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Reviewer: vampsNslayers101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2015 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 6

Awesome story, I loved it.

Dani

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Date: 12/15/2012 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm enjoying this fic but I have problems with 2010 Buffy because she has stolen the start of their relationship from them. Spike has experienced them sleeping together loving each other and I don't think it was OK for her to give him that much before his Buffy got to do that with him. I just feel really disappointed in her behaviour because going to him to reassure him and give him hope was right but this was just selfish, it never had to go that far. Hmmm, the only consolation is that 2010 Buffy is his Buffy so they are as selfish as each other effectively so she can hardly complain but it stole something from Spike too.

Author's Response: The trouble was that their relationship would never have started if past-Buffy had anything to do with it. She had to learn how good that relationship could be and what she would be missing without it. You could say that she deserved to lose the start of their relationship by the way she’s been a bitch to him so far. Maybe 2010 Buffy sleeping with him did steal something from Spike, but at that point he needed actual proof that Buffy would eventually love him. He was so beaten down and near-suicidal that words would not have convinced him. Only her physical surrender to him would give him the proof he needed. I don’t think he would mind losing the start - after all, he ended up with his own Buffy loving him, which is all he ever wanted. Time jumps do have their cost.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2012 - 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 6

So lovely. Pure, satisfying Spuffiness. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you! This was my first real story. I posted ‘Fated’ first because it was short and so got finished sooner. But that was more of a sketch, just getting the two of them together. This had a real beginning, middle and end. :)

Reviewer: nmcil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2011 - 07:44 am Title: Chapter 6

really enjoyed your story - it was a good blending of the series and an alternative reality. look forward to reading more of your work.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! It was my first serious attempt at a full story.

Reviewer: Evelyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2010 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

"Because you’re not beneath me, Spike."

Oh, best sentence ever. I'm loving this story. Wish it was canon...

Author's Response: I did so hate the way Buffy - and everybody else - kept putting Spike down. I wanted him to have the happy ending he deserves. I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

Reviewer: yubi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2009 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 6

that was really sweet, great work!

Author's Response: Thank you! It was the first real story I wrote which an honest-to-God plot. :D

Reviewer: DoWnEr Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 4

Like the story but it's obviously written by a woman. Don't get me wrong, love the story but the guy remains the faithful dog and keeps away from past Buffy when he realizes she isn't his Buffy but the future Buffy gets to troll around day and night with past Spike. I like the fact that the guy is portrayed so faithfully and the truth that women are natural cheaters shown clearly. It's Spike yes... but not her Spike. Would think she would be faithful like future Spike but then again all men hope their women will be faithful.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story! But that's a tad misogynist of you to say that women are natural cheaters. Future-Spike would have continued to sleep with past-Buffy if she had loved him, but at this point she didn't. Future-Buffy slept with past-Spike because he really is her Spike, just younger, and did love her. I honestly don't see it as cheating! It's the same person, but love is what make the difference.

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2008 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 6

Absolutely loved this fic, going in my fav's list.

Author's Response: Thank you! It was really the first real story I wrote. 'Fated' which was my first was more of a sketch, but when everybody liked that, I thought I'd try a full story with a plot. I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

So nearly loosing Spike made Buffy open her eyes. Glad she did now :))
Too bad that's the last chapter of your stories already. Enjoyed the read a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for liking it! I'm working as hard as i can on the next one!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 5

Well at last Buffy is considering to get Spike to help. That's a first step.
Awe :) Buffy is coming around. Good to see. So the spell had indeed done what it needed to do.

Author's Response: Buffy always fights against the truth. But here she can't miss it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

Lessons for Buffy too how it could be, the dance. Maybe that's a thing she won't forget. It will depend on her now. If she isn't careful with Spike's heart, he'll be dust.
Hopefully the ring will be enough to remind Spike.

Author's Response: I always thought that they would make such a perfect team.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 3

The Buffy2010 arrived too. Maybe in time to give Spike some hope. ~ Yeah, a bit. I like how Buffy teaches the others some sense and Xander a lesson.
I think to know Buffy let him claim her did help a lot *g* And will give him the will to hold on.

Author's Response: Knowing that they would belong to each other in the future really helps.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

Mmmm the lesson has already started. Spike is a good teacher by simply doing what he always does.
Seeing Buffy so speechless with Spike, Dawn and Xander was fun. :)
Oh Buffy was found out.. now she has to make some explanations indeed.

Author's Response: I thought she would be so shocked that she would be silent and so really see Spike as he is.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah what a difference.. one Buffy happy being with Spike, having defeated evil and one miserable, being alone.
Sad to see Spike in this mood too. But it seems he accidentally did something to make it better now. ~ And yeah, Cecily owned him.

Author's Response: I wanted to show the contrast -- how happy she could have been!

Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love how Buffy is so speachless throughout this chapter. Can't blame her, though, I'd be speachless too if Spike started doing to me what he did to her.

Author's Response: That's what I thought! ;D

Reviewer: sister cuervo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter 6

You have such a lovely, romantic way with words--and quite sexy as well. Very well done stories--i've enjoyed all of them.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so delighted you like my work! I love combining the romance and sex. It makes them both more intense.

Reviewer: Gill Bailey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wow! Probably the best bit of Spuffy I've ever read...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's wonderful to hear!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 6

What a great story this is. I love stories where Buffy realizes that Spike and her can be good together. My heart breaks for Spike when he was trying to be good and the scoobies continue treating him bad.

Are you planning a sequel to this. If not then can't wait to read more from you.

Author's Response: I'm delighted you liked it! I'm afraid there won't be a sequel to this. It seemed to end naturally where it did. But I have written more stories and will be posting them over the next week.

Reviewer: Squid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 6

Although I don't like it as much as your other two stories, it is still pretty good. It's a pretty good storyline. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I wrote this and 'Fated' at the same time and 'Fated' finished first. But they were both my starting out stories. I'm still working things out.

Reviewer: jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter 6

that was awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ooh! This was lovely. Definitely did a great job of showing us all how good they could be. thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you! I never could understand why the show kept insisting that Spike was all wrong for her. It seemed to me that they would make perfect partners in every way.

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 6

great original story

Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun to write.

Reviewer: Shanna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 6

I read all 6 chapters and all I can say. is...I loved it.! Hot yet sweet. Well written too. I decided to come back (2 hours later) and post a review just so that you know that the story and your writing was enjoyed and hope that you continue to write more Spuffy because you do it extremely well.

Author's Response: Thank you! Both for enjoying and reviewing. I'm so new to this that every review helps -- telling me I'm doing it right. I'll certainly be writing more. I'm having way too much fun to stop!

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

wheee! i'm loving this!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 6

Excellent story. Absolutely loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I still can't get over that people like it! It's amazing to me.

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