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Reviewer: Roxy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 03:48 pm Title: It's Only Right...

Hey there, sooo sorry I haven't been reviewing! RL is busy and all that ...
But anyhow, despite the my-not-reviewing, I've loved every chapter! The twist with Spike getting captured and cured (for the sake of sales) was great, hadn't seen that coming! I'd thought it would go on for a looong time before Spike would be healed, but jay for fastforwarding blood, even though it did get him badly addicted...oh well :P
I wonder though, how Angel's going to be with Moira without getting all happy...
I really loved the end, where Buffy was pregnant, that was sweet. Loved it!

Author's Response: Hi Roxy!! I know all about RL being busy!! So pleased that you enjoyed it and didn't see some twists coming!! All stuff a writer likes to hear! Hopefully see you in the next fic!! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 02:35 pm Title: It's Only Right...

Awwww, his SON??? YAYYYYY!!!! Thank you, honey, I really enjoyed this story; angst and all!!!!

*huggles*

Author's Response: Glad I've converted you to a bit of angst!! Tee hee!! And that the eyelashes survived the trials of the fic!! Thanks for all your reviews! *big hugs*

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 10:38 am Title: It's Only Right...

*sob* I'm a little sad this story is over. But what a great ending! So they are having a baby. Yay! I loved this story, even though it took me a while before I dared starting to read. :) Looking forward to read PL when you start posting it. And I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel to this fic as well... *hint hint* :)

Author's Response: I'll have to getthe plot bunnies working on a sequel!! Think plenty would like one! PL will be starting in a week or so - 3 updates per week rather than daily but I'm hoping that people will be happy with that. So glad that you were brave enough to give it a go and that you enjoyed it! :) Thanks for all your reviews :)

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 08:51 am Title: It's Only Right...

ahhhh...beautiful end!
I really enjoyed this fic. you did great job. loved every part of it.
...now all you need to do is write another one.
:)


Author's Response: No pressure then Ivana!! Tee hee!! Don't worry I don't think that I could stop writing if I tried now! Totally obsessed by it. So glad that you liked the end. I worried about that last chapter a bit. I always do the last one for some reason! Thanks for all your reviews along the way! :)

Reviewer: Terapsina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 07:08 am Title: It's Only Right...

End? As in the ending end?
I'm, happy don't get me wrong, but I'll miss this one.
This was a very nice ending chapter, the last sentence was great as you probably can already see yourself. I'm a bit sad about the fact you didn't put Brad in hear, but as much as he colors the work this wasn't his story, so not that bad either.
For the sequel, how about Buffy's and Spikes son being kidnapped. I can practically see those two running around and turning British demons inside out about something like this.
But that also is just a thought, write what you want and how you want it.
But sequel still would be necessarily.

Author's Response: I am starting to see that a sequel might have to be written for this one! I certainly would like to see Brad back again (I'm hoping that he might get a best orig character nomination somewhere! He deserves it!! lol!! ) Glad you saw why he wasn't in the last one. I didn't want to get bogged down by goodbyes etc! Thanks for all your reviews - I really appreciate them!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 06:18 am Title: It's Only Right...

Haven't left a review for the last couple of chapters (hangs head) - sorry. Really wasn't expecting (pardon the pun) that as an ending - just thought Spike was being all manly ....... sorry drifted of there!! Back now. That was just the lovliest way to finish a really good story.

Author's Response: I just had a lovely mental image of him fighting atthe top of his game and having fun then thurning to the love of his life with their little one starting life!!! :) What can I say I'm a sucker for a happy ending!! Thanks so much for your reviews along the way I've loved reading every single one! :)

Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 01:34 am Title: Consequences

Just want to say that I am enjoying the positive role you have placed Angel in. I enjoy the occasional Angel bashing like any other Spuffy fan but it gets old after so many. Love how Angel cares and wants to take care of Spike.

Author's Response: One of the main reasons I chose this challenge was that I had to write Angel. I made him how I think he should be!! LOL!!! I just figured after all they've been through he had to care about Spike! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 01:30 am Title: It's Only Right...

Oh man , it's done , it's over , what a great story and their pregnant now too. Can't tell you how much iv'e enjoyed this tale , but you know iv'e told you often enuff. I'mthinking sequel.

Author's Response: Yes Jo you've told me plenty of times but don't let that stop you!! lol!! I think there may be a sequel in this one day! :) Thanks for all your reviews and support!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 01:13 am Title: It's Only Right...

This was a great read and I am looking forward to the sequel.

Author's Response: Hi Toni! Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for letting me know! :) Next from me will be the sequel to Changing Lives! :)

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 01:02 am Title: It's Only Right...

Love all your humans in this. So happy that finally Buffy gets someone to take care of her and make her happy. Spike was always the guy who would stick around and could be counted on by her. Any chance we get a follow up with a baby boy in the story?

Author's Response: Writing baby Spike? Miight be albe to do that!! LOL!! How cute would he be!!! So glad you liked it and thanks for all your reviews! I really appreciate them! :)

Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 - 12:54 am Title: Be Kind Of Ungrateful...

Geesh, you know how to manipulate our emotions. Poor Spike.

Author's Response: Hi there!! Oh yes! I love taking you all on a rollercoaster ride!! hold on tight!! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 11:41 pm Title: It's Only Right...

another great story from you and hopefully more to come.

Author's Response: Hi there Scaryscouse! Thank you so much for letting me know that you liked the fic. don't worry I have plot bunnies living in my head the size of ponies!! So there will be plenty more to come!! LOL!

