderful fic! Loved it!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 06:44 am Title: Chapter 15

Excellent story! Loved it!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter 15

I just love this!!! You're brilliant!!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 07:29 am Title: Chapter 15

Aww... I love that you ended things on a happy note. Thanks for the great read... Wonderful story! :D

Reviewer: Squid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter 15

It was really good! Don't ever worry about the mushy - that's why we all come here. To get our happy ending. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 15

Hey,
I loved the fic and followed it to the end faithfully.
I do feel it ended up too abruptly.
You're a pretty good writer, sucking us right into the heart and angst of the story.
However, I DO hope you work on how to end stories like this, wrap them up, so to speak. The ending to this somehow just didn't feel right, didn't feel finished. Yet, it didn't quite feel like something aching for a sequel (at least w/o being totally syrupy. Once Spike & Buffy defeated Angelus, the antagonist of the story was gone, ie that which kept the speed of the story going. Don't get me wrong, loved the loving between the two of them but it just wasn't going anywhere by then end of the fic.
(It was kinda like the line by Willow in 'Once More With Feeling', "...This line is mostly filler..."....)
There were directions the tale could've gone--- Buffy could have filled the shoes of various characters---slayers die and are called all the time...especially with there being a "Chosen Two", per se.... She could've been called ( know ,
She could've been a replacement of Faith or...? Or could've picked up magick in Willow's stead, since W. was interesting enough to be the Slayer called in this fic.
Or Buffy could've turned out to be a Key...
Anyway, it's done. All this said, I DID like it, and am kinda sorry to see it finished. But I DO thank you for it, and enjoyable read. Will look forward to any and all forthcoming fics from you, and am hoping you already have something new in the works!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh that was a good ending,

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 15

Enjoyed the ride so to say. :) (the read)
Fluffy is good to read after reading an angsty story.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 15

I was surprised when I saw "the end" at the bottom of the page, I didn't expect that already. But what a lovely ending! So sweet! Really liked this story, well done! :)

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 15

really great, i loved this story!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 15

Kudos Tammy that was very good

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2007 - 10:13 am Title: Chapter 14

Awww... I just love how happy Spike and Buffy are. :D The Willow bits of the chapter were fun... lol! Great update!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2007 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 14

Really loving this fic! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: my_perfect_muse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2007 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 14

LOL! Buffy is too cute! Loved the update :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2007 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 14

It is good that Willow is supportive of Buffy. And I can't believe that Riley and Walsh to good.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2007 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 14

Good that the Initiative situation did get sorted out by itself :)
Staking-happy Buffy was fun.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2007 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 14

Lolx. Love stake happy Buffy. Very adorable when I picture it. Riley and Walsh? Talk about EWWWW!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2007 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 14

wonderful wonderful update, but riley and walsh, ugh
loved the characterisation of willow and spike

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2007 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 14

very sweet, i like that they're all patrolling together.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2007 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 13

Love all the twists! Can't wait for more!

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