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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2009 - 03:11 am Title: Roman Carnival

This story really brings to heart what freedom means and how cruel slavery is. More chapters please.

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Date: 04/18/2009 - 09:49 am Title: Roman Carnival

Poor Anne - she didn't deserve that.
~ Good to seen an update :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2009 - 02:38 am Title: Roman Carnival

I expected more pain, though pain is hard to articulate. But poor Anne. I'm imagining it's Dawn who is asking about her. Can't wait for more.

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Date: 11/21/2008 - 03:51 am Title: Dinner With Sinners - Chapter the Fourth

Yah, new chapter! Can't wait for Dawn. I really have not idea what is going to happen with Mr. O'Conner.

Author's Response: You're still with me...aww...it warms the heart. Mr. O'Connor is going to bring about some changes in Buffy's life as will Dawn. Dawn and Spike will make their appearances very soon...

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2008 - 09:46 pm Title: Dinner With Sinners - Chapter the Fourth

Good to see an update :)
I wonder if Anne will be the one now to get blamed... it wasn't her fault but you'll never now.

Author's Response: The muse decided to be good for Thanksgiving :P Everything in Anne's life is just dismal right now but things will get better very soon. Thanks for still reading and reviewing.

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Date: 07/30/2008 - 10:20 pm Title: Pieces of Silver - Chapter the Third

Even if Darla and Harmony sounds like trouble, Miss Calendar sounds like a light in the dark.
Looking forward to more of it. :)

Author's Response: Thanx for the review. Miss Calendar will be a ray of hope for Buffy. Such a bleak miserable life needs a lil sunshine.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2008 - 09:25 pm Title: Pieces of Silver - Chapter the Third

I'm glad you picked up the story again. Hopefully Jenny doesn't become a villan. And it's nice to know that Dawn at least isn't a bad person.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're still with me. I don't plan to abandon the story. I plan to stick it out to the end. I actually have the next chapter ready for posting. Such a bleak, miserable life such as Buffy's needs a little sunshine, a little goodness. Buffy will have people in her corner.

Reviewer: Lexi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2008 - 09:00 pm Title: Pieces of Silver - Chapter the Third

I'm liking this story, it's different and a good read.
Update when you can please : )

Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's hard to be original in the Spuffy fandom as I think almost every conceivable story line has been written. I just hope that it remains interesting. The next chapter is ready for posting. There will be an update very soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 - 09:00 pm Title: Slaving For Bread-Chapter the Second

What a house. It's quite more than that. And yet a very cruel place.
Things are indeed bad for Buffy :( Poor one.

Author's Response: It is quite a house! A beauty with beasts that lurk within. Poor Buffy has it bad but a silver lining is on the horizon. Her life won't be all badness...there's Spike goodness to be had. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2008 - 03:40 pm Title: Slaving For Bread-Chapter the Second

Good update! Very interesting how the slaves at Mercy Hall have lost certain aspects of humanity ALONG with the sadistic Master and his family. More soon, pleeease?

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks for reading and reviewing again. I think that the slaves becoming so cold is like a survival thing. If they didn't become numb to all that brutality they'd probably have nervous breakdowns. There will be more as soon...very soon.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 12:47 am Title: Of Flesh and Blood- Chapter the First

The name you gave the Master is the name Joss said was the Masters (season 1, of course) human name. So will we see Darla? And how old is Buffy? Also, I'm glad it's not Angel or Reily as her new master

Author's Response: I did (and am still doing) tons of research for this fic...want to get everything accurate. Darla will appear in this fic. Buffy is 13 when her first owner dies and 16 when she is bought by The Master. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Hope you'll keep it up.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 12:36 am Title: A Perusal Of My Tale- Prologue

Good start, I'm interrested in more.

Author's Response: Thanks. There's more to come.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 - 08:45 pm Title: Of Flesh and Blood- Chapter the First

Poor Buffy... she was lucky so far but it seems the new home will be bad for her. Getting beaten is never good.

