Date: 10/01/2013 - 06:09 pm Title: 2
So stinkin' hot. Could be longer! Some word/spelling errors.
Date: 08/31/2010 - 03:20 pm Title: 2
Great for a first fic. Very well done. I loved the whole seduction bookstore scene. Great job!!
Date: 09/13/2009 - 11:17 am Title: 2
Love the 5 minute warning - really excellent story, thanks
Date: 09/13/2009 - 11:10 am Title: 1
Wow!!!That was amazingly hot and I cannot believe that was your first fanfic!
Well done and wow again!
Date: 09/06/2009 - 07:26 am Title: 2
For a first fic, I think you did wonderfully! I would never have known it was your first if you hadn't said. Love the scenes, they made my toes curl in such a good way. I would love to read more!
Date: 09/05/2009 - 11:39 am Title: 2
Are you sure it's your first? WOW, awesome job
Date: 09/04/2009 - 11:14 pm Title: 2
Loved it! You should definitely make a sequel. I wouldn't have know this was your first fic.
Date: 09/04/2009 - 05:41 am Title: 2
Fire and fire...awesome...it was engrossing...you can write teh sex
Date: 09/04/2009 - 05:32 am Title: 1
crap..that was hooottt. Normally, it's hard to get involved into a PWP right away because you want some character development, but you strike up just the right mood.
Date: 09/03/2009 - 01:34 am Title: 2
Wow, Holycow!!! for your 1st fanfic, not bad! Look forward to reading more of your work!
Date: 09/03/2009 - 12:37 am Title: 2
I'd say you did an excellent job on your first fic! There are incorrect words but other than that, great job!
Date: 09/02/2009 - 08:51 pm Title: 2
The second chapter was hot too. Good for your first fanfic.
*still wonders why Buffy reacts to William like she is drawn to him by force*
Date: 09/02/2009 - 03:26 am Title: 2
Oh. my. god. Have to change my knickers now.... :D
Date: 09/02/2009 - 02:52 am Title: 2
OMG THAT WAS HOT. wow I have no words that was just amazing.
Date: 09/01/2009 - 08:17 pm Title: 2
I thought it was pretty good for a first fic. It was nice and hot and sexy. Some grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing major. I loved their sudden relationship and that it looks like they really like each other. :) Sometimes it's just nice to have some nice hot, fluffy smut!
btw...it says it's finished, but it's not marked that way. You should check that.=)
Good job!!
Date: 09/01/2009 - 12:06 pm Title: 2
Well, hot little Buffy.. enjoyed
Date: 08/31/2009 - 08:55 pm Title: 1
Really loved it! Is there more?
Date: 08/31/2009 - 08:15 pm Title: 1
Wow! Awesome! I can't believe that was your first fanfic! I'll definately be on the lookouf for more of your work. Brilliant! :)
Date: 08/31/2009 - 05:44 pm Title: 1
I overlooked 'all human' first and wondered if Buffy was the slayer here, being in heat. Because it really sounded as if she was in heat here. Poor one. :)) Lucky for her she ran into William to 'scratch her itch'.
Is there more? Because it isn't marked as finished. And I wonder why Buffy reacted this way, would like to get to know why. ~ Not bad for your first fanfic (I saw only some minor typos).
Date: 08/31/2009 - 04:09 pm Title: 1
Not bad for your first fanfic..
Little Buffy definitely got her itch scratched..
Enjoyed..
Date: 08/31/2009 - 04:16 am Title: 1
I liked it a lot but I noticed some simple mistakes but othersise can't wait for more.
Date: 08/31/2009 - 03:10 am Title: 1
It got me aroused and throbbing.