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Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 - 12:36 pm Title: Sleeping Beauty

A nice reunion story. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on a sequel now :) It just came to me suddenly and I decided on it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 04:45 pm Title: Peace & Quiet

*nods* A beta can help with the 'little things' and when she is good even with the plot (nothing plot holes).

Well I liked the story; good to see it end well. Looking forward to a sequel one day.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'd love to get a beta, but I'm not sure how to go about doing that. I guess I'll look around today to see if I can post somewhere saying that I'd like one.

And you're in luck for a sequel. I got inspired this morning. I just had a good idea that I couldn't pass up and the first chapter just came out in a rush. :) I'm still working on Father of Mine though and thinking about starting another story, but I don't want to being too much at once. Thanks so much for all of your reviews!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 12:26 pm Title: Sleeping Beauty

I'm not a writer, sorry, so no pointers from me. But maybe I can give you something by 'accident'.
A beta (one that had done it before or a writer her(him)self should be able to help you with ít).
But to the story now: Good that Spike hasn't done worse than drink; he is sober enough to recognize Buffy ;-)
The scene reminded me on 'Sleeping Beauty', cute when Buffy woke up. I hope she can convince Spike how much she missed him.

Author's Response: A beta sounds good. Is that just someone who can help me with little things with my story?

Thanks for the review dearie. I really appreciate it! I liked getting into this chapter. :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 11:03 am Title: Sleeping Beauty

Now that's more like it , sweet reunion , like alot.

Author's Response: Yeah. I wanted it to be sweet. Now I just have to think about how to do the next chapter. I have some plans for my story, but I just need to map it out right so it all makes sense. :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

~ Duchess

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2008 - 03:49 am Title: Doughy Cookies?

oh my! poor spike ;( i want to see what happens next; this is an excellent fic!!

Author's Response: Thanks! That's really flattering that you called my fic 'excellent'. :D I'm working on the next chapter this weekend so the update should be coming soon. -fingers crossed- lol Thanks again & I hope you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2007 - 09:31 pm Title: Doughy Cookies?

Really bad timing for Spike to arrive.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! You've been reviewing consistently and I really appreciate it. If you have any pointers that could help make the story better please let me know. I'm happy to take other people's ideas into consideration. And yeah, Spike has bad timing here. The next chapter should be interesting too. :) Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks again! xoxox - Duchess

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2007 - 03:21 am Title: Doughy Cookies?

Ah. Silly Spike... :)

Author's Response: Yes, he is very silly. I think he'll continue to be silly now and again. He's impulsive. It's good and bad. Haha. Here it wasn't so good. I've got plans for the silly Spike though. Hee hee. Hope you continue to enjoy the fic. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 02:48 pm Title: The City of Angels Awaits

I like your story but it seems to me that Buffy is moving awfully slow for someone who just found out the person she loves is alive. I have a hard time believing that it would take her all of this time to get to Los Angeles to see Spike.

Author's Response: I feel like I've made her apprehensive, cautious so to speak. She knows she has responsibility and she doesn't want to rush off to LA when she first finds out. When she does make the decision to go she still has things she has to do in Rome, and London, before she can leave. She wants to make sure that everything will be okay without her there in Rome.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 02:16 pm Title: The City of Angels Awaits

Oh boy what is she going to catch him doing , and why the hell didn't she deck stupid ass Andrew , I would've knocked him through the wall. she's gonna walk in on him in a comprimising position , I just know . Really am enjoying this fic and your writing .

Author's Response: I just wasn't feeling the hitting of Andrew. He's too cute to do real harm to, I think. lol As for catching Spike in a compromising situation... I'm shooting for something different. Hope you like it. An update will be along soon, and it's long overdue. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 10:34 am Title: The City of Angels Awaits

Huh... I thought Buffy would be more mad about Andrew telling Spike (and Angel) a lie. Bad luck that Buffy found out they were there after all (I didn't think she would be able to do it). Andrew can be lucky indeed.
Ah Spike... I hope he won't do something silly now because he thinks now it's too late to go back to Buffy. Or moves on indeed like Buffy tried to do before.

