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Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2009 - 08:04 am Title: Baby Sis

Nice to see you have finally updated. I felt like it was a little bit all over the place, it was hard to follow at times. I still strongly recommend gettin a beta, they will help you fix up all those things.

I didn't realize you had gotten any bad reviews, Im sorry to hear that. You do really have a great idea here, so don't give up. But don't be afraid to ask for help either, it can only make it better. I had a good laugh at your last line of this chapter though, looks like Buffy has been caught out :D

Reviewer: Jake Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 07:54 pm Title: The Drifter

Interesting... I'm intrigued but also a little distracted by some errors, they aren't too bad but you might want to go back and clean it up a little.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 06:58 pm Title: Baby Sis

Good to see an update :)
Yeah I guess it's difficult to work with Anya. But for now Buffy has to learn so I think this arrangement will work well.
Looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2008 - 10:12 pm Title: . . . .and Able

Who needs an enemy if you have a brother like Liam. And Spike has the scar to prove it.
~Good to see an update :)

Reviewer: djonie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2008 - 03:10 pm Title: . . . .and Able

Good story so far, I wonder what Delia is up to lol :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2008 - 12:35 am Title: The Drifter

Oh I loved it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 05:27 pm Title: Cain. . . .

I like the start of this one; looking forward where you'll lead it too :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2008 - 10:28 pm Title: Cain. . . .

So now brother, Liam, appears.. and stealing.. from Spike.

Enjoying.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2008 - 11:04 am Title: Cain. . . .

Ah, so the plot thickens! Awesome chapter, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2008 - 10:55 am Title: Buffys Choice

Ok, I don't mean to pick and by no means am I perfect but I thought I should let you know in this chapter there are a few spelling mistakes and wrong words used. At the start of the fic you wrote Nit instead of Not and after the second break you used board instead of bored.

Other then that, I love it can't wait to see where it goes. Like I said, I know my stuff isn't perfect, I need to go over my older fics and get them beta-ed. So please don't take this as a dig at your work. Im just trying to help.

Author's Response: No, thank you, really I appreciate it, I am not good when it comes to editing, so thanks for the help and for the review, I am glad you are enjoying g the story!

Reviewer: SMac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2008 - 05:23 am Title: The Drifter

I looked up the other story and it wasn't the one I was thinking of. I am glad you decided to come back and rewrite your story as you have clealry grown as a writer and I do like the premise of this paricular plotline. There was a movie, and there was another BtVS story that played off that movie too. I liked it a lot. I can totally read another version of that movie plotline or whatever you plan to do with this plot. I'll come back and review once you have more length to it as I don't like to read stories until they're long enough to draw me in and keep me there for a good read. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Reviewer: SMac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2008 - 11:03 pm Title: The Drifter

I loved the original. It was based on a movie. What was your handle on FF.net? I'd like to look up the old story but I don't recall whose name it was authored under. How much have you revised it? I like to read stories when they've more posted chapters so I can get in to it for a while before I have to stop. I'll come back and review once you post more chapters, but I'd really like to see the old one too so if you can tell me your FF.net name I'd be appreciative. Thanks.

Author's Response: My name on FF.NET is sesshiesbabe, but be warned I wrote it when i was really young, so I was inspired to revise it after i cringed at every other sentence. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2008 - 10:19 pm Title: Cain. . . .

Just read the first three chapters and I'm loving it! Thanks for the great fic and please don't make us wait too long for an update!

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