I actually liked this (not sure what that says about me : ) I liked the demon being angry and twisted - I think its painted too nicely in many fics. I might prefer a middle ground though - but thats just me. I think this would be a good theme for a longer fic - where Buffy and demon reach some sort of understanding, Another thing - is Spike and demon so separate from eachother? 'Cause I tend to think of them as a part of eachother kind of interlocking and interdependent, not two separate entities entirely - but I know a lot of you wonderful authors do.

Author's Response: That you liked my dark depraved fic means your a very open minded person Heidi.... This fic bugged me for so long I just need to write it...It helped that I too was angry at Real Life issuses while writing. It's true to say most authors write Spikes Demon as a truly loving creature residing in harmony within it's host body....But I believe if pushed far enought it could be truly brutal which seems to be the true nature of the beast.... So this is my representation on these turns of events...Thank you for taking time to leave a review....

I have never read anything so harsh in all my time reading Spuffy. The type of behaviour you describe can understood from Angel's demon, but never Spike's. The demon in Spike loved her as much as the man ever did, and would never have harmed her in such a way. This abonimation should never have been published, and I hope you write something better than this.
P.S. The word 'bard' means poet - the word you should have used was 'barb', This just demonstrates your level of English which is obviously poor

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments,and review. It seems the moderator here though my fic fitting for the site otherwise it wouldn't of been published here...I did leave a warning in my authors note about it's graphic nature.... As for the word Bard being used instead of Barb , it is simply a spelling mistake on my part due to my dyslexia, I'll change it now thanks for pointing it out....

interesting

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review....

Wow!! Very different. I wonder how Spike's demon would act if he let it out after his aggression was gone. Love it!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review ....Yes it was different from what I normally write, but sometime different is better... I'm not really sure how Spikes demon woulde act if he was allowed after the agression was gone.The feeling I got as I wrote the piece was the demon wanted complete control over Buffy , and it used it's own spitful brutality to achive that ....

dreadful and wonderful at the sam time. really enjoyed I think. loved the idea of a less than gentle demon, most fics write him as gentle and it was different.
thanks for sharing

Author's Response: Thank you for your review I hope I didn't squick you out too much....But I feel a Demon should be a lttle rough sometimes after all it's in their nature...

Wow, you would really need to be super strong to be with Spike when his demon is out. But Buffy asked for it. I enjoyed this story. I hope to read more from you.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review ....I have been writing for a while so I've gota couple of completed fics out there you can read straight off plus two wips... As for you having to be strong to be with Spike when his demon is released I think the slayer is strong enough to hold her own if she really wanted to...