Author's Response: Yes... Buffy has much badness in store for her...but also some good. Getting beaten is never good...unless a naked Spike is doing it and there's chocolate involved... :) *dreamy look* Thanks for reading and reviewing. There's more to come!

Reviewer: louise Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 - 08:53 pm Title: Of Flesh and Blood- Chapter the First

i normally don't like historical stories but i read this one and loved it. i hope you update soon.

Author's Response: *giggles madly* I'm glad you love the story. Thank you for reviewing. I will be updating soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 - 04:04 pm Title: Of Flesh and Blood- Chapter the First

Certainly a different take on things! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll be updating soon.

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Date: 06/19/2008 - 11:30 am Title: Of Flesh and Blood- Chapter the First



Author's Response: Hmm...blank review...but @ least it tells me that you read it. Thanks for reading and attempting to review.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 - 04:23 am Title: Of Flesh and Blood- Chapter the First

Aww to several things!!! #1 - You thanked me!!! :) Thank YOU! #2 - Dumbledore! (no explanation needed) #3 - You used the Master's real name! Major props for that, I love the subtlety and the APPARENT research you've done for the story -- both with the Buffy aspects and the historical ones. :) Enjoying this horridly sad tale very much, can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: *blushes* So glad you're enjoying my horridly sad tale. I'm trying not to make it too angsty (hard to do considering the plot) bcuz I have a very low angst threshold. I'll be posting soon.

Reviewer: Sandara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2008 - 11:12 am Title: A Perusal Of My Tale- Prologue

I understand where you are coming from. You want to make certain everyone can read with ease. Just wanted to make one point. Remember that "Gone With the Wind" has been read by millions including me when I was pretty young. The story was engaging enough to capture the audience despite the accurate diction. The book sold millions. Sometimes when you have to slow down to read something it is a good thing. You get greater detail. Again JMO. I think you are off to a great start.

Author's Response: I remember having to read "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn" when I was around 11 and eventually (after I reread it a few times) I understood what Huck and the others were saying. I've decided to remove the translations from the story. Because of the domain switch, some of the updates were removed, so I''ll have to repost the first chapter. Thanks.

Reviewer: Sandara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2008 - 08:50 pm Title: A Perusal Of My Tale- Prologue

This is for both chapters. I had reviewed after he second one bit it was eaten so her goes again.

I am enjoying this very much. I love to write and read historically acurate pieces, especialy those that don't pull the punches.on how the past truly was. My only thought is that your translations are truly not needed and are somewhat distracting. They interupt the flow of the verse. Personally I can sus out the meaning of the southern speak without the added modern dialect. End note and AN's can be great to add a bit of info like the use of the term stripe and such, or delve into a bit of history that explains something, but I think it would read more fluid if you left out the translation bits. JMO. Otherwise, I am intrigued. Good setting, strong characters, raw emotion. All in all a good drama starting to unfold. It is clear you have done your homework.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Pari is doing some relocation so stuff will go missing. I too love reading and writing historically accurate pieces. I did a great deal of research for this story...Giles would be proud! I've been debating with myself about the translations - some will understand southern speak, some won't. Maybe I'll just relocate them or remove them altogether. I'm glad that you're intrigued by the characters and the raw emotion. This is my first true foray into angst and I want it to be good. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I love your fics and am honoured that you took the time to read and review my fic. I hope you'll stay with me.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 08:27 pm Title: A Perusal Of My Tale- Prologue

I'm a bit weary because of the Character Death warning but I enjoyed the start.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you'll continue to read the rest.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2008 - 05:39 pm Title: A Perusal Of My Tale- Prologue

Wow! Verrrry interesting. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thankies! Glad you like it. The next chappy will be posted before the week is out. I hope you'll keep reading.

Reviewer: Terra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2008 - 04:38 pm Title: A Perusal Of My Tale- Prologue

Great beginning, I like the idea of the autobiography style. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Aww shucks! I'll try to keep things interesting. The next chappy will be posted soon. Keep reading and reviewing!

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