Author's Response: Yeah... I had thought of her being more mad at him too, but then when I was writing it just came out differently. I went with the flow and it's working. :)

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 06:45 am Title: The City of Angels Awaits

I don't imagine Spike will be happy about that fling a month after he burned either.

Author's Response: Very true. I haven't decided whether I'm going to let him find out about it or not though. From your review I'm thinking I'll have Buffy let it slip in an argument, but we'll see. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 10:14 pm Title: London Calls

I really want to smack the crap out of Andrew , now.

Author's Response: I totally get that too. :) That's Andrew for ya though.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 04:10 pm Title: London Calls

A good Buffy & Dawn moment. At last Dawn didn't give Buffy a hard time because she wants Spike back.
Bad timing, huh? Spike is going to Rome but Buffy is already on her way to London.
Arrgh, still Andrew lied to them about where Buffy is. Why did he do that? Andrew just made things harder for Buffy to get together with Spike. I don't understand why he did that :(
Poor Buffy.

Author's Response: Bad timing indeed. Andrew, just as in the tv show, thought it would be funny to tell Angel and Spike Buffy was with the Immortal. He had some knowledge of the vampires' history with him. It definitely makes things more complicated, but afterall this is a Spuffy fic. :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 11:56 am Title: London Calls

I don't understand why Andrew is lying about Buffy, what"s his damage. I hope Buffy see Spike soon and straightens everything out . Update soon.

Author's Response: Andrew doesn't really gain anything from lying to them, except that he can get a rise out of them and maybe help everyone move on from previous damaging relationships. Buffy will be going to LA soon...next chapter actually, and it will be coming soon. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: Making Arrangements

So Buffy is really going very very soon :) I wonder what Giles will say. ~ Till next part.

Author's Response: Replying to old reviews now, so you're getting a handful. :) Buffy did go soon. I wanted to move the storyline along. Thanks so much for your reviews. If you have any suggestions for my story please let me know. I'm working on Father of Mine right now, but I will be back on this very soon. I'm in the process of working on Chapter 8 now too. Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2007 - 09:21 pm Title: Decisions

So making her decisions brought Buffy peace when she slept well. Seems as if it was the right one :-D

Author's Response: Yep. We'll just have to see where that decision takes her... other than just LA. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2007 - 08:49 pm Title: Shock & Awe

Buffy needed indeed some time to come to terms that Spike is back. ~ Looking forward how Dawn will react

Author's Response: I didn't put in a full Dawn response. Woops. :) Dawn took it relatively well though, I do refer to that later (in Ch. 3 I think). She is coming to terms with him being alive. That's what I want to show here, her thought process and feelings about the news.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2007 - 08:45 pm Title: Something to Know

Oh it sounds as if Andrew is willing to tell the secret (*wonders if Spike did calculate that he would do that*).
Sounds like good news for Buffy; Andrew fears in vain to get hit ;-)

Author's Response: Last one of yours to catch up... yay! I never really thought about whether Spike counted on him keeping or telling the secret. That's a different angle to explore. Oh!! Maybe I can use that later in the fic when we hear more from Spike. :D Yay! Thanks!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2007 - 06:38 pm Title: Shock & Awe

wow. okay....so love this. i think it's really gonna be a good one. buffy is depending on andrew to give her answers???? and then gets surprised when he doesn't really have any??? how long has she known him. besides that, Ii'd want to find out the details my own way. I'd make a surprised visit to LA and give both the vampires a piece of my mind. but since this is your story, you obviously know what you're doing. great job. loved it bunches. more soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, a little hard to believe that Buffy would think Andrew, of all people, could give her answers. She didn't have anyone else to ask at the moment though and he had been to LA and talked to Spike. She'll be getting to LA soon. :)

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