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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2009 - 10:04 pm Title: Is There A Crumb In Crumbling?

Very hard for Buffy at the grave; for Dawn too. (Good description of how she felt.)
Heartbreaking to hear Buffy calling for her mom but good she was able to cry now.
Looking forward to find out who was there - Angel or Xander.

Reviewer: moa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2009 - 07:03 pm Title: Is There A Crumb In Crumbling?

i really liked it! CAN´T WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2009 - 05:04 pm Title: Is There A Crumb In Crumbling?

Ooh, who could that be? Xander, perhaps. At least it sounds like it could be him. Loved the chapter, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2009 - 03:46 pm Title: Is There A Crumb In Crumbling?

Realistic but very emotional and in character for everyone. I loved your description of the Slayer's feelings and how people still looked for her to know what to do. Was it Angel of Xander or even Giles who said that last line? is buffy going to end up defending Spike? I'm so interested to see the next conflict and how you show it. Please update soon.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2009 - 11:16 am Title: Is There A Crumb In Crumbling?

This is very nice. I can see it happening just like this. So glad Spike was on the receiving end of Buffy's breakdown rather than Angel, who I suppose is the rude interruption that has just arrived. I always thought it was very weird that Angel sat with her beside Joyce's grave when everyone knew just how much Joyce didn't like Angel!
On with the confrontation now please...

Reviewer: Thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2009 - 06:46 am Title: Helplessness and Denial

Great start Zaira! Wanted you to know that I found and read it. I'll be in touch soon. Looking forward to checking out what you have ready.

Author's Response: Only just now saw this! Thanks a lot for your review and help!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2008 - 12:31 am Title: Helplessness and Denial

Great beginning! Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Lluvia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2008 - 12:27 pm Title: Helplessness and Denial

Ohhh, I like it, so sad, and I woul like to rip Xander's head off grrrr!

Hope for more soon ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I promised the new chapter earlier, but I now have a beta and it hopefully will be up soon!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2008 - 09:55 pm Title: Helplessness and Denial

I always hated the sheer cruelty of Xander's reaction to Spike's flowers. Willow and Buffy are acting in character here, so it's going to be interesting to see where you take this.

Author's Response: I always felt the same. It was such a petty thing to reject the flowers for a dead woman and in the same time his grief. I hurt for Spike more than in most episodes there. Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2008 - 09:29 pm Title: Helplessness and Denial

I like the start :) Looking forward to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter is posted.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2008 - 06:31 pm Title: Helplessness and Denial

Really like the beginning of this story, hope you'll post more soon. I always felt so bad for Spike in that scene, just wanted to cry for him. And I feel the same way when I read this. I love Buffy's reaction here. Great start!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I know, Spike is just so helpless there it's unbearable. glad you liked my take on Buffy. She will be less composed in my story.

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2008 - 06:13 pm Title: Helplessness and Denial

Sometimes I really just wish I could strangle Xander. I am glad that she ast least told him to leave the flowers alone.

Author's Response: Thanky for reviewing! Yeah, Xander is just too narrow minded to cut Spike some slack. I think Buffy would put the presumed wishes of her mother first. Death has put things into perspective.

Reviewer: Gina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2008 - 06:02 pm Title: Helplessness and Denial

Great description of Buffy's point of view and her quiet grief and how unreal it feels. Great start and update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot to me! Buffy did not get the space to grief really in the series. But I think for her it would have been the single most hard blow. She's alone now, and deep inside she's not ready.

Reviewer: keddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2008 - 05:29 am Title: Helplessness and Denial

I really like this and i am looking forward to reading where this goes. Excellent job of capturing the sadness and frustration.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. I'm happy that you think I managed to capture Buffy's grief. We'll hear more about that next chapter.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2008 - 04:26 am Title: Helplessness and Denial

Good start, glad Buffy accepted the flowers. Always hated the way Xander acted in that epi. UGH ! He's such a jerk toward Spike.

Liked it , can't wait to see where you take it! More soon please. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked it. Next chapter is posted and should soon be up.

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