Reviewer: nadege20 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 10:43 pm Title: It's Only Right...

Thank you for that great story and it's a very nice ending.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for letting me know!! I get as nervous over the last chapter as I do the first!! Glad you liked it! Hopefully see you with my next fic!! :)

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 10:21 pm Title: It's Only Right...

I don't believe that I've left a review before on this fic (bad, bad reader!) but let me now say how much a enjoyed it! I l love fics with a certain amount of angst but with happy endings and you always manage to fit the bill perfectly! Thank you so much for sharing your talents with the rest of the us!

Author's Response: With a lovely review like that one - you're forgiven for not leaving one before!! tee hee!! I do like to write angst but although I play rough with Spike sometimes, I always fix him in the end!! LOL!! Thank you so much for letting me know that you enjoyed the story! :)

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 10:02 pm Title: It's Only Right...

Awwww, what a nice ending. This was such a great story and I am sad to see it end. I look forward to whatever you write next.

Author's Response: Hi Francine! Glad you liked the ending! I always feel really nervous about the last chapter!! Won't keep you waiting too long for something new! The plot bunnies will drive me crazy otherwise!! LOL! Thanks for reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 09:49 pm Title: It's Only Right...

Great story and what a lovely ending.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Bridget! Glad you survived the rollercoaster! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Learning To Deal...

Buffy was clever to be near the house :) So she was there very quick when Brad talked to her.
*phew* I'm glad that they are okay again. I wonder why both of them had the same dream.
Looking forward to more, what they'll do now when they move out.

Author's Response: Hi Cordyk! I enjoyed writing the bit about B getting to the apartment quickly!! lol!! Glad you liked the chapter!! :)

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 04:36 pm Title: Learning To Deal...

love this story
took me 3 hrs to read all the chapters and I can't wait to read more

Author's Response: What a time to find the story with just one chapter to go!!! So glad you've loved it and thank you so much for letting me know! :)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 03:58 pm Title: Learning To Deal...

Yay, that was just perfect! I loved it! *happydance* And now I need the next chapter, asap! *lol*

Author's Response: Hi there Pet! *chuckles at your happy dance* Tee hee!! Glad you liked it and the last chapter will appear tomorrow!!! :)

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 01:42 pm Title: Learning To Deal...

oh yes!! another lovely chapter! Thanks for writing it, and can't wait for the next one! I'm sad to hear it will be the last, but all good things must end... ;( But hey! Maybe it means that 'Parallel Lives' will come quicker! Or is there any more ideas just waiting to be written? ;)

Author's Response: I had intended this to be a short fic - just to see if I could do a challenge - but me and short don't really go together that well!! Had the end planned from the start if you know what I mean!! PL will be going public in prob a week or so with updates three times a week, which I hope people will be happy with, if I go for daily updates it won't appear for a month as RL busy so can't guarantee to write a chapter daily to keep up!! I also have an unnamed all human fic started which sees us with Spike as a 10 yr old at the start. I also have got six chapter of a dark slave fic written but that won't be posted until complete (if at all!). Top priory is PL!! Would you be happy with 3 updates a week? Plot bunnies have taken over my mind!!! they never give me any peace unless I'm sitting writing! Tee hee!!!

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 01:26 pm Title: Time Out

hmm... very, very curious, how you'll explain the dream being real. But waking up with a wound... very freaky :)
BTW, about the retching, yeah, my bad; should've read more carefully.

Author's Response: Hi Serinah!! Glad that I've got you curious!! Tee hee!! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 11:21 am Title: Learning To Deal...

YAYYYYYYYYYY!!! Finally!!!! And smut too!!! *bounces*

THANK YOU MABEL!!! *huggles*

Author's Response: Not quite puppies and roses but not bad for me!! LOL!! Glad you liked it and hope you like the ending!!! :) *hugs* x

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 10:57 am Title: Learning To Deal...

Spike got his mojo back with the dream and Buffy. I do enjoy the world of humans you added with this story. Will we see them again along the way in another story? I want Angel to be happy, but just not too happy. LOL.

Author's Response: Hi there!! I'm so pleased that you like my humans!! Tee hee!! I do love putting original characters in as it's more challenging to get people to like them as they've never met them before!! I may go back and follow their lives in the future as I would like to write more of Angel/Moira and more of Brad cos he's just lovely!!! lol!! Next project that will be posted will be Parallel Lives! :)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 05:43 am Title: Learning To Deal...

Loved the reunion but its a shame than place Angel built will go to waste. Can't wait for the last chapter.

Author's Response: I know poor old Peaches!! I expect that he'll use it himself!! lol! So glad you liked it and hope you like the ending!!! :)

Reviewer: Terapsina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 10:00 pm Title: Time Out

You're evil, evil, EVIL ...

But then, I don't really like writers that don't have a dark side, and because of the always coming sad surprises I definitely can't call your story boring.
As for this chapter: Are they just having shared dream, or have they somewhere in this story been linked? And if so, did we see it, just didn't notice anything, ore are there some higher powers putting they're noses were they don't belong?
As always we love Brad, but it would be nice to have one chapter or one part of a chapter with Angel and Nora, because it is kind of weird seeing Angel falling in love, if we haven't seen her character that much. I'm definitely like that pairing, but you may want to write something with them.

So my conclusion would be: Your EVIL, but in a GOOD way.

Author's Response: I can deal with being evil in a good way!!! lol!! My pal says she wories at how my mind works!! tee hee! Glad you're liking it and that it's full of surprises :) more soon

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