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Reviewer: Ito Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2021 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter 10

I am for little Bad Giles for begenning but he accept for love of Buffy and Angel Bad I lik Angel but i think of he jealousy and he beconing Angelus Sorry for english but dont my talent

Reviewer: Bonnie Gillett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2021 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter 10

are you going to finish this story

Reviewer: fanger22 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2018 - 07:54 pm Title: One

What??? That's it?? Great fic but desperately needs an update and conclusion. Wonderful writing!

Reviewer: mace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2017 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 10

Great story but why is it listed as complete? Good work ust needs a couple more chapters.

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Date: 09/30/2012 - 06:19 pm Title: Three

This is so fluffy and sweet. I just love it. I like your addition to the usual claim thing. The only way they can die is to be beheaded. I like that; never heard it before.

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Date: 09/21/2012 - 01:45 am Title: Two

This is going to be a wonderful story, I can already tell. This is how season six should have gone. What were those writers thinking?!

The only thing is I wished it went into more about how everyone reacted to the news. I can imagine Xander doing one of those, "Buffy you're possessed. He's a monster."

Spike is such a romantic and Buffy is so sweet. I loved how you made everything so happy.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2012 - 01:41 am Title: One

Awesome! Buffy is going to tell her friends about her and Spike. Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 09/03/2010 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter 10

just found this today. really liked it. hope there is no bad guy, but angel bashing is a go. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. There won't be any bad guy as I have trouble with writing fight scenes. If you like Angel bashinh, I suggest you look out forr my next update to my fic Something True. there will be Angel bashing there.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2010 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 10

Just wanted to say that it has been a nice story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, look out for the sequel.

Reviewer: sus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2010 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 10

I love your storyline. And for the bad guy, I don't like any of them but if I had to chose, I would say that Angel was the baddest of the two of them.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I've got a list of ideas and it all depends on how the muse feeds me.

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2010 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 10

I love this story. The way you express your characters in your writing is so heartfelt and sincere. I love the way the emotions are described through the narrative flow. I can't wait to see how the story turns. Hmmm...I see that Angel is making a remarkable ass out of himself as always. Now the question is, will the absent protective father figure Giles whom Buffy trusts and loves dearly follow in Angel's footsteps and make an ass out of himself as well? Hmmm...I'm thinking no. Buffy is going through so much right now and certainly doesn't need that to stress her out even more. I am so tired of Angel and Xander's s##t. I mean for real. Angel's holier than thou attitude and Xander's gee I'm getting married to an ex vengeance demon and have mucked up too many times too count and am still obsessed with Buffy who I can't ever have? Pathetic much? Well, hopefully, Xander will have to learn to deal. Maybe Angel will be dusted in this one? LOL. Yeah, Spuffy fan here. Or maybe Angel will see the light and be the grandfather to the twins since he is Dru's sire and part of the Aurelius line? I wonder what will happen with that and how Dru will react once the claim is taking place? Giles would make a great godfather or maybe even take care of the twins for them. I know too much review, but I love your story and I am so excited with the way it stopped. I look forward to the next chapter and hope to read your other story as well. Good luck with school. Don't know how you can do everything your doing all at once. Much smoochies...Muah.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, this has been the most in depth review I've had for any of my fics as I have a few on fanfiction.net under the pen name basket-case1880. Thank you for your ideas for the next part in the series. I had no true idea of what to do, really, but I do know I will now include Dru in some form, will ask for more ideas when the time comes for her to make an appearance. The way I cope with school, real life and fanfics is insomnia, when I can't sleep I write.

Reviewer: Nana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2010 - 05:22 am Title: One

I just read your story for the first time - it's very good. I like you cliff hanger ending, makes me want more. I hope real life gets better for you soon. I will wait patiently until you start the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks. If you like episode rewrite type stories, I've got a Something Blue rewrite called Something True. It's still a WIP, but I will be focusing more on it for the moment as it was my first Spuffy fic I began posting.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2010 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter 10

Awe so Buffy having twins is now confirmed.
Enjoyed the update, I'm not sure yet if I'd take Angel or Giles to be the bad one.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. If I don't get much response to my options on here when I repost this on fanfiction.net I will create a poll for readers to decide. If not, I'll just write what comes to me.

Reviewer: spike_lizard Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2010 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 10

i think both cause angel would not be there unless someone didn't call him and giles and him at the same time

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As said in a previous chapter, Xander called Giles in lieu of Willow. Xander's intentions were entirely dishonourable when he called, but I'm still contemplating whether Giles' intentions are of the good or the bad. Angel found out through a vision sent to Cordy by the Powers That Be, but that will be explained in the next part.

Reviewer: Nana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2010 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 9

This is the first time I have read your story, it is really good and has a solid foundation. I really enjoy the family stories along with baby fics. Who will be the bad guys I am wondering? I am looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, it's always good to see new readers. I'm thinking of bringing Giles and Angel into the story to play alongside Xander against Buffy being with Spike. Just have to see where my typing takes me.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2010 - 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 9

Enjoyed the update - sweet family time. When the babies are there, they'll be a lot more busier.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Once again, I apologise for the huge gap in updates, semester B of my second year was tough but things should be a lot smoother 'til about September when I go into third year and start the actual degree course.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 - 10:50 pm Title: Eight

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 - 09:45 pm Title: Eight

Fun when Spike found the pics. Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm about halfway through the next chapter, but my coursework is building up, so it might be a while

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 - 08:44 pm Title: Eight

Giles bashing. I prefer when a story keeps Angel a nice guy. If you do a series have it end when Giles at the doorstep. great way to get people to read your next story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I've had a vote for each side, so it all depends on what road my inspiration takes me. I'm like the Robert Frost poem 'TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not travel both And be one traveler, long I stood And looked down one as far as I could To where it bent in the undergrowth'

Reviewer: Laur Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 - 03:36 pm Title: Eight

Great chapter..can't wait for more....

GILES AND ANGEL BASHING!!!!! The fact he even THOUGHT and DID called Angel is just wrong.....

Author's Response: Thank you. That will be my first priority when writing the sequel to this fic.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2009 - 09:42 pm Title: Seven

Poor Buffy! I guess having twins was a bit too much information for her at the moment! More please!

Author's Response: I'm planning the final chapter of this part to be the next one as it's where Giles arrives, so I need some time to work out the angst for the confontation with Giles. Which is why I've decided to make that chapter the first of the next part in the 'Happy Family' series.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2009 - 08:57 pm Title: Seven

Awe, twins? That's a surprise. Than they can indeed use both names. :D
As for italics: TSR uses 'normal' HTML codes, just like LJ. See here

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. I've managed to fix the fault now.

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 05:44 am Title: Six

yuck! disgusting! please dont elaborate on the cravong !!!! lol
love the story!
cant wait for chappie 7!!!


Author's Response: Thanks. I don't think I will elaborate. The next chappie should be up within the week. Sorry in advance if it's not, internet connection is going to be dodgy by the end of the week.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2009 - 04:31 pm Title: Six

Xander is always causing trouble! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm thinking of bringing this part to an end soon. Making part 2 to be round about the birth and part 3 the mating and wedding.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2009 - 12:02 pm Title: Six

Oh such a spoilsport. Xander had to tell Giles. I hope only good things will come out of it (not sure how Giles will react).
*shudders* As long as Buffy likes what she eats. *gg*
PS: I think you didn't close the tag right for the italics after Spike's note, it's sill italic.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm still trying to get round the whole italics problem, don't know how to get it out of italics.

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