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Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2010 - 01:01 am Title: 8

I'm so happy to see a new chapter of this story. I really want to know what happens next!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 04:29 am Title: 7

I'm too sleepy right now to leave a long review. Just wanted to say that I caught up with the last few chapters of this story. All I can say is that you are one very talented writer. I love all the details. This is a very well written story. I especially loved this chapter. You felt Spike's pain here. You felt Spike's passion here. Great chapter. I may need to reread it again when I'm less sleepy.

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 01:17 am Title: 7

What a well written chapter. I could feel Spike's despair and frustration. I'm happy that he's trying, at least, and not giving up.

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2009 - 12:35 am Title: 7

This is by far your best chapter yet...you are a wonderful writer - very richly detailed. Please keep her classy and him passionate and of course TOGETHER not like the horrible ending we got from the series! Thank you!

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2009 - 01:12 am Title: 6

I certainly didn't expect him. Gotta say I love all the interesting twists you keep tossing in this story.

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2009 - 03:54 pm Title: 6

Brilliantly written so far, can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2009 - 09:42 am Title: 6

Travers is such a charmer!

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2009 - 02:36 pm Title: 5

I can see that this powerful weapon killed a lot of people. Or did it? Still troubled by a great many things though. What about this weapon gave Giles the idea that it could kill someone like Glory? And who took the weapon from the massacre and placed it whereever it is now?

Reviewer: LCF Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 - 06:50 am Title: 5

First off, enjoying the hell out of this! (there just aren't enough POV fics with Spike, IMHO) Hmm... trouble w/ Brits upon landing, eh? Methinks Giles has a hidden agenda for The Big Bad: Say he prevails - An "evil, soulless vampire has a terrible weapon..! {insert sissy-like falsetto voice} Dust him!" Say he fails & dusts for having tried - "Oh! Terribly sorry, Buffy. Your strongest ally is gone - stiff upper lip dear, now hand over Dawn." ( that would be about Giles' speed, at this point... {hits Giles w/ a ball peen hammer repeatedly!} ) This looks to be one hell of a ride - can't wait to see what happens next!
LCF

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 - 11:49 pm Title: 5

Just started this fic and couldn't stop to review each chapter, too anxious to see what happened next! Typical Giles ploy to get Spike away from Buffy, particularly when Buffy didn't know anything about his 'quest'! Left him with the option of 'plausible deniability' if Spike shouldn't make it back. Spike scuppered that with his little visist to Buffy for the kiss goodbye! (loved the kiss/punch - so typical!) Stilll, not sure he would have been behind the pair of assassins, though. If he wanted to kill Spike he would have been able to do it easily enough 'cos of the chip!
Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2009 - 10:13 pm Title: 4

I loved the wistful, dream like feeling of this scene. I wish she could have made this same appearance in season seven. Beautifully written!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2009 - 09:51 pm Title: 3

You have me totally puzzled. I can't figure out what Giles and the Watchers have planned. Still loving every word though.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2009 - 09:31 pm Title: 2

I loved every word of this chapter. It was a perfectly crafted "Spuffy" love scene. LOL !!!!!!!!!! Leave it to Spike to make sure he had his kiss before he goes off on his romantic quest.
Sod Giles and his trying to get Spike out of town as quickly as possible. And speaking of Giles, I noticed Buffy didn't know anything about this Eowyn's Construct. My alarm bells are going off full blast.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2009 - 09:14 pm Title: 1

What's Giles up to? It sounds like a major sucker play but I don't get why Giles would do this now. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2009 - 09:05 pm Title: None

I just discovered this story today. I can't believe I've missed reading this. Your first chapter has sucked me in, so I'm going to race through the other chapters right now. Great start!

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2009 - 12:49 pm Title: 4

I like the dreamy cadence of this chapter.

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 - 07:55 pm Title: 4

O.K. - I'll continue with this only if Spike stays faithful in all ways ! Thanks -

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 04:41 pm Title: 3

Spike is smart enough to cope with the Council, thank goodness!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 02:08 am Title: 3

Thanks for replying back to my post. This story, your story, just inspired me to write so much. Loved the chapter of course. Something tells me it won't be easy for Spike to get this weapon. I guess I shall see.

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 07:26 pm Title: 3

LOVE IT....LOVE IT....Please don't be too long! Thanks...

Reviewer: YH Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2009 - 02:54 pm Title: 2

I loved the kiss and the punch and the warning to be careful. That's so Buffy and Spike.

Reviewer: Gentleviewer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2009 - 08:58 am Title: 2

What a great start, I'm intrigued already - write more soon please

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2009 - 03:20 am Title: 2

I am LOVING this!!!!!! You are developing these characters beautifully and true to what we wish we had gotten. Please don't wait too long between chapters...Thanks

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2009 - 12:32 am Title: 2

First, I want to say that I can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews. The first three chapters that I just read was awesome. You should have many many reviews. I was hooked on this story from the first chapter. I'm a Spuffy and though I love both Spike and Buffy. Spike is easily my favorite character . Sometimes I get in the mood to read Spuffy but Spike being the main focus. Everything about his character is fascinating to me. So many layers to the character of Spike. The thing about Spike is that he never had anything easy. He always had to prove himself to be worthy of those he was associated with. It seems there were times where Spike wanted to give up but he never did. Which is just one of the things I loved most about him. Spike did want to be a better man because he fell in love with Buffy. There is no doubt about that. But what I don't agree with is where a lot of writers do. Is that they make it seem like it was Buffy's doing. That Spike was a good vampire because Buffy made it so. Which to me makes all the hard work that Spike did become Buffy's glory. Where it should be Spike's glory. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say. It is like a person who is addicted to drugs. They meet a person that they want to change for. They fight the addiction to get off drugs. So, while I agree that the person might be the reason why they fought to get off drugs. They are not the ones who did all the work on getting off drugs. That glory should be the one who fought the addiction and beat it. Not to the person who was the reason why somebody wanted to get off drugs. Cause no matter what, it is up to the person who has the addiction that had to decide for themselves that they want help. I guess this story got me hooked because it seems to be about the Spike that I loved and adored. The Spike that will do anything to prove that he is worthy of being loved or cared about and that he will do anything for the ones that he loves. Even if they don't love him or cared much about him at all. The scoobies treated Spike badly but when they needed help who did they go to. Buffy did that as well. Made me dislike the scoobies sometimes. Just like Giles in this chapter. Spike's girls are in trouble so of course he is going. I apologize for writing so much. It was your writing that made me want to. I hope that you plan on finishing this. I will hate to see this story be one of the ones that don't get finish. I hope that you get more reviews as well because this story should.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you for all your support. I'm glad that the story inspired you to leave such a lengthy review and I have to say that I agree with you wholeheartedly about the Scoobies treatment of Spike on the show. Buffy may have provided Spike with a reason to be good, but the work was all his. I've always considered him to be a self-made reformed vamp. Don't worry, I plan on finishing this story and I already have it outlined. I can only hope that what comes will continue to inspire responses like yours. Once again, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 - 09:33 pm Title: 1

O.K. - I'm loving this one....Please remember how much we want them together and what a HUGE disappointment the series was in the end.Looking forward to more!

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