i'm not quite sure where you going with this story at the moment. Spike needs to sit an think of what he just said about the Buffy he knows wouldn't do those things. Its been a year but even i don't believe Buffy would change that drastically. i'm being patient but i will be honest and say the whole spike/faith in love thing is kinda wierd to me. Its like he taking the easy road instead of fighting for what he truly wants which is Buffy's love which he has and dosen't know. A cowardly mushy spike has never been my forte. I'm not really liking your Spike at the moment but i believe you will start to make things right soon. i'm waiting til the next chapter.

Author's Response: Oh Nichole, you hit the nail right on the head. And don't worry. Spike has never stayed on the easy road for long.
He's just a little lost, but he will find his way back.

Wow.. I'm really interested to see where you'll take this story. Poor Buffy. And poor Spike too. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Gah! You're either a master of suspense or a sadistic torturer. I think I'm actually having mind-spasms from wanting more of the story. This is fabulous.

I will try to keep positive thoughts. I can't use the word faith in this context. I hope Spike's stupid behavior will not continue for a long period of time. Also, I don't understand why Faith would deliberately try to hurt Buffy. I know they are not friends but she does not even know their history. Please update soon and please continue the story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review Bridget.
Faith's attitude is because of what her and Spike have told each other and shared over the last few days.
The next chapter will explain both of their attitudes. Thanks for the encouragement.

man that hurt. Poor Buffy don't have a clue as to what has been going on. i wander who is keeping her in the dark. i made it through that chapter though i wanted to rip out Faith's heart and puch Spike in the face. ok i hope we start to see some reason as to what is going on soon. update soon please.

yay!!!!

So, someone is trying to keep Buffy away from the Scoobies, and Buffy doesn't know who the Immortal is. So who was with the Immortal and why is Buffy out of the loop? And Kennedy is still a bitch! This is great. I'm glad I found this here; on another site I couldn't get on to chap 2 because I wasn't registered.

Okay Bitchee , now this chapter made me bitchee . Thank
God you put in that warning at the end , liking it so far .

I like your story, however, I can't tolerate a Spike/Other story line they usually make me sick and the way this chapter ended with Faith I hope I can read the reamining chapters. I have never liked the character Faith. I have read the guidelines to the challenge so I know there will be a happy ending but i hope we don't have to wait too long.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Bridget.
As the challenge states I have to make Spike seem to be of the opinion that Buffy, really was with the immortal so his disbelief has to seem real.
Using Faith as a temptation is just the my way of showing that it's not all about what Giles and the others always maintained was his slayer obsession. It's about his love for Buffy the girl.
Bear in mind though this fic will have Spike doubting his belief in himself and Buffy.
Though I can promise at no time will there be any sex between Faith and Spike.
Ultimately it's all about the Spuffy. It's just gonna be a bit of a rough ride to get them there.
Sorry, But my Faith is for the purpose of this story not the bad guy.

ohh I hope you're somewhere updating this story. this is a frickin' great start to what I hope will be a uber long fic!

Author's Response: Hey Kamla, typing madly even as you review.

Good start ,but how many chapters do yu think it'll be ? I,m with Dice on this one i won' be able to read it until it's finished , my stomach can't take the Spike/other or buffy /other thing it's totally
upsetting but i will look in from time to time until it's done, thanks for writing it.

Completely insane, just reading the summary turned me off so much that I´m going to skip the story entirely.
I think you should edit the summary, any spuffy-shipper is put off at line 8/9 already!

Author's Response: Ok Angi, Ta for the feedback.
It's been a while since I've posted anything and my HTML skills are a little rusty, add the fact it's early hours of the morning and it equals careless.
I've gone back and fixed it to the best of my limited ability so hopefully it is easier to understand.
Thanks for taking the time to point it out.