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Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2009 - 06:19 am Title: 14

This story is getting better witch each chapter! Damn that plan is truly evil. Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Really think so? Thank you so much! So happy you like it. :)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2009 - 04:56 am Title: 14

There are no words to describe how much I hate Dru. Poor Spike for having to deal with her shit. Spike's blood pressure probably goes way up from having to deal with her. LOL Dru needs to be put down. What does Angel see in Dru, really. I hope Spike and Buffy stay strong together as a couple.

More please.......

Author's Response: More is up, thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2009 - 04:31 am Title: 14

Jeez, that's her great plan? God, this woman really is delusional if she thinks that'll work. Methink it's time to call in the nice men with the straitjackets to take her away to the crazy house where she belongs.

Author's Response: For some reason, I have a thing for writing crazy Dru. *lol* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2009 - 01:23 am Title: 14

Good that Buffy is suspicious. My God Dru is so totally screwed up and evil. I hope William doesn't fall for her sleazy trick. Why the hell does she want Wiliam anyway..just go back to Angel.UGH I can't wait for Dru to get whats coming to her...hopefully Buffy will kick her ass if she gets an abortion and tries to make William feel all guilty.

More soon please, this is getting good now.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, thank you. More is up. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 08:32 pm Title: 14

William stood his place and demanding a paternal test? Well done :)
Buffy is right to be suspicious because it went too well. This is really an evil plan (Dru).

Author's Response: Truly evil. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 08:31 pm Title: 14

Spike has Buffy. Hopefully Dru will get it through her head at some point. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reveiw!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 07:57 pm Title: 14

Drusilla... control ... is her game.. Sad person..

Waiting to see Liam's reaction ..

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2009 - 06:35 pm Title: 13

Oh, loved that! I'm sooo freaking curious about that evil plan!!

Author's Response: You'll find out more about that soon. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2009 - 02:22 am Title: 13

She has a lot of nerve calling anyone a cheap little slut, has she looked in the mirror lately? Seriously, if the crazy bitch wasn't pregnant, I would want Buffy to kick her ass. Why doesn't she just get back with Liam and leave Spike alone? It's obvious he wants nothing to do with her, ugh. I've never wanted to smack someone so much before...lol!

Author's Response: *lol* Your reactions to my chapters never disappoint me. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2009 - 01:26 am Title: 13

Still reading and enjoying. OMG what is that evil skank up to now? God I hate her. I'm so happy Buffy is standing by her man, hope he doesn't do something stupid.

Good chappie, more soon. :)

Author's Response: Absolutely! Thank you! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2009 - 09:11 pm Title: 13

Good idea to go with William when he visits Drusilla; better not let him go there alone. Who knows what Drusilla may be planning. And she can be supportive.
Drusilla has an evil plan? Really not good for William....
~ Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: So glad to hear that, thank you!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2009 - 08:58 pm Title: 13

Pure evil is exactly how I would describe Dru! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I'll try to update again soon. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2009 - 07:15 pm Title: 13

Glad Buffy is toughing it out with William..

Sad person.. Drusilla.

Author's Response: You are not wrong. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2009 - 12:50 pm Title: 12

Hey, don't be sad. I'm sure there are still a bunch of people who are reading your story. I used to read fics without reviewing them for quite a while before I actually did. I think people don't realize how much it means to the writers to hear a comment from the reader.
I really like your stories, so please keep them coming as long as you wish to! *hugs*

Author's Response: I guess you're right. It's just that when barely anyone leaves a review, it feels like they don't care enough for the story to bother comment. I won't give up writing, though, it's too important to me. Thank you! *hugs back*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 10:23 pm Title: 12

Things are getting even more complicated. Loving this fic! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, there will be more later this week. :)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 06:28 pm Title: 12

I'm still interested so please don't give up on this story. You are one of my favorites and I have every single one of your stories. You haven't failed me yet. You always do a great job on character development which I love. As for the story. Dru is a crazy bitch and I don't feel sorry for her. A lot of people's parents aren't together for some reason or another. But you don't see everybody treating people like objects because of that. I feel sorry for Spike. When you date someone you never assume that this person is going to be crazy and won't let you go. That is just scary. I'm glad to see that spike thinks the baby mine not be his. I was afraid that he was just going to take her word for it. That would be so stupid. if the baby isn't his then super. If it is his then he needs to fight for custody of the his baby because Dru wouldn't be fit to be a mother. So, please don't give up on this story or any of your stories for that matter.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much for those words. It means a lot. And thanks for reviewing, so happy you like this! :)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 05:19 pm Title: 12

Oh, cry me a friggin river. It may make me sound like a bitch, but I don't feel at all sorry for her. She brought all this on herself, she didn't have to turn out the way she did, she could have made things better, but she chose to be a nutcase. Angel says she doesn't want pity, but I think that's exactly what she wants. She wants Spike to feel sorry for her and come back, but if I know him, it's not going to happen. You know, out of all the stories I've read in here, yours tend to make me hate Dru the most...lol! Keep up the good work=)

Author's Response: *lol* I've always loved writing Dru for some reason, which is weird, since I never really liked her on the show. Thanks for your reveiw!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 12:19 pm Title: 12

It's Easter - wait till that is over and check the amount of your readers then. :)

Look there - it was Liam. And he even had some secrets to spill. But William should take that as a warning too - she won't give up easily.

~ Still there, reading.

Author's Response: So good to hear, you've always been one of my most faithful readers. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 11:36 am Title: 12

Love that Buffy still stands up for him.. And that Spike will fight back.

Dru may have her problems based on a horrid situaton... but she is a willing aggressor and user and doesn't give a damn about anyone else. She gets no pity party from me..

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 - 05:46 pm Title: 11

Yay, an update!
I liked that chapter, you showed how crazy and obsessive Dru can get well. But who would dare to punch Spike? oO


Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I wonder who it could be... :)

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 11:36 pm Title: 11

I actually think it's Riley
and Drusilla is psycho...which I love :)

Author's Response: Riley, eh? We'll see if you're right. :)Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 08:42 pm Title: 11

OK. Who hit him?? Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Keep reading and you'll find out, ;) Thanks for reviewing, more will be up soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 01:34 pm Title: 11

They are indeed in trouble... Good decision not wanting to let Drusilla come between them. Won't be easy, that's for sure.
So who was the one defending Dru's honor? I guess it's someone that Dru sent after him, telling he left her despite being pregnant.
Looking forward to find out.

Author's Response: You'll find out soon. Thank you for leaving a review! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 11:45 am Title: 11

A friend of Drusilla's.. taking the side of the Poor Damsel in Pregnant Distress?

Poor Spike..

Author's Response: You'll find out who it is in the next chapter. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 06:37 pm Title: 10

Oh boy, poor Spike and Buffy. I hope that the baby isn't Spike's... great update!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much! :)

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