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Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 04:56 am Title: Crushin

For the record, I do like this fic. I loved the convo the Scoobies has about Spike and all the time he's been spending with Dawn. Hilarious to see a master vamp reprimanded by Joyce and then be made happy with cocoa!

Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! i'm just trying to show Spike some love before it turns mean and depressing. is that so wrong??? i hated how he was treated on the show, and to me, i'm not really going out of their character range. i'm just being nice right now. it'll get worse later on. it's not gonna be all "daffodils and teddy bears". i swear!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 09:34 pm Title: Crushin

Well that wasn't the studying that Buffy had in mind, that's for sure. ;-)

Author's Response: *eg* it gets better!

Reviewer: Valery Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 08:29 pm Title: Crushin

I like the story so far but the Spike/Dawn/Joyce friendship is too much for my taste. In the four chapters that I have read the story is repeating the same structure again and again. Maybe is time for a change. Good luck

Author's Response: i'm working on it! i just want Spike to have some love after all the crap he got on the show. and Dawn and Joyce liked Spike. i'd rather build it up before i get to the fighting. like i said WIP!!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 07:36 am Title: Today's Lesson

Whoa, full on Spike lecture! Wondering what the payment will be and if the big bad is as bad as he says. Hoping Buffy starts changing her tune about Spike.

Author's Response: yea, but was it too much? did u like it?

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2008 - 09:34 am Title: Today's Lesson

Seems it wasn't only Dawn that got a lesson this day. I wonder how Buffy will decide regarding Spike's help.

Author's Response: workin' on it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 - 10:46 pm Title: Buffy's in Bizarro World

I liked the second part better because with the first chapter it makes a better picture now (can't describe it better, sorry).
Buffy wasn't pleased about Spike's new teacher status. But I guess she has to live with that now ;-)

Author's Response: lol thanx!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 06:29 am Title: Buffy's in Bizarro World

I wasn't sure after the first chapter how I felt about this fic but this chapter was great! I really love the Joyce/Dawn love for Spike!

Author's Response: thanx!! like i said i'm still working it out. i just remember seeing scenes of Spike and Joyce talking and one time she was in his crypt and i just improvised. and of course, Dawn loved Spike so that was a given....until she threatened to set him on fire.....but i'm just gonna pretend that that was a bad dream or something. i'll try to post something again soon but kind of lost the mood after hearing about Heath's death today. i'll try again tomorrow.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 01:24 pm Title: Normal Buffy Day

If you know what you want to do with the story ("storyline") I would change the summary. It doesn't say much about the story.
I'll check out the next chapter too :) Not much to say about because I don't know what will happen (what this one is about).

Author's Response: i'm gonna do that. i've just been working out a few kinks. did u like the first ch. though?

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