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Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2009 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter 8: Feeling Better

This was very good. I like the emotions and how the story goes. Buffy and Spike was so nice together.

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Date: 08/18/2009 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 4: Just a Patrol

Hey, I'm liking the story so far...but I'm wondering....what happened to Anya? She was walking Dawn to Spike's crypt to talk to him about what Xander did, but when Dawn gets to the crypt Anya isn't with her and she therefore doesn't warn Spike about Xander's phonecall. And too, I was wondering, in the next chapter.....after Angel and Xander leave, Dawn says her good-byes to Buffy and Spike and leaves by herself....isn't it still nighttime? She's going home at night by herself through a graveyard, and neither Spike or Buffy care?

Author's Response: Well Anya comes up in the next chapter. As for Dawn wandering around alone. hmm. I'll have to look into that. Excellent point.

Reviewer: Buffy Convert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2009 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 8: Feeling Better

Great. I like that it ended on an up-beat note, yet left room to build on for possible sequels.
It didn't have many grammatical mistakes, mostly just run-on sentences to stumble over. (O.K., if someone was reading Spuffy for the first time & had never seen the series, several phrases would be confusing. But how would any of those people get here?)

Author's Response: Yea that was my goal. Allow for a sequel which is currently being posted but yet finished up that chapter quite nicely. Sorry about the run-on sentences. I did go through the latest one and tried to do away with some of those to help.

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Date: 08/06/2009 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 7: Up for Round 3?

Great chappy! I liked the way Angel tried to get on Spike's good side. I believe Angel to be sincere. An idiot, but sincere.

Author's Response: I agree with you. I think Angel realized Spike wasn't really that bad of a person. Angel might not be the brightest at times but I think he knows Spike well enough to know when to back off.

Reviewer: Buffy Convert Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2009 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 6: Good Awakenings

I had to smile when spike said, "We have an unconventional relationship." Understated, but true. Spike showed real depth of charactor when he asked Buffy if she had or could hate Angel. When Buffy has a few more years on her, she may think about this: Does Spike hate Angel? Does Angel hate Spike? If the answer is "yes" in either direction, why are both still alive? Er, un-alive?

Author's Response: Interesting. I never thought of it that way. They had plenty of time to kill each other. Angel was way stronger than Spike for years and all Spike did was try for his approval, not fight for his life.

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Date: 08/06/2009 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: Interventions

My favorite part was when Buffy said, "and you had a frekin' kid that I never even knew about..."Well, the rest of it kind of pales in comparison to that. I mean, come on, Angel! THAT is nothing to keep secret from "my girl".

Author's Response: So true!

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Date: 08/06/2009 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter 3: The Shock of the Truth

This is good so far. I will guess that Xander called Angel. Because if it wasn't Giles, who else could it be?

Author's Response: Very good point! Not like Xander knows too many people he could call and complain to about Spike and Buffy.

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter 8: Feeling Better

Awww, that was adorable. I thoroughly enjoyed this. It could use a beta, and I would do it if I was a good enough beta lol, but unfortanely, I'm not. But it was good none the less. = D *thumbs up* I loved how Buffy sdecided to be with him, and I loved Spikes reaction to that. Adorable.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. yea I'm looking for a beta. I have one that's working with some of my larger pieces but I can't expect one girl to do them all so I've been posting the little ones without her work. If someone else is willing I'm game but I'm so glad you did enjoy it anyway :)

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 5: Interventions

Cute--about the poems and stuff.

A big two thumbs up to Buffy for finally sticking up for herself towards Angel and Xander. Stupid wankers. I'm enjoying this.

Author's Response: I know. I always wanted Buffy stronger in that way. I'm glad she was able to stand up for herself in this one!

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 3: The Shock of the Truth

Hopefully Anya knows who he is talking to, undoubtedly Angel, Im guessing. Maybe she will go and warn Spike and Buffy. Off to next chapter = )

Author's Response: Anya is a smart cookie just no one picked up on it.

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 2: High Fever

*flicks Xander* Silly boy.

Author's Response: *laughs* what a way to handle Xander's feisty side!

