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Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2009 - 02:50 am Title: Chapter Six

heehee Love this story, Ned is lovable. Bad willow, naughty Dawn.. but working thru her problems YAY!

Author's Response: Hee, glad you liked! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2009 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter Six

lol Ned singing The Sound of Music was so funny :D I'm nervous about Willow doing more magic too, hope nothing gets screwed up... But yay for Buffy admitting to Dawn that she has feelings for Spike! I liked the scene between Buffy and Dawn, the sisters really needed to have that talk.

Looking forward to more! *Hugs*

Author's Response: I think if only Buffy had talked to someone a little earlier on in the season, things might have been different.... thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2009 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter Six

Great chappie. Thanks for updating.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Six

Enjoying! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter Six

*lol* Funny with Ned singing SoM. I'm glad D told B it's ok for her to be with Spike. Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to think of a completely random song for Ned to sing :D Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Six

Enjoying your story so far. I love the dialogue. You have written Buffy quite well. I also like the conversation with Dawn - very nice, too bad it didn't actually happen!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're emjoying it :) I find the dialogue the easiest part to write, so I'm happy you like. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: elfbwillow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter Six

Now I can't get Sound of Music out of my head!! :D Another great chapter and loving Ned even more! I want an invisable friend like him!!

Looking forward to more updates - I hope this is going to be a many chapter fic :)

Author's Response: Hehe glad you liked! It'd certainly be interesting to have a friend like him! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Sharon :)

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Six

LOL at Ned singing The Sound of Music. And Willow is really annoying, Buffy should throw her out. She's abusing magic and is arrogant about it. UGH. I liked Dawn and Buffy's convo, at least Buffy knows what's going on now. ITA with Dawn , it's her life nobody should tell her what to do.

Good chappie, can't wait for the next one. :)

Author's Response: Hehe, I tried to think of the randomest song possible and came up with SoM! Willow just doesn't learn... glad you liked the Buffy and Dawn convo, that was the hardest part for me to write. Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Six

How Willow tried to handle the earrings situation is another sign how addicted she is to magic. Ned tries the right thing but using the wrong way to stop her using it.
So it was Dawn... the other won't be pleased to know this fact but glad to get their stuff back.

Author's Response: Willow just doesn't want to listen to reason at this point in time. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter Six

Dawn sure is acting like a little kid.. with all the attention needing.. and everything..
Willow still going on strong with the magic.. not good.
Enjoyed the update :)
Now, please continue. I'm ready to read more.

Author's Response: Well, I took her wanting the attention and the kleptomania from the show, but I think she does redeem herself a little by the end of this chapter :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Five

Now that is more like how an Imaginary Frined should be.
Truly helping out, with the job and especially the social services.
And the hotness that is Spike.. in bed.. naked..

Author's Response: Yes, Ned's definitely making himself useful! Spike in bed naked is a nice image, huh? ;) Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Four

Enjoyed the chapter :)
It's good that Buffy decided to tell Spike about the Imaginary Friend. And even better that Spike took it so well and actually knows they are real.
And he's staying for dinner :)

Author's Response: She needed to tell someone, or she'd have gone crazy :D Thanks for reviewing, glad you liked!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter Three

Imaginary friends are supposed to me friendly and not mean.. and he's only causing more trouble for Buffy..
loved the chapter.

Author's Response: I'd say Ned was more mischevous than mean. Glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2009 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter Five

Aww! Loved the chapter! More! *lol*

Author's Response: Thanks, Pet! More will be up (hopefully!) soon :D

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2009 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter Five

I always wondered why the doublemeat... Love the story and Ned and dud, nekid Spike *drool*, am looking forward to updates, soon please!

Author's Response: Hee, everyone loves the nekid Spike :P Thanks for reading and for the review!

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2009 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter Five

Yay for Buffy getting a job! I always wondered why the writers of the show didn't have her do something like trainer or self-defense instructor - cos hello? lol That would be perfect for her :)

And - oh my - what a lovely scene you painted in the crypt *drools* I could see it in my mind's eye, and I thank you for that heehee :P Nice, sweet Spuffy moment there at the end too :D

Loved it, Xaph! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Yup, that kind of job would have been better than the doublemeat lol.. hehe couldn't help myself with the naked Spike ogling :P Glad you're enjoying still and thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2009 - 12:12 am Title: Chapter Five

Looks like the Spike situation is getting better. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Definitely getting better :) Thanks for readindg and reviewing!

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Five

I like how she is so drooling at the sight of nekkid Spike!

Author's Response: Hee, thanks! Glad you're enjoying.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter Five

Heh... Ned was a social worker? So the visit went better than I feared.
I've read that before, Buffy working in a gym or something similar. It seems so logical to search a job like that, this one is perfect for Buffy. It was a bad idea to work at the Doublemeat.
And it tells a lot that Buffy wanted to tell Spike about her new job first. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I've seen the Buffy working in a gym thing before and it makes a lot of sense, so I used it here. Definitely says a lot that Buffy wanted Spike to know. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 09:01 pm Title: Chapter Five

Heehee yay! Ned was able to take over for Mrs. I'm-a-bitch-from-hell-slay-me-now. I'm glad that they are settled.

Yay for Buffy's job too, and the telling of it to Spike. I love the end, how she was just so incredibly sweet to him. I loved it.

Great chapter! Update soon =P *hugs*

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks Chan! I'm glad you're enjoying :) The Spike/Buffy relationship in early s6 was sweet, pity it got so messed up. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter Five

OMG I loved it. Good on Ned , he's really helping her. And she so should have gotten a job like this on the show. Good for Buffy for noticing the hotness that is Spike.,was she blind or something ? Sheesh...
Thank you for the YUMMMY NAKED Spike visual. MMMM.

Great story, more soon please! :D

Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad you liked it (and the naked Spike image haha!) Thanks for reading and reviewing, AMI!

Reviewer: Elfbwillow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter Five

Still loving it!! Loving Ned and naked spike! Cant wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Hee, we all love naked Spike :P Glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for the review Sharon!

Reviewer: elfbwillow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 08:04 pm Title: Chapter Four

Yay more great chapters! And Buffy asking Spike for dinner - I like! :D Still loving it!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Sharon! Glad you're liking :)

Reviewer: Jake Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Five

LOVED IT!!! This just keeps getting better with every chapter. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying :) Hopefully the next update won't be too far away.

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Two

I read the first two chapters and it seems really good. I like the idea of Buffy having an imaginary friend :D

Unfortunaltely I don't have time to read more right now but hopefully I will soon.
And At least when I have time to read more I know I have a fun story to read :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and I hope you continue to do so when you come back to it :)

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