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Reviewer: Sintares Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 7 Surprise

I love both your stories, and looking forward to both sequels (and some Angel bashing in the other.. hehe)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2010 - 04:17 pm Title: Prologue

I liked the premise of your story and I hope you can write a sequel.

My only concern is that you need a beta reader, they not only help with grammar but can brainstorm you with ideas that will help with the pacing and timing of the story.

I felt this rushed and somehow I was left to fill some blanks in your story.

One last thing, in chapter 2 you mentioned that Buffy and her daughter's passports were cleared when they arrived to Sunnydale. I thought that Americans didn't need passports to move from one point (Boston) to another location within the country (LA/Sunnydale).

Keep writing! Time and practice will pay off for you. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you felt this way, but I felt I had to skip somethings so I could get to the point that from a simple mistake like a spell can blossom something true like love. As for the passport thing, I live in Scotland and have never been to America, so I don't know the travel protocols. Also, I have never been on a plane and thus don't even know the protocols for UK domestic flights. I am practicing more and on fandoms from UK shows, so it will be next year before there will be any sequels for Spuffy fics.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2010 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 7 Surprise

I liked the way it ended - but I wouldn't mind a sequel.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. There will be a sequel, although the review for Older But Closer Together will come first.

Reviewer: Nova Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2010 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 7 Surprise

very interesting, wouldn't mind reading a sequel

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. There will be a sequel, although the review for Older But Closer Together will come first.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2010 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 7 Surprise

A nice ending.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2010 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter 7 Surprise

enjoyed your story. a sequel would be very much of the good!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. There will be a sequel, although the review for Older But Closer Together will come first.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2010 - 01:50 am Title: Welcome To Sunnydale

enjoyed

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2010 - 01:46 am Title: Prologue

enjoyed

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: RKM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2010 - 02:56 am Title: Welcome To Sunnydale

enjoying it so far - liking that while the spell broke, buffy didn't resume her hatred of him (and apparently it didn't for spike, either ...) looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

this is a very interesting story line and I think you should keep it. hope your exams go well.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

It's nice.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

Please keep writing! You've got a good start on plot and I like your characterizations. Your conversations are natural sounding, and they help the story flow. Look for a good beta reader: not one who will just look for spelling or grammar mistakes. Find someone you're comfortable with, and bounce ideas around. You've got a good start here. I look forward to reading this story, and all the others you'll write in the future.

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I have got another fic on this ssite called Older but Closer Together, and as the title suggests, it is an alternative storyline to Older and Far Away. That is just the first part in the series and is almost finished though and I hope to wait to work on the next part until I had this finished so look out for updates for both.

Reviewer: spike_lizard Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

keep going please

Author's Response: I will, thanks. May be September before I update next, though.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

Please keep this story. I enjoy reading it and you can't leave it on a cliffhanger. Good luck on your exams.

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement, I'll keep going but it may be September before I update next.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2010 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

Good to see an update for this one again - but please don't delete it, let it sit here till you can work on it again.
Good luck for your exams.

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement. I'm currently working on the last chapter of Older but Closer Together and then I can focus more on this and plan the sequel to Older.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2010 - 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

Please update as soon as you can. I hope that they send Angel away. I don't like him.

Author's Response: I don't like Angel much either, but he is required in the fic as he is Connor's father and will help explain some things. But don't worry, there is going to be some Angel bashing coming up.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 4 & Chapter 5

I liked the update; all in all it went well. Now I'm looking forward to Giles' answer.

Author's Response: Yeah, busy working on it, but my main interest is finishing my next chapter of older. Hopefully I will have it posted for this weekend.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 - 11:31 am Title: Chapter 4 & Chapter 5

Well done, the story is reading much better now you're filling in the details a bit more and including some conversation. So... now's the time to reveal that Angel & Cordy are living at the mansion and that Angel is Connor's father? Right?

Author's Response: That's right. Might not be the next chapter I post but within the next few chapters definately.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2009 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 4 & Chapter 5

It's good that Buffy will be moving back to Sunnydale. More please!

Author's Response: Yeah, things are looking up for Buffy, Spike and Katie-Beth.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2009 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 4 & Chapter 5

Hello. i like the story, so please keep writing and update as soon as you can. Sorry if I don't write more, but I don't know what to say, just that I hope for a happy end. Bye.

Author's Response: As I've said, I will try to update soon, but I have writer's block on both my fics and I'm starting my 2nd year at uni on the 21st so, RL is going to be hectic.

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2009 - 11:50 pm Title: Prologue

It's a very interesting and promising start, but it felt very rushed and almost like you were going down some checklist. A little bit more details and development would make this even better. I hope it was written this way because it's a prologue, I would be very disappointed if the other chapters were written in the same rushed manner.

Author's Response: I know it's rushed to start with, but I have slowed it down in later chapters. This was my first overall fanfic I was sure about, although it was my second post.

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2009 - 09:52 pm Title: Old Friends and New Meetings (Part 1)

mm.. i nice chapter!


Author's Response: Thank you. I've also got another AU fic/episode rewrite. It's called Older But Closer Together. From the title, I guess you know what episode it is a rewrite of.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2009 - 04:14 pm Title: Old Friends and New Meetings (Part 1)

Really love this! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. In accordance to your review of Older But Closer Together, Xander will be causing trouble here soon.

Author's Response: Thanks. In accordance to your review of Older But Closer Together, Xander will be causing trouble here soon.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2009 - 10:53 am Title: Old Friends and New Meetings (Part 1)

Hello. Please keep writing. I like this story very much. Bye.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2009 - 10:12 am Title: Old Friends and New Meetings (Part 1)

Oh neat, having The Ring for Spike. He can use it especially with a little child. Well not so little any more because Buffy was away. And giving Spike the chance to watch a new child grow up from the begin.
Ah Scoobies. I hope it will go well, this meeting.

Author's Response: Thanks. But knowing Xander, things will be tricky.

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