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1: Rescue Mission

Awwww! This chapter made me tear up. Poor Buffy is in rough shape. I'm glad she is letting Spike take such good care of her. Off to next chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Rescue Mission

This story would be great, ecept you have a lot of run on sentences and sentences that do not make sense. You need someone to edit your work, and it would be a lot better. E-mail me when it is done and I will finish reading ot.

Reviewer: spuffy chick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 08:33 am Title: Chapter 8: Feeling Better

oh...spike's the sweetest guy ever... loved this fic!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: sus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 8: Feeling Better

I like this angle.

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 8: Feeling Better

I really liked it. You did a really good job and I can't wait for the sequels.

Author's Response: As I was saying on my last response, I'm not sure how far I got on posting the sequels. I had stopped because I received a beta offer but it doesn't seem to have panned out so I'm not sure how I will do this. Either I can post and leave the errors in it or I can wait for a beta or even wait for my current beta to finish Lost then Found. I haven't decided yet:(

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: Feeling Better

Totally loved this! Can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response: I can't remember if I posted the sequel or not. I know I had a beta offer which seems to not pan out which is a shame. What that means is I'm left with a choice. Either I post as its written in my normal run on sentence fashion ignoring all complaints about posting unbetaed things or I hold off until Lost and Found is finished so she can read it. I haven't decided which it will be but I'll let you know.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 8: Feeling Better

Spike made the right decision or must I say Buffy did?
Anyway - good to see them so happy now.
*pokes*
You didn't mark the story at finished. (Remember that some people don't read WIPs.)
Good to know there will be a sequel or two; looking forward to it.

Author's Response: There will be two sequels and a epilogue. I was hoping to have the things betaed but it appears as though the beta offer didn't work out. So i'll have to make a choice to continue posting as is or wait for another beta or to even wait until Lost and Found finishes.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 7: Up for Round 3?

I'm glad that Spike doesn't listen to Angel; Buffy can decide for herself what she wants.
Good to be able to read on, now I'm curious about the talk.

Author's Response: I'm glad too. He needs to stand up for himself as much as Buffy does.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2009 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 6: Good Awakenings

Loved the way Buffy gave Angel and Xander a piece of her mind! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: The last two chapters were posted. Hope you enjoy these as well. Look for a sequel in about 2 weeks!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 6: Good Awakenings

Loved the Spuffyness :)
And that Buffy saw that Spike truly loves her.

Author's Response: I know, it's so sweet!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 6: Good Awakenings

Just read the whole story so far. It's really sweet. Sweet and hot. :) Can't wait for your next update.

Author's Response: Hope you enjoy the last two chapters of this part. There will be two sequels and a epilogue! Look for the new story in about 2 weeks.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 5: Interventions

I'm glad the Buffy woke up and could talk herself; Angel didn't believe Spike anyway. He should have but at last he believed Buffy. (Fun when Buffy knew about Angel's secrets from Dawn.)

Author's Response: I agree. Dawn can be a gossip sometimes but it sure did pay off here and as for Angel, I don't think he would ever leave Buffy alone until she herself finally told him go away. Even then it's a tad bit iffy if he were to listen.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2009 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 4: Just a Patrol

So Anya told Dawn - but Dawn didn't talk to Spike yet or I missed it. I feared first that Angel (assuming it was him) would arrive when Spike was on patrol but Angel still has to drive to Sunnydale so he should arrive soon.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: It didn't happen yet. It's coming up in the update. (To be honest, I had sort of skipped that part and forgot about it or something in my original writing but in the new chapters, it's all taken care of. Thanks so much for your chapter by chapter interactions. It helps me stay on track with the story and fill in gaps I don't always see.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2009 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Shock of the Truth

Spike didn't lie, he just told some unpleasant truth for the Scoobies. And showed how much he knows about Buffy. But that doesn't seem to lead to chances (of the Scoobies).
No, it got worse - it sounds to me that Xander called Angel now. The only good thing is that Anya noticed. And it seems that she is helpful again. Hopefully Spike will get a warning.

Author's Response: So true! Anya is a good person sometimes and tries to do the right thing! The Scoobies needed to hear that. It was much overdue!

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