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Reviewer: immortalangel08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 - 04:41 am Title: You brought me...homework?

This was such a good chapter and I loved how Spike is so protective over Buffy. Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 - 11:17 pm Title: You brought me...homework?

Great chapter!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 - 08:39 pm Title: You brought me...homework?

It has its advantage to have an old vamp helping you with your history homework. ;))
Good to see an update on this one.

Reviewer: fyreburned (Kara) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 - 08:29 pm Title: You brought me...homework?

Very interesting. I'm interested in watching this one develop. You've got Spike's voice down well. Gotta love Joyce when she's determined! Glad to see somebody finally address the hyena issue! Will be looking forward to more of this!
~~Kara

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 - 06:18 pm Title: You brought me...homework?

Great chapter. I love how involved and protective Spike is- its cute.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 - 10:34 am Title: You brought me...homework?

Hello. I like the story and I would like to read the end of it, so please keep writimg and update as soon as you can. Bye.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 - 07:01 am Title: You brought me...homework?

Love Willow keeping her up to date on her schoolwork all things considered. And Spike has certainly become in involved member of her recovery. Certainly something Joyce should look into. Love their growing bond. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2009 - 01:23 pm Title: Confessions of a teenage rapist

I must have missed the last chapter, oh well. Good update. I always thought Xanders actions should have been discussed more. Love Joyce too. Good job.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2009 - 10:01 pm Title: Confessions of a teenage rapist

Hope Xander isn't planning anything against Spike!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2009 - 09:20 pm Title: Confessions of a teenage rapist

Xander sounded as if he was honest but that: His eyes flashed once they were low enough for the others not to notice. makes me doubt that.

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2009 - 07:23 pm Title: Confessions of a teenage rapist

Another great chapter.
Annd THANK YOU! You cannot understand how much 'The Pavk' bothered me. Xander tried to rape Buffy, even if it was under the influence, but he was a coawrd and pretended he didn't remember. There was no resolution there, and it was never brought up again. That irked me- I like resolution.
Anyway, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2009 - 04:40 pm Title: Confessions of a teenage rapist

Hello. I like this story, so PLEASE keep writing and updating as soon as you can. I hope for a happy endind for our favorite couple. Bye.

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2009 - 06:23 am Title: Confessions of a teenage rapist

I loved Joyce's reaction to finding out and I loved her putting her foot down and Spike being his over protective self. Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2009 - 05:31 am Title: Confessions of a teenage rapist

Thanks for the update, Jake. :)

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2009 - 05:02 am Title: Home Run

Waiting for this chapter, enjoyed it, look forward to more.

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 10:34 pm Title: Home Run

This story is great so far. I've never seen any story where the truce went with a claim.
How come I'm having the feeling that Xander is going to make an ass of himself? It is what he does best after all.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 10:22 pm Title: Home Run

Another point driven home chapter! Love it! I'm glad Buffy finally sees the difference. This is what pissed me off most about the Buffy verse. Anyway...

So if it is a full fledged claim there will be telepathy? Hmmm wonders about that lol.

I LOVE your Joyce and her active role in the acceptance of Spike and Buffy and the fact he is family. I am silently wondering about Giles intentions...hmmm Oh I am so loving this! Can't wait for you to update! Oh pretty please!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 10:16 pm Title: One Weird Vampire

I loved this fluffiness after an angsty chapter! First off I loved the edge to Buffy when Alex was in the room. Ha she called Spike on his obvious approval of nurse. Love it!

I love how you have Spike unconsciously step into the role of boyfriend and tell her what for about Angel/us. Bringing up so obviously true. I get the no soul thing but still it's not like having the soul is all with the good having. Love how you have this pointed out.

The slips Spike says were funny as hell. I love them! On to the next chappie! Hugs for great fluffiness!

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 10:10 pm Title: Becoming

Had to come in and review for this. Taking a minor breakage from washing dishes lol.

The horrorific feeling was very vivid for me. The fact she was wishing to die is something I believe most rape victims while admist this pain - whether young or older - crave this at that time. The strength you have for this sort of horrific vivid imagery astounds me. The strength it gives those to do the same for themselves to write this type of horror is amazing and heartfelt. This I saw as the ultimate evil. Even hearing Angel's past I truly felt he was the evil incarnate himself. Dru is proof. Vamps tho evil for the killing I don't think I could even count that. The torture and horror is something I would count and this is just something I could never grasp with Spike. Where was the terror? I saw attempted evil and just being a predator but still...Ok rant over lol.

I love how you included a partial claim - though for assistance/ownership. Interesting. Makes ya wonder if she had done this would Spike have been tied to her, but later died when she jumped? Hmmm okay over thinking that lol. Typical Xander and I want to say typical Giles too on to review second chapter! Love this story!!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 02:12 pm Title: Home Run

Glad Joyce set down ground rules for the Scoobies. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 12:35 pm Title: Home Run

Claims are fictional anyway but could it be that they can't communicate because the claim is one-sited?
Loved Joyce's talk (rules). Xander has to get over himself and really accept it.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 08:06 am Title: Home Run

Lovely tender scene between Buffy and Spike. And way to go Joyce!

Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 07:25 am Title: Home Run

Aw poor Buffy. Love how her and Spike interacted. Seriously leave the poor girl alone already. They're gonna send you away for character abuse lol. *hugs*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 - 12:34 am Title: One Weird Vampire

awww he's a fluffer LMAO.. update soon, please :)

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 - 12:27 am Title: Becoming

Poor Buffy, I feel so bad for her. Am off to the next chapter...

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