I am so glad to see this story back up. I look forward to your next five chapters!

I have to say your an excellent writer. One thing though I found it going into the story the situations and the "believing what really happened" slowly coming out. LOL I think I have never ever been on the edge this bad. Like its all coming out very slowly where Buffy and Dawn truly were. I have to say when I started to read this it gave me that feeling of oh I hate this where he is with someone else but...not to the degree of when I read it with this other writer who did you tube vids for her story. Don't remember her name because well I freaked after starting to read it that Spike was having a child with another girl. So yeah when you started at the beginning I was oh god not another one...but then I went and did the same thing in my own that I am currently writing and have not posted yet. So I understood how you went about the beginning.
Now about this latest. I hope that it wasn't going straight away to the sex. I was hoping with my thinking it was more along making him hers and having the sexual tension and missing him that had her zero in on his sire's mark. Was I reading that they were still clothed? I mean yeah she was dry humping and all but still clothed. I really hope that Spike gets his head out of his ass because umm not liking him so much in this story. Although I have my own separate issues with Buffy but in this story I am jumping up and down saying ok tell him already you were in Florida with Dawn...God I'm so like pre-soul Spike...patience was never my thing lol....
I so hope that bright flash is Tara. That would be awesome! Only reason I said that was there was so much reference to her. Can't wait for the next chapter. I will catch it in between working on my own. Awesome job, love to read more. :)

I was hoping they wouldn't get it on until he knew the truth so then Buffy could rebuff him (only for a little while) but looks like you want a hot intense encounter instead of a loving one, hope that comes later after Spike's done being an ass. Was that the immortal or Giles popping in at the end there? can't wait for Andrew , Giles and the Immortal to get some of Buffy fist in their faces. This fic is really pissing me off , I feel so bad for Buffy, I think your intention was to have sympathy for Spike but it's not working.

How lovely to find this fic updated! I've missed it and was just thinking about it the other day. It is a wonderful story and I'm looking forward to seeing the story continue.

Boy, this just took a sharp left turn. Very interested, I am.

Amazing story line. My only complaint is - why can't you write faster!!! :) I didn't really enjoy the Immortal storyline in AtS and you have added a great twist to it. I'm eager to see where you will go with this.

Oh good, Dawn's got enough sense to start the explanations. All we need now is a glimpse of Buffy going all possessive Slayer on her vampire!

Seems like everyone's been bespelled. Spike too?

Oh wow! Love Slayer Buffy going all primal because of Spike biting Faith. It's clear Buffy the slayer isn't going to just stand by while Buffy the girl lets Faith take her vampire. And Faith feeling like she wouldn't be walking away from that fight, I almost wish it had actually happened. Surprised Spike didn't catch on to what was happening with Buffy though, he's usually more perceptive than that!

Woah....very awesome chappie....yep, still interested...still following the story....I practically expect Buffy to sprout tiny fangs or something at this point...quite in touch with her inner Slayer...Faith better hope "she" doesn't get ahold of her much longer...too bad Spike doesn't get in the middle...other than getting staked perhaps Buffy would claim HIM during the challenge....but I guess Willow will disperse the fight including Buffy's "demon". Isn't it turning Spike ON, what with the growling & hissing, etc (not that he's not a walking, snarky erection 24/7 anyways, but....?
Keep up the good work and just update more often if possible!
~~K.~~
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Wow. I love it when things get primal. More! More! More!

Really great update!

oh, hell yeah!! i'm very much with the interested. damn, you should have let buffy kill the cow! lol. i know the angst is vital to the story so i won't complain too much.....spike is just too stubborn to see that buffy really does love him. even if he's not really with faith, he had to know that even an alliance with the dark slayer would get buffy pissed. it's just like him and angel. lol.only this time, buffy is willing to choose spike over angel....finally!!! lol. more soon. loved it bunches.