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Reviewer: floweredonion Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2009 - 02:17 pm Title: Do fairy tales exist?

Great story. Can't wait to read more and am really looking forward to the Buffy/Spike introduction. Awesome job!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2009 - 01:58 am Title: Do fairy tales exist?

Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2009 - 10:02 pm Title: Do fairy tales exist?

I like the start. Should be fun to watch Buffy fight all the way. *g*
(And having a beta never hurts a story.)
Hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: Jake Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2009 - 03:31 pm Title: Do fairy tales exist?

Good start but please consider getting a beta reader. Most of this was hard to read through as I had to guess at what you were implying, that and there are too many grammatical issues to mention.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2009 - 02:10 pm Title: Do fairy tales exist?

i see this is your first story, so i'm not going to be rude and put you off, but you seriously need a beta reader, there are too many mistakes that can be distracting for the readers. and also, it's oz, not ox, not sure if you meant to do that, or if it was just a mistake, but i figured i would point it out, just something to think about, this story has a lot of potential.

Reviewer: Tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2009 - 01:41 pm Title: Do fairy tales exist?

Awesome. cant wait for more.

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