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Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2009 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter XVI

awww so sweet, and hoping its not all over once Liam finds out.

Am guessing Breakfast at Tiffany's :D

You are doing a fine job on this fic and more people should be reading and reviewing *flicks them*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2009 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter XV

LMAO! Buffy in the next room moaning while daddy cant wait to call her! hahahaha off to read the next chapter. I am loving this, and this chap was steamy as well as loving. Well done!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter XVI

*phew* Tragedy avoided. Liam doesn't suspect a thing. As for the movie - listen here or here :)
I love that song.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 - 06:01 pm Title: Chapter XV

Oh... two chapters :)
*phew* When I've read Liam was there I feared he would discover who the female was....

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter XIV

awww its fate I tell ya! what a touching story, looking forward to more!


Author's Response: aaww :) thank you! yes more is on the way!

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter XIII

good plan :) Sounds like our duo are in for a few days of sexy fun!

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Date: 10/03/2009 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter XII

sneaky Buffy, and wow that apartment seems cool. Cant wait to see whats behind curtain number 1!

Author's Response: haha yes! its based on a real apartment too! i almost fainted when i saw it! the balcony's even cooler! :)

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter XI

yummy tubby scene, loved it!

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Date: 10/03/2009 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter X

Xaph makes the most beautiful banners!

Vacation with Faith must be postponed. No doubt about it.

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 - 12:42 pm Title: Chapter IX

*pants* that was steamy :P Loved the comparison to the photo too. another chapter, well done!

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Date: 10/03/2009 - 12:36 pm Title: Chapter VIII

*sigh* Spuffy love makes me all warm inside. I loved this chapter. Well Done.

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Date: 10/03/2009 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter VII

*stands and claps* MMM Buffy is a lucky lady, and it looks like theres more to come! *bounces off to read more*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter VI

good advice :) No, go work on getting your man, Buffy.

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Date: 10/03/2009 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter V

OMG! How could she break that moment?! off to read more!

Author's Response: YES I KNOW! I thought exactly the same thing :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2009 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter XIV

Too bad that the age difference is so big; people will only give them trouble or call Spike a pervert (because he saw Buffy grew up). Not sure how Liam will take it.
~ Till next time.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2009 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter XIII

Hopefully Buffy is right about Faith not telling. With Spike having to work Buffy wouldn't have a lot of time to spend with him anyway. Bad timing. ;)

Author's Response: not to worry, faith wont be saying a word :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2009 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter XII

I tried to find the chapter where I stopped reading and was confused; your numbers are wrong at the moment. It's X, XI, XII etc.; your twelve is 17, you have a V too much. Same with VXIII, that should be XIII. ;) But I found the chapter were I left of. *g*

Buffy takes a lot of clothes *g*
Awe and there I've feared that they would be separated for quite some time. Sneaky Buffy.

Author's Response: oh my goodness! YES thank you so much for telling me about my chapter numbers! those roman numerals can be quite tricky! i had this feeling that something wasn't right! thanks so much!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2009 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter XI

What a hot bubble bath. :)
My my question wasn't answered but I can guess better now what stands FL for? Is that for Florida?

Author's Response: yes :) florida! thanks for reading!

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter IV

still lovin it :) great so far! off to read more!

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter III

mmm yummy dream! off to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2009 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter X

A key... they way William acted (on a chain) it means something.
Well it won't definitely not be easy for them.
BTW what means FL ?

Author's Response: hehe you'll find out in the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter IX

Last chapter here (and a pretty banner).
And indeed good to read here because I can't make the font bigger @EF. It's something wrong there so I'll wait patiently for the next two chapters and more.
Buffy and Xander? A pairing I avoid...
Very hot again. *fingers crossed* for them. Because things won't be easy.

Author's Response: I generally avoid Buffy/Xander pairings too! but i couldn't think of anyone else. actually, now that i think of it i could have just made up a character! but at the time it was either xander or riley. and i cant stand riley at all. so xander it was :) thank you so much for all of your comments! i'll be sure to keep updating here for you :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter VIII

Yeah I don't think it will be easy for Liam to understand that his daughter and his friend are together. But I'm just guessing.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter VII

Hot... hope they won't regret it. And William made one dream (fantasy) of his come true.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter VI

Hadn't expected Buffy to throw him out. Good that I can read on.

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