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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2008 - 10:02 am Title: 14

It's good to see William showing a bit more confidence in himself. If this fight plays out I hope William goes for Liam's nose again! Great chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thank you! :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2008 - 08:32 am Title: 14

William standing up for himself is probably the best thing he could do. If Liam keeps his word and his friends stay out of it that is. Will Buffy find William and "save" him and how is William going to feel if she does? Sorry to hear that you are struggling to write but it really doesn't come across in your stories. Still really enjoying and "GO WILLIAM"!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that, unfortunately it now takes me days to write a chapter when it used to just take hours. Hope it's just temporarily though. Thank you!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2008 - 03:34 am Title: 14

That was probably not his best idea, liked him standing up to William though. More please soon.

Author's Response: I'll do my best. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2008 - 01:16 am Title: 14

OMG WAT AN ASS WHY CANT HE JUST LEAVE THEM!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u update. i cant believe liam, he muct either really hate william, be really jealous of william, or really love him in some weird way/ i really hope that nothing happens to william and that everything works out well. also i hope that things go well with buffy and william and that nothing comes between them. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I'll try to update again soon.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2008 - 10:07 pm Title: 14

Please let someone come and help William! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'll try not to keep you waiting too long until next update. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2008 - 09:33 pm Title: 14

Arrgh! Too bad, Liam was quicker as Buffy. Too late for a warning now. Good for William to stand up against Liam though :))

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2008 - 08:11 pm Title: 14

Good for William for standing up for himself! Hopefully Buffy will get there in time! Loving the story!

Author's Response: So happy you love it, thank you!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2008 - 07:45 pm Title: 14

Ah, William standing up to Liam ... good..

Author's Response: Yeah, good for him. Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: notwhomever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2008 - 07:10 pm Title: 13

good story, sadly realistic
I like that your characters are not one dimensional
i.e. Xander being all "good" and Gunn being all "bad", keeps the story interesting and not so predictable.
looking forward to more, please don't put William in the hospital : )

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it so far, thank you! And I'll try not to put William in the hospital. .)

Reviewer: Nikkole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2008 - 07:09 pm Title: 13

I just found this story this afternoon and I really like it! I hope you update again soon! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Yay, a new reader! *lol* Thank you so much Nikkole, and I hope you'll like what's to come as well. :)

Reviewer: sam52 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2008 - 03:09 pm Title: 13

oh my gosh! i am totally in love with this story! it makes me so happy!! i cannot wait to read more!

especially love how gunn is a good guy here, too. i love that he "looked genuinely hurt". that was really good. i loved that. i am so glad that he is helping buffy and that he stood up to liam.

really loved how william stood up to liam and punched him and probably broke his ((ugly)) nose... really awesome!

what really got me though was when you gave william that little smirt in chapter 12. that kinda showed me that with her he is coming out of his shell and that he is gonna be more "spike-like" around her.

once again, loved it!
can't wait to read more!
=)

Author's Response: Well, that's what I'm going for here; he's really just William, but he'll still have some 'Spike' in him just waiting to come out. :) I'm so happy you like this story, thank you so much for letting me know!

Reviewer: mabel marsters Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2008 - 04:56 pm Title: 13

Hi Pet, managed to get all caught up with the chapters! Looking forward to what horrid old Angel has planned nad hopefully it'l be thwarted!! :)

Author's Response: Yay! *lol* Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2008 - 10:28 am Title: 13

Oh no, just when things were going so well for William and Buffy this new threat with Liam has to happen. :( I'm glad Gunn warned Buffy though. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2008 - 04:34 am Title: 13

OH GOD PLEASE DONT LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO WILLIAM AND LET BUFFY SAVE HIM AND NOT GET HURT AS WELL!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that everything works out well, liam doesnt hurt william or buffy and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I'll try to update soon. :)

Reviewer: Inara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2008 - 04:33 am Title: 13

OMG! How evil are you? That was mean leaving it like that!! Although, major points to Gunn for sticking up for what he believes in. Thanks for updating your fic. I just love it. Can't wait for more...quite literally bouncing in my seat.


Author's Response: I know it was evil. But hey, that's me. *lol* Thanks for reviewing, so glad you love it! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2008 - 03:05 am Title: 13

Was glad Gunn gave Buffy a heads up about William! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: More coming soon. Thank you!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 10:10 pm Title: 13

I knew their was a reason I liked Gunn. Loved it and more please soon.

Author's Response: I'll try to have the next chapter up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 09:57 pm Title: 13

Oh No! Poor William. Go save him, Buffy!

Author's Response: She better hurry... ;) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Lluvia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 09:37 pm Title: 13

Noooo, you're so bad girl!!!

Why Angelus can be knocked down by a train, one really big??

Author's Response: I am? What are you talking about? *lol*

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Slayer21190 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 08:13 pm Title: 13

I am totally loving this story and can't wait for the next installment. You have actually inspired me to continue writing my high school fic, I just need to get the courage to post it on the site now. :-D xx

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so happy to hear that, thank you very much! And I'm really looking forward to read your fic when/if you start posting it. :)

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 06:17 pm Title: 13

I liked it as always. Angel always seems to mess things up. Hope William knocks him out this time.

Author's Response: He sure would deserve it. :) Glad you liked, thank you!

Reviewer: veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 05:50 pm Title: 13

wow cool gunns being nice anyway cant wait for the next update

Author's Response: I'll try not to keep you waiting too long. :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 05:20 pm Title: 13

Loved how Buffy told Liam that she was busy.... but him wanting revenge on William now is bad.
Good that Gunn warned Buffy; maybe it won't come to the worst now.
~ Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you, more coming in a few days, hopefully. :)

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 04:53 pm Title: 13

Yay, Gunn! Please, oh please, don't let anything bad be happening to William. *bites nails*

Author's Response: I won't make promises I can't keep... *lol* Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: serendipity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 04:52 pm Title: 13

Stupid fucking Liam! Why can't he just leave William alone?! William and Buffy deserve to be happy and Liam is just a jealous insecure prick who has to pick on people to feel better about himsefl!

Having said that, I'm really loving this story and can't wait for another update!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I agree; Liam's an ass. :)

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