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Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2008 - 01:10 am Title: Ch. 10-Make Me Squeak

funny stuff

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 09:51 pm Title: Ch. 10-Make Me Squeak

Bad timing again for Riley. ;))
But good to see Buffy was annoyed or Riley. Maybe he won't stay that long now :)

Author's Response: yeah...i'm not exactly sure what he'll do but i know i'm gonna make it good!!!!....or at least try to!! Monica

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

Bad timing for Riley to arrive now. I wonder what happened down there with Buffy and Riley, did they fight (because of the noise Spike and Dawn heard).

Author's Response: yeah, i'm thinking of broadening that later on. or not!! i think i might want it to be like the fight that Angel and Buffy had in the epi, "The Zeppo", Xander's epi. Xander walks in on them having one of their DRAMATIC fights and they have an apocalypse that night but they don't really focus on that. i dunno yet. but i'm glad u like it!!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 07:07 pm Title: Ch. 10-Make Me Squeak

Hmmm... yeah, plum forgot about the whole Initiative being secret thing (must be the exams I'm preparing for - messing with my brain they are!). I did guess Riley before you wrote his name, though, so at least I have some consolation :P.
Anyway the way you're showing him around here... loving it! Let's see how much the slayer can take before she starts losing her temper (and I mean really, not just some random nondescript crash).

Author's Response: glad u like it!! yeah, i knew it'd either be a choice between riley or angel and i'm sorry, but i'm not THAT good at writing Angel/Spike fights. i'm not that funny and inventive, lol. those things are just genius! yeah, i'm soooo gonna try to make Riley the little punk this time around. not sure how long i'm gonna keep him around though. i'm working on it! glad u liked the chapter!!

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 06:52 pm Title: Ch. 10-Make Me Squeak

Oh get lost, Riley. You're spoiling it!

Author's Response: like it? like it? hope so! i had a fun 20 mins. writing it!! :o) thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 02:13 pm Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

Tehehehehe, I want the best bloke to win NOW!!! Woo hoo for second update so soon! *does happy dance* Me likey lots, babe!

Mwah!

Author's Response: like OMG i wanna SQUUEEEEE!!! go look how many reviews i have over on EF!! i'm just bouncing in my chair!! one of my constant readers (YES!! I HAVE A CONSTANT READER!! :OD) gave me an idea so i might update w/ chapter 10 before that interview!! so u might have ch. 10 by tonight!! *TWIRLS SOTIA AROUND HER DESK!!* i brought Riley in for some angst and i will try to make it good. i can't wait for u to read the next chapter gurlie!! it's gonna be yummy!! *SKIPS OUT OF SOTIA'S OFFICE AND HEADS TO BEAUTIFUL BEACH WITH HOT GREEK STUD* see you soon!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 01:51 pm Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

I liked the interaction between Spike and Dawn, and of course that moment is when Riley shows up. I wonder what that crash was. Good chapter thanks for updating.

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing!! that crash was just a vague crash for humor. i might add what it was in the next chapter. dunno. i'm glad u liked it!! hope u keep reading!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 12:51 pm Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

Sorry, I had thought this all happened after Riley got caught with the vamps. As far as I remembered Buffy only became aware of Spike's feelings after Riley left.
Ah, well... no matter... it was just a rather unpleasant surprise to find him here. And this sheds a new light on the goings on in a previous chapter when Buffy and Spike went on a date as payment for his information. So, basically she was cheating on Riley (not that I think that he doesn't deserve it or anything). That does raise the question though... what is Riley's secret that Buffy is aware of?

Author's Response: well okay, from what i remember Buffy had a vague idea in s5 while Riley was still there that Spike had feelings for her. Remember Spike coming to get her and the classic line "are you naked under there?" was uttered. yeahhhh....anyways, yeah, i can't have it lovey-dovey all the time like i want so i had to bring in some angst. and it wasn't technically a date. more like a patrol. Spike just ate along the way, lol. oh the secret is the Initiative! u didn't get that? remember, he has to keep it a secret and have everyone think that he's a TA. i was hoping it wouldn't be that vague but i really didn't want anyone to know who it was till she said his name. cuz u thought Angel didn't u?? :o) yeah, i wanted everyone to think Angel. hope i worked, lol. glad u liked it!!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 07:33 am Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

What's with Captain America deciding to pop in for a visit? They ran out of vamp hos in Belize? Or what happened this time, in your AU?
Francly... I just want him maimed :D

Author's Response: well u have to remember s5. riley's there but it's not working! remember? LOL if u read the last of this chapter, there IS going to be some male strutting. this time, in MY story, Spike's gonna get a fare fight!! right now, Buffy and Gag Me are still together but.......starting to flatline.

Author's Response: also, thank you for reading!! *HUGS*

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 09:39 am Title: Ch. 8-Got Any virgin?

I read, I read, I read, and I loved, I loved, I loved! It pisses me off that Dawn seems to be prepared to do more than Buffy is, bu that's canon for you!

Hope you update again soon, girly! *squishes* And congrats again on the job!!!!

Author's Response: well the reason i have Dawn doing more than Buffy is because Buffy is still in the undecided zone with Spike. Dawn knows her relationship concerning Spike and is comfortable with it. understand? i'm so glad u love it!! i will be updating soon and thanks for the congrats!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 11:24 am Title: Ch. 8-Got Any virgin?

So it wasn't only Dawn coming to Spike's rescue; that confused me first. But Spike talked only of Dawn....
I hope he'll be better soon.

Author's Response: i plan on it! yeah, everyone was there but only Dawn got to Spike!!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 04:51 am Title: Ch. 8-Got Any virgin?

another good chapter

Author's Response: thank you for reading!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2008 - 10:44 pm Title: Be Hero...ish

I really like this story, it is cute without the normal vulgarities

Author's Response: normal vulgarities??? what's that?? lol i'm a little confused. but thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2008 - 09:06 pm Title: Be Hero...ish

Oops, that text of the review was for the other story, sorry.
The real review is with the previous chapter.


Author's Response: oookkkkk

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2008 - 09:01 pm Title: Be Hero...ish

Good to see Buffy is coming around, she is changing her ways.

Author's Response: yep! i was getting sick of her myself!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2008 - 08:33 pm Title: Round and Round

I didn't expect Dawn to be the one who saved him. (how did she find it anyway.

Author's Response: she found the demon in the book. everyone else was there, they just weren't in the scene. they were fighting Dak.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 09:55 pm Title: Round and Round

Poor Spike!!!

Please let Buffy get to him and rescue him soon! Hopefully now that you're all sorted out you'll be updating more often, huh? *bats eyelashes*

*huggles* I REALLY liked it!!!

Author's Response: SQUEEE!!! THANK YOU!!! i was really iffy about this chapter as you know!! and as for the sorted out.....i'm gonna e-mail you about that!! but back to Spike. well as you can see, he's doing all his stupid things for her!! enjoy!!! :oD

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2008 - 10:05 pm Title: Round and Round

Giles was very supportive here; I like that. But Spike being caught is bad. I didn't understand why Dak wants Spike to give up Buffy but maybe we'll read more later (about the why).

Author's Response: well as you know, Spike was always throwing himself on the proverbial handgranade for that chick! remember when he first fell in love with her? he was opening doors and always jumping on the bad guy for her. stupid crap like that. just following along with his normal "will bleed for Buffy" nonsense. hope you enjoyed!!!

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 06:24 pm Title: Gettin' Down To Business

Poor Spike! He shouldn't have told evil mean Buffy anything at all! grrrrr She's just like she was in the show! weldone hun! lol

xxx

Author's Response: ahhhh but as u'll soon learn, it's VAGUE AS FOG!!! lol for this chapter i just wanted Spike to annoy the ever lovin' hell out of her. and as we all know, Spike can get on the nerves. not ours but still....i'm gonna try to move the story along faster but annoying the crap out of Buffy is fun!!! lol thanx for all the reviews!!! i'm happy as a fat clam!

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 06:17 pm Title: Crushin

Hehehe yeay loved laughed at Xander enjoyed! xxx

Author's Response: Xander was hard for me. i wanted him to not like Spike but still kind of be a little jealous about his "coolness". and writing as i do, i tend to lean towards my fave character. pulling myself back to say nasty things about him is really hard but i try. thanx.

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 06:10 pm Title: Today's Lesson

God, Buffy is mean!!! I like it! lol Way to go Spike stand up to the cow!

another brill chapter! xxx

Author's Response: yeah, i always pull for his side so i'll get preachy in dialouge. ehh i have to constrain myself. lol well i don't know about "brill" but it makes me smile!

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 06:01 pm Title: Buffy's in Bizarro World

Chuckled my way through the whole chapter, really getting in to this! xxx Right on to the next! *flees*

Author's Response: i try to be funny in my writing. for some reason it doesn't transfer into real life. go fig. thanx so much!!!

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 05:53 pm Title: Normal Buffy Day

I love LOVE love it! lol! xxx *runs to the next chapter*

Author's Response: yay!! someone ACTUALLY likes this story!!! i almost deleted it. *hugs katkin* thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2008 - 05:15 am Title: Gettin' Down To Business

I think they're regressing! Who knew a slayer chosen to save the world and a vampire who's over a century old could act younger than Dawn? Really curious about the new big bad and a bit worried about the coming angst.

Author's Response: well think about it. they have acted like childeren towards each other from time to time. i think it's funny as hell. remember when spike threatened to break the "Trio's" action figures, LOL. c'mon!!! i'm moving right now and my muse just reaking DIED so i'm thinkin of possibilities. got some? ooh and by the way, his "Luthran" answer to her is going to become vague as hell! LOL i know that much.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 11:22 am Title: Gettin' Down To Business

Well that not-date didn't go so well = like Spike hoped for. But Buffy didn't get what she wanted either. Giles would have more pleased if Buffy would have brought him the name written down ;-)

Author's Response: yeah, but how did u think the ch. went?

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